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Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

first of all i have read about your fears predicting the roof top . but i didnt comment .by that u would have known what i have in my mind. so forgive me for ignoring that part .[its completely fine dear..Thanks for not replying to that otherwise i would have lost the fun of reading...I am feeling little ashamed to use the word "fun" here,hope you understood what i meant to say..Rape attempt came like a blow to me...!!! I was hell scared and astonished...]

when i started writing the rape scene ..i had no idea how to do it .. so i closed my eyes and re created a panic situation few years ago i felt travelling alone in a over night train journey . i had to use the loo .. and one of the attendant came and told me if i have someone with me .. i didnt reply and had asked back why ? he said ..things are not good . i should not come out of the coupe for the rest of the night .he didnt tell me anything else ..and i couldnt know more ..but the dread i had felt the whole night ..and didnt sip a drop of water . nothing had happened and i safely reached my destination .but it was the dread[i can feel what you might felt during those hours..but there are few who can mould the feelings in to words the way you do .dear...] that made me picture that ..but i didnt do good palin .{it was more than enough dear..I have tried to write a "rape"sequence for my story once and it was so hard for me that I finished the whole thing in four lines only...You did a great job]i know ..cause no woman can . ever write the situation or imagine what might have happened .
trust me ..death is better than this .[I understand dear..This infamous term "Rape" always make me feel the dread specially after "Nirbhaya incident"...😭
i had met a girl of 12 years who had gone thru this ..her look was dreadful . the case was handled by my superiors so i had no jurisdiction to near her ..trust me .unlike my curious frens .i didnt want to .{Curious????❓..}(yep doctor :P){ so one more doctor added to "talented author group" here...]



coming back to the story ...
okay ..if i cant make you feel what i m feeling then there's no point writing . i believe so ..but i cant successfully express though .

arjun is like that ..he always thought geet could read his silence ..but what u have written is absolutely correct .
geet isnt matured enough ..or secure enough to read him ..she would need time . the time she doesnt trust on.

yes... after facing all of this ..geet has self loathing ..and moreover ..she was more hurt by the way arjun has aksed her to call sir..snatching the last claim on him .
so she let him go ..u wud understand more in next chapter .[I would wait dear...]

i couldnt have forgotten dia ..because ..she has part to play ..geet needed sunanda more ..but arjun called dia ..cause he trusts her somehow .or he is not conversant with sunanda .
i m really happy ...beyong imagination happy that u liked neem tree ..i loved the way u said ..
melancholy personified ![my pleasure dear..you know its quite difficult to find "praising terms" for you...I always get short of words when I come to this thread...]


but you missed something palin .. winks ! no two things ! one of it avi did ..another i had changed the script a bit after avi read it [why????]

ofcourse ...man fears woman ..man can not understand woman ..man is weak against woman ..so they points more finger at woman ..[I can't agree more..You reminded me of something,I have written long ago for one of my story...]
moreove to my utter shame ...women are more vindictive to other woman ..than a man is ..[aurat hi aurat ki sabse badi dushman hoti hai...🤢]
because they are insecured .
dia is not insecure but she is human as well.

dia has faced a lot ..and she knows unlike geet she doesnt have anyone in this world .
maan too knows that ..

but geet is different ..bit weaker than them

geet wants someone knowing she hasnt got any .
all of the people are not same ..they dont react same in same situation {and that makes this story more realistic dear...]


love ur reply palin ...i so do ... beyond words how much i do .. just wait until u reply ..i need to scour thru the pages to find a few person's comments .

thank you for reading my story ![Thank you so much for writing it dear..You have no idea,you have given something to look forward every morning in this monotonous life of mine,,Mein tumhara ehsaan kabhi nahi bhoolongi...sorry i tend to be little melodramatic ...😆]

Originally posted by: Onir

Bride ke hote hue dusro pe nazar dalling...Arjun has space enough for Geet so her pain he will take care of.😆

Don't search excuses to leave me... 😛

Originally posted by: dqno1

Madhu calls her Draupadi...😆

Dekh le Onir...

Mera pyar toh kab ka divided hai...

Although she has excellent choice... Reet can capture anyone's heart...😳

Originally posted by: Onir

Palin I read your comment It was all that I wanted to say & more so well & concisely put together. 👏

Reet I get what you were trying to say about rape.. even the journey that you had once. It becomes quite scary for girls travelling alone especially after the Nirbhaya case.

And about the case you were speaking of a 12 year old girl... I can so understand what you are trying to say. Its painful & horrid to see them & feel for them.

Rape is the only crime in this world where the victim is even more victimized even more than oppressor. Sad part of our society 😡 I hate that so much.

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

hey onir .. i m doing my internship after completion of mbbs .
so you r doing DM .? which college if u dont mind . my hubby is preping for DM too ..in endocrnology .

yes..

@palin ..not all my frens are girls ..and even they are ..few of them had to be bit insensitive .few doctors are insensitive , i felt so ..

no offense onir ..u r not one of them ur comments prove that .
i am highly impressed at your qualification onir .
glad to know that at the same time u love reading ..kash mere husband samjhte .!!!😭

Originally posted by: Onir

Yep. Doing it from I know you're a doc too and awesome writer.
Your hubby is wanting to go in endocrinology... impressive it always gets to me. All the best to him 👍🏼

I get it when you say insensitive docs... seen a lot in last few years. I have my allied in psychiatry so have come across few cases as such.

I love reading bachpan se... only stress reliever from studies have been reading and music. 😳