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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

awesome part
loved it
maanveer is really rutheless arrogant
waiting for geetanjali

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 11

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Story is quite intriguing. First part was awesome. but does he really have 20 wives??? 😲

So Maan is the shrewd king and doesn't respect any of his queens.

Can't wait for Geet's entry, probably will bring the king down to his knees. 😉

Thank goodness there's translations or I would've spent an hour trying to figure the words and its meanings 😆

Continue soon and congrats on the story. 😊

Oh just realized this is the first story I'm reading of yours so welcoming myself to your fiction world 😛

Hope to read more soon 😃

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vandana73

@vandana73

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

A historical !!

An epic love story !!

waiting for geet's entry

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: ...Tanya-K...
Story is quite intriguing. First part was awesome. but does he really have 20 wives??? 😲
So Maan is the shrewd king and doesn't respect any of his queens.
Can't wait for Geet's entry, probably will bring the king down to his knees. 😉
Thank goodness there's translations or I would've spent an hour trying to figure the words and its meanings 😆
Continue soon and congrats on the story. 😊
Oh just realized this is the first story I'm reading of yours so welcoming myself to your fiction world 😛
Hope to read more soon 😃

thank you tanya i am really gla to see your comment as i am your great fan of innocence and many finished chapter.

yup that time king really used to had so many wifes as they are stamp on their no fight agreements

you are welcome here in my world hope i caged u in my story

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shri12

@shri12

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Awesome start maan is so rude and arrogant and with 20 queens 😲
but it happens in history ab waiting for geet's entry

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Shraddha Sinari

@SHRADDHA2102

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Over all nice start only i hd sum problem in reading the pure sankrit n hindi langu. Other wise it gud. N waiting 4 geet entry.

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: 2102
Over all nice start only i hd sum problem in reading the pure sankrit n hindi langu. Other wise it gud. N waiting 4 geet entry.

Thanks for comment
U can read in english translation dear

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

oh My GOD u really started updating this story...

I am so happy...

I always love to read Historical based story...they are so intriguing because we have never seen that era...

Maan is so ruthless and cruel...stone hearted...no queen of his not able to bring any trace of love in his heart...love comes with respect...when they are so meek in front of him then he will either pity them or scare them but cannot love them...

what I have read in books is PATRANI is the queen who is selected for a king in proper proposal for marriage...but other Ranis in Harame are the ones whom he conquered through wars and they were given as gifts by their fathers...waise it is all in Kings hands if he fall in love with any other Rani then he will make her also his Patrani but sometimes this create unrest among countrymen and between the kingdoms of former Patrani and king...because the Patrani is considered to be very respectable who married to King with proper way...

so another war will start next morning...

will Geet come and stop this war...

she will surely give him good retort...

eagerly waiting for next part...