Should I die or live for a while? MG SS Last part - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n emotional update
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It was so good... Loved the karva chauth sequence..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very emotional update...

I can't believe Geet can do this to Maan...

did she really left him because he is not rich...

a women who kept fast for his long life left him to die...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the update
know i understand that maaneet moments were in the past
i hope that everything that happened to cause them to split was a misunderstanding
can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update. What happened in past? Major misunderstanding. Look forward to update...
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superb update thanks for the pm
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Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...loved maaneet...cute...why dis geet leave...poor maan...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aage Kya hua dear
Plz next part jaldi dena
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 4
nice...
did she leave him?
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Should I die or live for a while? Part 5

Flashback...
Geet came towards Maan.
MAAN:Geet,don't worry.We both will fight together.We will regain whatever we lost.
GEET:Do you think you will be able to regain whatever you lost?It's a huge loss.Not just lakhs.
MAAN:Geet,i am confident.
GEET:But i am not confident Mr.Maan Singh Khurana.I don't think you can regain anything.
Her rough tone shocked him.
GEET:I have always lived like a Princess.One fine day I can't start living like a poor lady.I have always had a luxurious life.
Geet was not his lady love whom he knew.
GEET:So i am going.
Maan was shocked:Geet!What are you saying?
GEET:I am not joking Maan.I am telling the truth.
He could'nt believe her change.
She showed some papers.
GEET:Divorce papers.Please sign it.We will have a mutual divorce.
He was shattered.He was'nt able to accept the truth.
MAAN:What about the love we shared?Can you just forget it in a few moments?
GEET:Can i have a comfortable life just with our love?No.Right?Then what's the point in living with you?

Maan burst into tearGeet:So money is more important than love?
GEET:Of course!Without money how can we be happy?We can't even have a romantic date.Why don't you understand this Maan?

Tears flowed from his eyes.

Maan and Geet signed the divorce papers in front of the lawyer.Maan could'nt believe Geet signing the divorce paper without any pain on her face.She looked at her face.Without even biding 'Good-Bye' for a formality she left.He cried.
His heart wept:
Ab hai saamne
Ishe chhuu loon zara
Marr jaaun ya jee loon zaraaa
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loon zara
Marr jaaun ya jee loon zaraa...{Agneepath}.

Present...
Maan:Actually it is when Geet left me i became poor.
Gauri and Daksh wept hearing his sad love story.
MAAN:I was not willing to live without Geet.In order to gain her back i worked harder.I became a millionaire.But then i was diagnosed with cancer.Now how can i call Geet back to my life?I am dying no.I have money.But i have no life or love.My life was Geet;my love.But...
Daksh:Just forget her Maan.
Gauri:Yes.Geet does'nt deserve your love.
The doctor came out of the room.
He:Soorya has regained his consciousness.
They were very happy.
He:But be very careful.Nothing should hurt him.It can put his life in danger again.
They ran towards Soorya.Soorya was very emotional.
Gauri lost her control and embraced him.
G:I lost my life when your condition became serious.
Everyone including Soorya was shocked by Gauri's reaction.
D:Gauri!
G:Daksh,what i told Satya was not just something which came out of sudden anger.I really love Soorya.
They were shocked.Soorya could'nt believe it.
GEET:What are you saying Gauri?
G:We are dying patients.That does'nt mean that we can't fall in love.Only a few more days are left for us.But we can love each other and live happily till we die.Right?
GEET:Gauri!
G:Are you still dreaming about the girl who does'nt love you?
D:Yes Soorya.You are lucky that at last before dying you got someone who truly loves you.Don't neglect her love.
Soorya wept holding Gauri's hand.She became happy and emotional.
They went to an imaginary world which was filled with beautiful yellow flowers.There they had cute romantic moments.Soorya who was a musician played his guitar for his lady love Gauri.
Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago

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