The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 108

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Posted: 12 years ago
U know its a punishment to write comments
When all u want is read on GRR

I have been forgetting to mention abt t songs
Just loving it all
I get so carried away in t scene u have created
Dreamy yet so possible
So wonderful

Hmm so they kissed
Hain thapad pada 😆
He thought he was dreaming


I can't stop myself imaging wat if maan had dream like this 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

The rose day was t most beautiful update very cute so precious
So rightly put each & every feel of both

Both felt so dearly for each other hain dreamy
Can't even imagine her rattling & his cribbing latter 😆

I love how u make it so sweetly funny Waitg maans self talk in mind
Just wonderful
His notes for future every time she says or does something
Just beautiful

Shukriya,... from the heart...
Coming from you, it means a lot.
More than anything I wanted the writers who I love so much and who have been a part of my life for the last few years to read my story. If only to give something back to you for giving me so much.
Your reading it and enjoying it makes me feel the circle is complete.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

U know its a punishment to write comments
When all u want is read on GRR

I have been forgetting to mention abt t songs
Just loving it all
I get so carried away in t scene u have created
Dreamy yet so possible
So wonderful

Hmm so they kissed
Hain thapad pada 😆
He thought he was dreaming


I can't stop myself imaging wat if maan had dream like this 😉

Aayega... wo bhi aayega...
I have plans to drive Maan completely mad...🤣
Thanks for the comments.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Every update of maaneet together is so dreamy
So romantic filled with their innocent love so unaware of each other
T harshness of world
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Aayega... wo bhi aayega...
I have plans to drive Maan completely mad...🤣
Thanks for the comments.. 😃


Really me waiting
muskanp thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved t song & t beautiful expression on rekhas face when she get that poetic letter & flowers
Bachans manly romantic voice umm...

Just perfect

Loved t sincere proposal & double sincere rejection 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
I wanted to mention this earlier
But in this whole ff it is a very different characterization on maan
Young lover boy learning business no tycoon types
Where as dev is all tycoon types

Maan is more soft & tender he only shouts at nakul 😆


Here maan did have dialogues how could u miss it
Phehen lo warna phena donga 😉
muskanp thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Umm so here comes her past

Bad death night was just brilliant
The whole restlessness & longing was so beautifully written
Grt update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

I wanted to mention this earlier
But in this whole ff it is a very different characterization on maan
Young lover boy learning business no tycoon types
Where as dev is all tycoon types

Maan is more soft & tender he only shouts at nakul 😆


Here maan did have dialogues how could u miss it
Phehen lo warna phena donga 😉

I purposely wrote him like that... Innocent teenage love, then the more mature dusht danav type of lover will be in the present.
Iss ke baad I don't know if I will write so much so I put all the khichdi in one pot...😆😆
Dev has graduated, worked in London and now running this ofc here, so Dev comes off as more mature.
Timelines ka gadbad hota hai but 2-3 more updates on each couple and we will be in present.
🤗for being here.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hain khadhoos is going to get mad at his jhali
Bechari she is so going to eat babji s head
Just can't wait to see her going nuts with his behavior
Something like maan was confused with j geet
MU mega & maan 😉

But bechari did nothing
But I guess MSK is going give her tough time

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