MGFF- ESSENCE OF LOVE-THD-5/PART-60/14-6-2013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: anuradha.nandam
ur point of view , i understand yaar but my story is like that i want to discuss so many pblms through this story, i cannot spoil the decency of my charecters , they r not at all teanagers yaar ki jhad se pyaar me aneki, so many pblms so many things r there to take a decission,think once about geets daughters, society, will it agree it, i told u in my prolog itself its not a routene love story, i will try my best to satisfy u but not at the cost of decency of my charecters, sorry if i hurt u. i too love to see maneet romance , but in my way. thanks for ur good sugestions discussions r welcome, if many of u want like that only i will think about it .

jo log pyaar karte hain woh decent nahin hote kya...humne aisa nahin kaha ki u just show them having s** everytime but we want to see them together...they can fight many problems together...do u think u r the only social worker here who wants to erase all problems of society with ur FF...yes u can address many problems through ur FF but what is the meaning of decency here...if we want to see Maan-Geet in love and together then our demand is not decent...

u wanted to concentrate in many problems of society...do u think this is not one of the problems...

u can very well see in this same society where a MAN can marry any number of times without any fuss...even he can marry at the age of 80 and with a girl of 18 yrs old then no body says anything... Former Chief Minister of Tamil Nadu Karunanidhi married an 18 yrs old girl some couple of yrs back... when his wife is still alive and that he did because some Fortune teller told him that this girl's destiny will bring him good fortune...u know very famous SARVANA resteurants from Chennai its owner is in jail because he tried to capture and marry his manager's wife because she was lucky for him after murdering her husband... these are just some incidents u can find many more everywhere in our society where for just little gain or lust Men force women sexually...no body even flinch with this type of incidents... these incidents are very normal...but if WOMAN wants to remarry then this same society will blame her as characterless and desperate women for s*x...Geet bear so much in hands of her former husband...he molested her, manhandled her, sold her off for money... she have to run with her little daughters to save her and her daughter's dignity... then she struggled so much just to give good life to her children...after so much of struggle don't u think she has all the rights to be happy and enjoy her life...in ur FF u have hinted that she is living alone because she didn't want to burden her daughters and SILs with her presence and didn't want to disturb their privacy...after her 2 daughters are now well settled don't u think she also deserve true love...and somebody her own by her side so that she won't feel lonely and burden on anybody...it is her inferiority complex that she thinks that she may be burden in private life of her daughters and SILs...

I am sorry I am really dissapointed by ur this line ---that think about her daughters, society....in ur opinion also Geet don't deserve happiness...and if she thinks about her happiness then she is not decent...what is there to think...why we think about her daughters when they are well settled with their family... Geet had made them enough capable to take care of themselves...and society...society sees what we want them to see...now a days who cares what other person is doing...if her daughters are by her side no body can lift finger on her...don't u think WOMEN remarriage is another problem of society whom u can address through ur FF...

and what about Maan...until this age he is working like a maniac just for his so cunning and selfish family...don't he has any dreams to fulfill...don't ha deserve happiness...

Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 12 years ago

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anuradha.nandam

@anuradha.nandam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

well said i got ur point but i too didnt say that geet never marrys again , for that she had to think for herself she has to over come her fears and obstacles, ur right i qam no one to solve the social pblms, but through this story i want to share my point of view, who said u iam oppose to remarriage, i never said if that is my point i never start a love story haina,...?

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luvmg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

i have heard few instances where such re marriages take place but r kept under cover.not bcoz of society but bcoz of family members precisely money matters.when we talk of marriages we blame western countries sayin they culture they dont value relationship but atleast they are open minded to accept there heart.

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Update kab milenga?😉

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anuradha.nandam

@anuradha.nandam

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

MGFF- ESSENCE OF LOVE-THD-6/part-85/10-7/2013

link for previous parts:h ttp://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3524536

Part:-85

He waited for her reply still kissing her.But he didnt get any reply. She is not responding to his kiss also. He slowly pulled out of her kiss and looked at her.

She is sleeping .She fall in sleep with a contented smile on her face, with a satisfying expression on her face. She looked more and more beautiful with that cute smile on her face and how much innocent while sleeping like a small baby.

He slowly again kissed over her face like a peck without disturbing her. He felt disappointed first as she didnt hear his confession ,but later he made up his mind by seeing her angelic face. He slowly moved away again kissing her over her neck, shoulders cleavage and up to her naval and foot. He adjusted her saree and made her to lai properly on the seat and moved out and took the front seat. The rain is still pouring.

He leaned his head on seat post feeling contented, remembering their sweat moment they shared. He smiled thinking their passion. He still felt her touch on his lips and the taste of her.He looked back, " see how she sleeping like an innocent, here she made me aroused, waking my desires, and madam is sleeping peacefully"he murmered.

His heart is jumping in joy thinking that she also wants me. She also loves me that is why she allowed to this extent. Aur nahi tho kya, wo isa nahi hai kis aur ko itni nazdeek anedethi. Wo jarur mujhe se pyaar karrahi hai. I am sure, she is also feeling for me, she loves me. His heart is saying this.

But one part of his mind is warning him"oye;,.. ye tum kya soche rahe ho?wo is wakth ghau ki waje se dard me hai, tum use divert karna chahthe ho, that is why she got carried by all this. u r wrong. she dont loves u. All this happened in the verge of divertion. She only diverted by u,and u r thinking like this. U started to kiss her.

Heart:- but she didnt shov u?

Mind:- how can she? is she in her full sence? she is in pain,she needs a divertion and u waked her sences, u.r wrong? u take her vulnerable condition as an advantage and crossed ur limits.She believed u, she trusted u,that is why she came with u alone and u took her for granted. Kya muh dikhavoge use kal? kya kahoge? kya explanation depaoge use agar unhe sab kuch yaad ayatho? kya tum uski aankhome aankh dall kar dekhsakthe ho?bathao? kya jawaab deoge? u r the sinner ,u crossed ur limits u miss behaved with her.

Maan:- throwed his hairs back in disgust for his behaviour. How i loose my self like this? wat will she do when she woke up in morning, will she accuse me?will she lave me thinking as me also like those despos? kya our dosthgi band karogi? kya wo meri taraf dekhthi ? ya muh mode kar chale jayagi?Mai kaise jeepaunga agar wo mujhe se dur chale jayegi tho?ye mai ne kya kiya?itni badi galathi mujhe se kaise hua? kaise mai isse sudharu?

Mind:- karna kya? kal subha usse sab kuch batha ke maafi maango.

Heart:- koi jarurat nahi hai maafi maange ka, agar wo galt samjhe tho? tumhe thik se nahi samjhaya tho? kya hoga? tum uski dosthgi bhi khojavoge na? kya tum rah sakthe ho iske bina?

Maan:- per mai kya karu?

Mind:- tum meri baath suno, usse maafi maanglo., chahe wo samjhe ya na samjhe, galathi kiya tho saja bhi bhugatna padega tumhe.

Heart:- haa,.. mai maantha hu tumse galathi hui, lekin ye tum jaanbooch kar thodi kiya,ye sab tumhara pyaar hai jo is tarah baahar agaya, tumse nahi hopaya usse dard me dekhna, pyaar me hua ye sab our wo respond kiya wo bhi tumse pyaar karthi hai maan.

Mind:- wo pyaar karthe hai ,ya nahi karthe hai, tumse galathi hue tumhe usse maafi maangnahi padega.

Heart:- keeps quite,..

Maan:- thik hai, mai kal subha ye need se uthneke baad usse sab kuch bathaunga aur maafi maangunga, chahe kuch bhi hojay, ye mujhe se nahi hoga.

He didnt sleep all night thinking wat will be her response, and hell worrying , if he may loose her forever. Even though he is not repenting for their intimacy, and the moment they shared, their passion he is fearing , if he may loose her.He loved their cute little romance that give the feeling of life in him, remembering that he has a colour ful life ahead with geet .he felt that he will not live without seeing her. my life will be come to an end if she will not forgive me.

He pulled his hairs in disgust " why i behaved like freaking despo"?he spend the whole night in remorse. He closed his eyes trying to get some strenght ,to face geets anger, her out burst, pain.He is ready to face them, ready for her to take all her anger out on him.

Precap;- wat will be geets reaction, any guesses?

LINK FOR PART-86:-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/87552665�

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 12 years ago

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

😳😳maan's is madly in love..hope geet will accept his love...pls cont soon..

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Aapne aadat dal di hai, roj aapke update padhne ki

Agar update nhi aaya to acha nahi lagta

Maanbabu to gaye...😉

Muje lagta hai geet kuch nahi bolengi jiase kuch janti hi nahi

Waise to geet ko bhi pata hai ki vo bhi maan ko chahne lagi hai

Vo samjti hai maan jo kiya vo uski care thi

Geet se koi maafi mange ye use pasnd nahi...haina?

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

maan loves geet so much...

he is worried abt geet's reaction...if she misunderstood him...

loved the update...

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

nice part

maans heart n mind fighting with each other

he is thinking to ask sry

he dont want 2 lose her friendship

hmm..geet..geet wont get mad on him

as she is also equally responsible 4 whatever happenned between them..

but will accuse herself..

she is a mom n grany too..

so this will make her fall in pit of guilt

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#140

koi chahe kitne pain mein ho but bhool nahin sakta...

Geet may have slept because of relief from pain but she must have very well know what happened between them...

waise according to me she will not say anything to him...she will try to avoid any conversation on it...they are mature adults not teenagers ki immaturely behave karein...he very well knows what happens between them and she very well understand that they both are equally involved what happened...and kisi bachche ki tarah yeh kehne se ki kuch yaad nahin hai...aisa nahin ho sakta...

waiting to know her reaction...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...