MG FF: Mysterious lover. note PG14. new prlg - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mymaaneet

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Sorry for making you guys wait for so long
I was really very busy with my studies
Well now that m free for two weeks i have continued writting and will start giving updates from next month
And have changed the title from "ek ankahi dastaan" to " the myterious lover " and changed the concept a bit.
Hope to come up to your expectations if not please forgive me .

Love niki


cant even read what you have written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved the new prologue, continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
interesting start !! will be waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
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Holla kafi aacha surprise diya yaar i did'nt expect dis one dis sooner 😆 but i'm glad u made it... ek baar kaha bhi nahi dat u r updating again & i forgot dat u mentioned u r gonna change d concept coz dat'll b exciting 4 me also to read iss baar suspense rakhna...
N coming to d prologue i was actually shocked d way u wrote no one can ever say dis is ur 1st attempt congo yaar amazing work each n every line u ve wrote with perfection according to me superb dear... thanks 4 making urself free enough n giving updates... nw i wud say do update regularly😉😉
n abt dis geet i luv her yaar...
keep rocking...
btw agar maine PM by chance check nahi kiya hota toh i wud hav neva come to knw abt dis which i dont do regularly but i guess my 6th sense made me check dis...
thanks 4 d lovely surprise lolji...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthiruchs

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Holla kafi aacha surprise diya yaar i did'nt expect dis one dis sooner 😆 but i'm glad u made it... ek baar kaha bhi nahi dat u r updating again & i forgot dat u mentioned u r gonna change d concept coz dat'll b exciting 4 me also to read iss baar suspense rakhna...
N coming to d prologue i was actually shocked d way u wrote no one can ever say dis is ur 1st attempt congo yaar amazing work each n every line u ve wrote with perfection according to me superb dear... thanks 4 making urself free enough n giving updates... nw i wud say do update regularly😉😉
n abt dis geet i luv her yaar...
keep rocking...
btw agar maine PM by chance check nahi kiya hota toh i wud hav neva come to knw abt dis which i dont do regularly but i guess my 6th sense made me check dis...
thanks 4 d lovely surprise lolji...


Its no my work only arthi di has helped me a lot and for the prologue all the credit goes to her i had just scribbled something she gave it a new life
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
any possibility of a update???
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
its an interesting story...
waiting for more..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
I Just Came Across Your FF

Prologue - Its Hardcore and sad at the same time that a son sees how his father is lit up and burns to his death yet his father already tells him what he has to do and where and whom he needs to speak with .
Maan than takes his Daadima and siblings and leave his hometown to be in Delhi

Parts 1 - 2

The introduction to Geet was fabulous she is bold educated yet feisty
enjoys her life with friends but she holds a certain pain in her heart and she believes that love does not exist

Please do continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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are u ever gng 2 update????
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are u ever gng 2 update?//

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