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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
wow diii
its soo interesting
mujhe sabse aacha yeh laga that maan ko avi tak kissi se pyar nahi hua h
heheheh yeh bas geet ka haq hai na

i liked his ruthless, coldhearted avtar
me in love with him
n those rani n patrani ki shivering
n alll
waiting for next
do na aapke pass hai na next part
dii chori karo na lappy bhai ka

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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
loved the update maan is too smart having 20 wives fir bhi no one can win his heart
geet or that patrani main jamkar takkar hogi
bechari geet ki 20 sautans hain 1 sautan bhari parti hain par yahan to 20 hain
maan already have 2 sons but dont love them
maan is too rude he treats his wives like a slave
hope geet maan ki band baja de
i would love to see when geet will stand infront of maan with attitude
pls add me in your pm list and do pm
me loving this story
pls update next part pls pls pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
loved the start
maan is arrogant
he has no love or feelings for others
maan in yudh bhoomi..
his opponent will be geetanjali
wow...it will be great watching two fires meet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Interesting concept...waiting for entry of geet to spread some love and respect for women in king maanveer
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
part 1
nice start...
OMG Maan is like this...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
wow great story plz update soon
i can not wait for the next part of your story
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
awesome ⭐️update

maanveer has 20 ranis... typical royal king with so much attitude, ego n stone heart

waiting for Geetanjali entry

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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
awesome starting
maan with so much attitude...
20 queens!!!!!!
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
AWESOME UPDATE HE IS RUTHLESS AND HAS TWENTY WIVES INTERESTING UPDATE AWESOME PART TANKS FOR THE PM

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Posted: 12 years ago
#80




chapter 2

This is a purely imaginary Fiction, nothing is related to history even some place is also not exist on earth. someone have problem pm me than.


Rajbhumi mahal ( mansion)

"Hone dijiye yudh pita ji maharaj!!! rajgharana hai hum sarr kata dege lakin usse delhi ke raja ke samne apni maa ke dudh ko lajit nahi hone dege hum (let them start this war father!!! our head will not going to bow in front of Delhi king.. I can't insult my mother self respect)" prince karandeep rajput roared like lion in whole courtyard of rajbhumi people.

And whole place echoed with the sound "harr harr mahadev... harr harr mahadev".



"Haa pita jii maharaj!!! App ki ek aagya aur usse delhi ke raja ki sena ka sarr dhad (body) se alag naa kiya tu hum bhi rajkhumari geetangli nahi (yes father king!!! You just order us we will cut whole Delhi army in pieces or else I am also not princess geetangli)" rajbhumi priness just entered in courtyard and roared like a lioness.. she is beautiful yet a brave princess like a real Daring princess.. her almond eye are only visible to others and she is wrapped a cloth on her face when she practices swords.. and always wear a simple white rajisthani lahnga choli.. after getting message about Delhi messenger in their court she come here directly.. From her practices.

"Rajkumar.. rajkumari hum apke shaas ki preshnsaa (appreciation) karte hai.. mager yudh mai josh ke saath hosh ki bhi awshykata (need) hai (Prince and princess I am appreciated your bravery but in war you have to think with brain) " rajbhumi king spoke in serious tone.

they are in really big trouble .. Delhi army is less with so many foreign weapons.. and they huge in numbers also 400000 soldiers.. and rajbhumi had only 50000 soldiers in their answer.. but right now they have to fight with them till they all are dead.

"Geetangli!!! App apni mata shri ke saath apni nanihaal chali jayi ye ( geetangli!!! You go with your mother to your mother house for some days)" king spoke in worried tone.

"Nahi pita" geetangli is cut by king.

"Geetangli!!! aagya ka palan hu (geetangli follow my orders)" king spoke with a glare.

"Rajkumar!!! App sena ki kaman smbhale ge senapati ke saath (priness!! You will show way to army with head of the army)" king distribute duties.

"Maharaj!!! Shama (sorry) chahte hai per apko bhi rund mai nahi jana chahiye warna isse rajput priwar ka astitav hi khatre mai pade jaye gaa (king!!! Am sorry but you don't go in war field or else our royal family generation will be in danger)" king right hand shobitmal suggested.

At last rajbhumi people decided that their king is not going in the field at any cost to save their royal genration.. and geetangli left rajbhumi and went toward himdesh with her mother.. but geetangli is not happy with her father decision.. she is a rayal princess and very well know how to win over her enemy but king always took her as child.

Her sakhi (personal slave yet best friend) tried to manofy her but no use.

"Lalita hume samjhane ka praytan mat kijiye.. hum bhout krodit hai abhi (lalita!!! Don't try to made me understand.. I am so angry right now)" Geetangli winched.

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This war continue till next 15 days and even king also went in field because rajbumi cant able to digest their insult what maanveer gave them by winning all days in war.. at last rajbhumi king was a prisoner of maanveer singh with his family but geetangli and her mother is still saved.. from them.. maanveer locked them with other prisoner and take over rajbhumi mahal with a winning smile.. and sat on rajsisighasan (king chair).

"Rajbhumi kI praja ko humhara abhinandan!!! Delhi nai ye isse rajbhumi per vijay prapt kar li hai.. tu aaj se maharaj maanveer singh apke raja hai aur abb apko delhi ke niymo (rules) ka palan karna hoga (dear rajbhumi's people welcome here!!! As you know delhi won over rajbhumi so from now on king maanveer singh is your king and you have to flow all delhi law rules)" aditya singh announced their winning speech for all.. everyone is worried as they know manveer is a spoilt and cruel king without any humbleness but this is their destiny from now on.

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Other side geetangli also got the news about their prajaye (defeat).. which made her blood boiled in revenge.. they can't just accept their defeat like that and more over her bhai saa and pita jii in jail like prisoner.. Indeed maanveer need a lesson to learn respect others.. if you defeat a king in war also there is some rules and hospitality remain.. they treat a king like a king not like some cattles.

Geetangli without listened anyone just took her horse and left from their with her sword in pure rage.. she can't able to see someone sat on her father place.. he is cheating everyone.. rajbhumi accepted a contract with delhi that rajbhumi never going to try extend their boundaries and Delhi will leave them In peace but king manveer left all rules and regulation.. when he was sure that they will win against our army.. geetangli is like a fire framed in beauty.. Intelligent yet beautiful.. she is totally a daring personality.. you can't pressurized her for anything.. as she knew her ways.. she is like a proud of rajbhumi.

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Here maanveer is in good mood and wants to celebrate his success so his men called some artists.. Singer and dancers from foreign just only for maanveer entertainment.. they sang kawali.. which is not india singing form.. and every impossible things attracted to maanveer.. after all he is now a great king of 75 percent of India and extending his boundaries daily.

Maanveer knew to live his life for pleasures also.. he won everything and used it also.

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Precap: Geetangli and Maanveer first meeting.


NEXT CHAPTER SAT MORNING

Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago


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