my teacher (II) c index for (III) - Page 24

part 24
excellent...
i mean for the last scene...
poor Geet...
and damn those officials...
how could they do that?
poor Maan now what is he gonna do?
and why hasnt Sunanda told Geet or Maan about the phone call of Dev's?
what did Dev mean by that?
and now what is that old man planning?
and Dia, did Geet's words give her that pressure or she was bound to talk now?
glad Satya arrived at the right moment and that line really made me feel so peace...
cont soon dear...

awesome update so the truth is out waiting for next update

very emotional update

Reet 👏👏👏You've done it again left me spellbound. Girl how do you do it? Seriously such intricacies taken into mind while writing the part, not one of them left out with parallel character building. For me it's like seeing a huge canvas mounted with different scenes, characters all mingling together to make a beautiful wholesome picture that has perfection in its own imperfection that I have started falling in love with. ❤️

I'm so glad I didn't read it before & was able to resist for hours cause if I have would read it then would have been restless (more than I was for not have read) to go and express it all at the earliest.😊

You remember for the previous part I had asked you "What now?" And you know what you've described the Question with brilliance. Take a bow girl! There was this beauty in the stillness of the update, there was so much happening yet there's was justice done to the coldness that needed to be cut. Some lines, gestures and descriptions just left me mesmerised with your style of including all and yet doing justice to everyone, each thing. 👏

You bowled me over with the first line itself. ….. "The man stood gloriously with the most infamous girl in his arms, blood marred over her face, mud stained on her dress." Perfect! He was raised on a pedestal with sympathy & large heartedness post the whole accusation fiasco, but today his glory is unmatched in front of the broken beauty in his arms. Her face being blood marred reflective of a blow on that red painted note on her door, that she's not horny but now so broken that her face value seems so scary. Mud stained dress – the taunts and torture she went through was added with this ultimate nightmare, tainting her soul with deep gashes. Yet inspite of it all he holds her in this dawn showing it's passed by & now left with just pieces to be accumulated, but hope for good. All of it in a single line so symbolic…. "Unperturbed to the curious, jealous & judging eyes Arjun waited patiently with no hurry to let go Geet from his safe cocoon."

True there was dawn but then it brought out secrets hidden in the dark, brought the helplessness of a victim just because she's a XX, needing an Arjun to safeguard her, brought out the cruelness of human ego that was ready to hurt a soul so bad just for some petty revenge, brought out the narrow mindedness of even the most so called woman right activist who couldn't relate to the pain etched form of a woman. Spineless people yet coming to judge Geet not once lifting the blind fold of hazy blames from their eyes and pepping in themselves to see the dirt present there. Dia's statement of being bunt and stating "Vikas attempted rape on her" was so cold and I was taken aback for a moment but then I felt it was the most she could say in front of the judgmental & fickle minded people. I wanted to become violent and punch Rashi on her statement but then Dia did the needful, also I liked how you reigned in the end by showing the fear in each girl that made them see through their false & so called societal view that all won't have an Arjun backing them, and that this could happen to anyone of them. That none not even one who falsely accused ever deserves this treatment and tainting because finally we all are humans with our own fragilities and follies.

Love the symbolism with Arjun refusing to let her go. So now he won't ever let her go (I hope so very fervently) a closure to all the rebuking & pushing her away from him in the name of unforgiveness & hatred. I hope it's not too late for Geet to perceive his acceptance now, that he's not too late to promise her not letting her go, hope she's not pushed herself so away from him to punish herself that his promise doesn't reach her.

Su's statement of the concerned people at fault for Geets' condition to get their due was a slap on his face. I KNOW Arjun isn't totally at fault yet his conscious will always prick him to not be able to save his wife from this brutality even thought he was so close by, he will blame himself for not being able to fulfil his duties. Though from a third person view I can't see anyone persons fault it was all circumstances and destiny.

Sahay… Hmm quite a hidden yet strong character here. He's like that third person who sees it all & perceives it all through his years of experience and does all he can to support the righteous & the deserving in his own silent manner without making it too obvious. He knows Geet & Arjun both and everyone else on the campus and the outside world as well after all he's a principal. He knows how everyone will react & take things & also knows who is worth how much. He knows Geet form before the fiasco and has also seen her true repentance & head on taking of the punishment without cowering or escaping. He still sees her as the girl who would do more than her best for others & the dawn has made him even voice it out to Arjun. He is correct only Annat is now who if possible mat be able to do something in this regard. He knows Arjun and is aware of his deep feelings, to treat him like Geet's guardian as he has seen him supporting Geet even through his faade of indifference standing up for her against other teachers and students. His mysterious smile had me grinning too the way he's giving privacy to them both & also not protesting much on allowing Arjun to pay the bill.

There's more let me organise my thoughts will come back with more... Hope it won't bore you with the length. 😆

Oh see I again messed it up with commenting on the reserved post 😆😆

awesome update!!!
can't wait 4 next part!!!
please update soon!!!

The scene with the Dr. Guha, I can so understand her stand there & even her reluctance. It's difficult to show your vulnerability to others that too someone unknown after the ones you considered & called as own left you to face it all making each day & moment of your life miserable to live in the name of punishing for a offense you are guilt & are bearing the consequences so horribly without escaping or shying away from it. Her saying is justified and also listening to him was so beautifully portrayed.

I admired your writing skill again while describing her room. You could have just described her & the interaction, but even in that nail biting & need of the hour situation you did complete creative justice by not leaving out on symbolic description of the room. Ice blue wall—coldness in her causing to form a wall of indifference and apathy, beige coloured curtains --- the dullness and taking each one's taunt on a colourless frame of herself, and the best one of it all FLOWERLESS VASE--- the loss of beauty & appreciation in life showing her detachment & dejection. Indeed it was correspondent to her lifeless form laying minuscule in that room.👏

The scene when he's trying to convince her was so touching. Each of their sense & their soul alert & attentive. His voice at first makes her stiff but then when she feels his soothing touch smoothing her hair causes her tension to leave her even though its temporary, with his warmth trying to touch & engulf her she again turns stiff as she wants him to stay away as her tabooed shadow shouldn't touch him. "Tenderness of his voice could melt a stone … but Geet was turned nothing less…" Beautiful! Even though resistant she isn't able to break his resolve, as now he's lost in her vulnerability & his guilt of not protecting her. I loved that scene when she quietens all her resistance when he places her palm on his chest, his heart…. ❤️ it's as if reassuring her & self that he loves her & won't let harm come her way now ever and that till his heartbeats are there he won't let anyone judge her. And then the final crumbling of her resistance with that "For my sake" Oh I felt for them both.

I even felt her helplessness & fight to hold onto her resolve of not tainting his life with her own inferior self that she considers herself unworthy for any love when she wants to keep him away how much ever it hurts her "How many more times I have to beg mercy from you SIR …. Just tell me." The whole scene of her nearing the car - her weakened self yet not giving up on self punishment & his helplessness to see her bearing it all is in itself her punishing him to have kept quite since the time she and others have been torturing her. Asking why now & not then when she craved & longed to be in his embrace. And then another closure to it all by "Stop it please.." his plead for her & him when she gazes after such ling period in his caramel eyes that now don't reflect hate & disgust but only love, care & support. He is trying his best & I really appreciated it the way you showed it by him denying Dia to sit by his side in the car.

The only time when I has a small smile on my face while reading this part was when Mr. Sahay allowed him to pay her bills seeing his claim & authority, finally Arjun is being her hubby Maan; and also when Dr. Guha questioned him that he does it for his every student and he flushes at it.😃😊😳

Dev?? Does he love her? I guess the answer is yes. But how will he react on knowing the whole of it. And why did Anant say all that?? This Anant always leaves me with innumerable questions & I'm forced to be so enamoured with his character that is able to rule it all even when he doesn't feature physically in any scene.

Su… I really love her loyalty & friendship. She convinced her Dad for Geet. Good one.👏

The police station scene was true in its context and form. That's what is rampant in our society. I won't even blame them entirely as they would be questioned on such high profile case. They see common man low while a minister's son is required guarantee. The questions asked & taunts are something shows how helpless a girl can be in this patriarchal society. Completely justified & angering to me.😡😡

Geet understanding Arjun's unsaid words about the police station complaint, and also stating she knew it, as she has faced so much and grown so much in last 15 days she knows what this society is made of. Her closing eyes there on showed her giving up on everything, everyone not wanting any of it, turning cold & indifferent even to his touch & his warm embrace.

Her words to Dia though shows her hurt it also shows her insecurity & acceptance of failure. She fears that she will harm him more with her being with him, she being unworthy & undeserving of love. She accepts she failed as a student as she failed in each relation & understanding of people in her life so much that she strangulated her own budding love. What she spoke to Dia was her own fear & insecurity but then it was like that straw to hold onto for Dia that there's hope for her unrequited love forgetting that she has no space in them for even her unrequited & unacknowledged love, it will only give her more pain in the bargain when all of the truth & their (Geet-Arjun) relation dynamics comes out. She blurted it all out to Arjun in her haze of wanting it when she feels the other does not want the love she craves for forgetting that it's all play of destiny and not her say. I felt bad for her. But the she was bound to be hurt as love isn't just pain, pleasure it is also rejection & heartbreak.

I fear what Arjun makes of her broken conclusion of Geet's statement. From here forward his take on it will either build their relation on stronger foundation or break it beyond repair.

Satya … I knew he will play a mighty role. I love him for what he did with his dhamakedar entry.😃 His one statement did it all. Showed Dia the harsh truth, the failure, rejection and also that there's no space for her in between two imperfect souls bound by thin string of destiny to make it all perfect. "Can't forget her as …. She is his wife…"👏👏

Only Satya could do this as he has more to play in this all. And more than him his father has a major role I suppose.

Again the Q – Are you planning for Satya-Dia? Su-Dev?

Continue soon. Sorry to reply so late was held up and wanted to read & comment in peace.😃

loved the update too much, ,
though she was difficult for him but still he managed her...
grr that police man... hate him , i know that is their duty... how can they believe that she is saying true this time...
dia was nice but her outburst was shocking , haaye satya entered at the correct time and spoke the truth...
update soon dear...

Love u satya was d first thing came to my mind after reading d updt...went thru loads of emotions...

brilliant wrk again