my teacher (II) c index for (III) - Page 3

Wow intense update .Believe it or not I had predicted that geet would get assaulted and that too by Vikas so I was literally shocked when I read this part .I feel really bad for both arjun and geet .Geet for obvious reasons ,shes gone through so much pain and humiliation which she was deserving of initially but thing have gotten way out of hand .With this new yet dreadful addition to her list of 'Punishment' i feel worst for her .As for Arjun he's been in pain all through out this story .Not only does he have to bear geet's pain but his own pain aswell. First with geets accusation ,then after witnessing her treatment by the other students ,her attempted rape and now her cold behavior towards him .

The stand she stood against the union was applause worthy.

iBecause .. because.. her voice lowered down . she closed her eyes defeated by life ..and finally let herself utter

Because I don't have anyone else.

i have no words to say. i never cried while reading any ff before.👏

Originally posted by: dqno1

The stand she stood against the union was applause worthy.

For someone who was defeated, it would have been easy to succumb and help.

She is Geet, Geet Raichanda.

The only place she succumbs is for her love.

Even in the end, she stood up to him.

All broken, almost naked, attack after attack, there is steel in her..

She does not want his pity and she points out the line he has drawn in the sand.

This is a lioness who has been slashed, she won't go down with a whimper.

As for the worm, I want Anant to find out about this.

you are so complicated . you have always been a riddle to me . I'm tired of guessing the answer sir.

This was the line that spoke to me. She has given up on trying to figure it out.

The scene by the neem tree was another. Each in their own desires and needs there, wanting the oneness of love, wanting to heal each other but they have walked away from that place they were.

The scene on the roof when he loses himself again in spite of his anger he cannot control his heart.

I could sense the pain he felt and the blame I am sure he will assign himself.

I can sense Dia trying to cling now... It never behooves anyone to come between two lovers. No matter how broken they are, they are still one and no one can come in between.

The fact that he knew that Geet saw Dia's touch and it did not affect her has to cut him deeply.

I loved both the songs and the way you visualized them for us was a success.

They are two shores not able to meet at this point. Wonder what drought will have to happen when they realize they were always together and always one.

I totally find that every time I think you have written your best you go ahead and stun me some more.

Thanks for updating.

you have no idea how over whelmed i m at this moment
this ...was worth the trouble i take up ..i come straight from work and dig myself in it .
my roomie had a huge fight with her bf ..all over phone ..i ignored the shouts and wrote ..my fren kept bugging me to leave pc and go for a walk ..i had to make excuses ..my head hurts ..i m gonna catch sleep for just 3 hours ...but its worth it !
so worth it !

the red marked sentences made feel so proud ..cant begin to tell u .
about the worm ..
oh i have plans for him ..

u r so gonna love it !

about dia ...i have plans too😃

Awesome !!!!
I was kinda hoping for a reunion but I guess have to wait longer!!!

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

you have no idea how over whelmed i m at this moment
this ...was worth the trouble i take up ..i come straight from work and dig myself in it .
my roomie had a huge fight with her bf ..all over phone ..i ignored the shouts and wrote ..my fren kept bugging me to leave pc and go for a walk ..i had to make excuses ..my head hurts ..i m gonna catch sleep for just 3 hours ...but its worth it !
so worth it !

the red marked sentences made feel so proud ..cant begin to tell u .
about the worm ..
oh i have plans for him ..

u r so gonna love it !

about dia ...i have plans too😃

My words are not enough but I am glad for the happiness you find in them.

To write under those circumstances and this well speaks to your talent.

❤️ always

i don't know reet how you do it but every single update renders me speechless and choked with emotion...the song raat humari toh had always been near to my heart and today i just cried...the words were so apt for geet...that 😡 vikas...i hate him but then he had always been the oppurtunist...you know while reading i felt a strange helplessness watching geet and arjun...they love each other so much yet the distance... its a painful read and the way arjun said he won't take geet's place was superb... dia was once again someone i loved here at how she and sunanda protested for geet...don't know what will happen to these arjun and geet...but it was awesome...painful but awesome and as usual will be waiting for more

that was one heartwrenching update...wouldnt even wish such cruel things happening to my enemies...my hert breaks everytime i see her going through so much of pain, suffering, anguish, humiliation... its not her who deserves so much of hatred...its her grandpa, people like vikas... and some selfish creatures, who used her when she was at the helm of her popularity and now behave like moral police who shun away her like she is an outcast...cant this get more hypocritic...

she was being used then, she is being used now...

she being about to be raped, is one of the most painful and most cruel thing that has shaken me to the core... it just makes my heart bleed to see her in so much pain and sorrow...completely left speechless with the magnitude of disaster that has struck geet...hope she leaves this ugly memories behind... 😭

congratz on new thread ..