The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 110

I can't believe it that I found one of those songs through your story which I have loved! Priyasi. I hadn't known the name or the singer but I loved those two phrases and the rhythm! ❤️

I loved and loved this chapter for the obvious reason! You already do know that I'm fond of this silent, supportive and caring Maan who won't talk much but who'll walk beside her like a shadow, who'll give her the shoulder to lean on when she needs yet he won't complain of not getting one back for himself! I just simply cannot say how much I loved him over here!

Even though this chapter had the anxiousness of reaching to a loved one who is in pain, I am glad that Maan was there and she, although didn't really reach out for his outstretched hand, she did somewhat accept his supportive stance, she did acknowledge the shoulder he provided. The most touching part for me was when she almost let go and leaned in his back to shed her tears, and Maan willing to do anything in his power to erase the pain she felt.

I'm not going to say a lot about this chapter because I feel I'm unable to do justice to how wonderful this chapter is and how much I loved it! Thanks for this one, Avi!

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I can't believe it that I found one of those songs through your story which I have loved! Priyasi. I hadn't known the name or the singer but I loved those two phrases and the rhythm! ❤️

I loved and loved this chapter for the obvious reason! You already do know that I'm fond of this silent, supportive and caring Maan who won't talk much but who'll walk beside her like a shadow, who'll give her the shoulder to lean on when she needs yet he won't complain of not getting one back for himself! I just simply cannot say how much I loved him over here!

Even though this chapter had the anxiousness of reaching to a loved one who is in pain, I am glad that Maan was there and she, although didn't really reach out for his outstretched hand, she did somewhat accept his supportive stance, she did acknowledge the shoulder he provided. The most touching part for me was when she almost let go and leaned in his back to shed her tears, and Maan willing to do anything in his power to erase the pain she felt.

I'm not going to say a lot about this chapter because I feel I'm unable to do justice to how wonderful this chapter is and how much I loved it! Thanks for this one, Avi!

Chapter 28: Running

You know, the title of this chapter is something I actually liked a lot. It portrays the content so well and in such different meanings. With the way Naintara used to run away from Dev first until she told him to stay away from her, and then missing his presence when he ran away from her... The two weren't actually running away from each other, it was from themselves that they ran from, it was from the fear of what they would let themselves in if they stayed together was what they ran from... One didn't want to be involved romantically for reasons of her own and the other didn't wish his ego to be more bruised than it already had. But alas, the saying that absence makes the heart grow fonder stays very true in the case of these two. She realised she missed him and he gave in when he was intoxicated. That was the most touching for me in this chapter: his defeat, his complain and his need to hear her say something to him, even if it was a death wish.

What came as a shocker was the sudden entry of a fiance who apparently wasn't even wanted. Even though I now know a lot more than I found out in this chapter, I'm still going to tell you that this chapter's end had me anxious for what was to happen!

Originally posted by: mayyo

Chapter 28: Running

You know, the title of this chapter is something I actually liked a lot. It portrays the content so well and in such different meanings. With the way Naintara used to run away from Dev first until she told him to stay away from her, and then missing his presence when he ran away from her... The two weren't actually running away from each other, it was from themselves that they ran from, it was from the fear of what they would let themselves in if they stayed together was what they ran from... One didn't want to be involved romantically for reasons of her own and the other didn't wish his ego to be more bruised than it already had. But alas, the saying that absence makes the heart grow fonder stays very true in the case of these two. She realised she missed him and he gave in when he was intoxicated. That was the most touching for me in this chapter: his defeat, his complain and his need to hear her say something to him, even if it was a death wish.

What came as a shocker was the sudden entry of a fiance who apparently wasn't even wanted. Even though I now know a lot more than I found out in this chapter, I'm still going to tell you that this chapter's end had me anxious for what was to happen!

Originally posted by: mayyo

^Mission successful! 😆

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thanks Mari🤗

It is weird that even thiugh you give me your comment when you proof the chapter, this means so much. It is a certificate from teacher😃

It's hardly a certificate from a teacher! And I don't actually "comment" when I proof. I have an almost bad habit of commenting in detail, so what I do when I proof is acknowledgment for me. 😆

Commenting is this - even though it is not like I would have wanted it to be! - and commenting here makes me feel better!

Originally posted by: mayyo

It's hardly a certificate from a teacher! And I don't actually "comment" when I proof. I have an almost bad habit of commenting in detail, so what I do when I proof is acknowledgment for me. 😆

Commenting is this - even though it is not like I would have wanted it to be! - and commenting here makes me feel better!

I understand that and I won't say the feeling of giving up is wrong. All I can say to you for this is, as much as I wish for you to write all those 20 chapters, I don't want you to drag yourself through something you don't want to do.

I really cannot speak for anyone other than myself and as for me, starting to day, I am going to begin catching up on TL. 😊

Originally posted by: mayyo

I understand that and I won't say the feeling of giving up is wrong. All I can say to you for this is, as much as I wish for you to write all those 20 chapters, I don't want you to drag yourself through something you don't want to do.

I really cannot speak for anyone other than myself and as for me, starting to day, I am going to begin catching up on TL. 😊

ch25 - love pinky and geet bond...ahaan dinner time and geet serving maan was super
ch26 - lol
Dekha ek khwab to yeh silsile hue...
Amitji ko pyar aur thappad Dev ko mile...

too good can't stop laughing

ch 27- maan's care and silent love - hats off dear writer for writing it so beautifully