DLS - THREAD 2 ADDED PG 1 - Page 6

Originally posted by: ...Tanya-K...

Story is quite intriguing. First part was awesome. but does he really have 20 wives??? 😲

So Maan is the shrewd king and doesn't respect any of his queens.

Can't wait for Geet's entry, probably will bring the king down to his knees. 😉

Thank goodness there's translations or I would've spent an hour trying to figure the words and its meanings 😆

Continue soon and congrats on the story. 😊

Oh just realized this is the first story I'm reading of yours so welcoming myself to your fiction world 😛

Hope to read more soon 😃

thank you tanya i am really gla to see your comment as i am your great fan of innocence and many finished chapter.

yup that time king really used to had so many wifes as they are stamp on their no fight agreements

you are welcome here in my world hope i caged u in my story

Originally posted by: 2102

Over all nice start only i hd sum problem in reading the pure sankrit n hindi langu. Other wise it gud. N waiting 4 geet entry.