Should I die or live for a while? MG SS Last part - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
loved the update
so sad that geet left maan because he was poor
i have a feeling that geet did not leave maan because he was poor
she might have left him for another reason
can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
great update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
saddy saddy updates ...wi s maan suffering lik thz...wer s it gona end...:-(:-(:-(:-(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Should I die or live for a while? Part 6

After a few days...
Soorya went towards Daksh.
S:Daksh,you have a visitor.
D:Visitor for me in Malaysia?I don't have anyone here.
S:She came here searching for you.
Daksh could'nt believe it.
D:Naina?
S:You you guessed that person.She is the person whom you loved silently.
D:Yes.I wanted to propose to her after getting a job.But before getting a job itself i became a cancer patient.Why did Naina come here?
S:What is she came here to confess her feelings?She may also have love for you.
Daksh was numb.
S:If she loves you don't ignore her love thinking that you are a cancer patient.
D:But?
S:When i lost my health and Satya i thought my life is dry.But Gauri's love gave me a positive attitude towards life.
Maan:Daksh,go ahead.
Daksh smiled.
He went out.He saw Naina smiling at him.
D:Naina!
N:You did'nt expect me here.Right?
He did'nt say anything.
N:How could you just disappear one fine day without even informing me where you went?Am i not anyone for you?I am at least your neighbour.Right?
He said in his mind:You are not just my neighbour Naina.Whenever i close my eyes i see your lovely eyes which i was scared to claim because of my cruel disease.
N:I searched for you a lot.You told your family members not to tell me about your whereabouts.Right? Why Daksh?
She looked at his eyes.
N:Your eyes say a lot of things to me.
D:You can't understand anything.
N:I can understand everything Daksh.Finally your mother told me that you got admitted in the hospital.
Daksh was shocked.
D:Ya...the doctor was very kind.He gave me free treatment.
N:Daksh,let us not be sentimental now.I came here to tell you something.
D:What?
He looked at her shining eyes.
N:What you hid in your eyes all these years.
She carassed his face:I love you Daksh.
He felt like crying though he was happy.
D:Naina,i have no hope.I won't survive.I will die soon.My condition is bad.
Her eyes got filled up with tears:It does'nt make any difference for me.Before you leave this world i want to belong to you completely Daksh.Please don't say no by breaking my heart.
She embraced him crying.He could'nt resist.He embraced her back.
His heart sang out of joy of love.
'Dil.. hote jo..
Mere seene mein do
Doosra dil bhi mein
Tumhe deta todhne ko ..

Ho..o.. Hossana.. Hosanna..oo
Ho..o.. Hossana.. Hosanna..oo

Dilkash thi woh shaam
Pehle peher jabke tumse mili thi nazar
Aisa chakkar aaya ke
Ab yeh na jaanu ke
Jaun toh jaun kidhaar ??
Hosanna
Tu samne thi ek paal
Hosanna

Agle he paal thi ojhal
Abb kya bataaon main
Kis haal mein hoon main ?
Yaha waha bus apna
Dil aur hosh dhunta hoon main

Hosanna
Madhoshi deewangi
Hosanna
Main aur teri bandagi
Hosanna
Ab hai yehi zindagi
Hosanna...' {Ek Deewana Tha}.
Soorya,Maan and Gauri came smiling.They clapped their hands.
Daksh and Naina smiled at them.

MAAN:We feel very happy for you both.
They smiled.
N:I want to tell you something.You all should have a check up here.After leaving India only Soorya was tested.Right?
D:I feel like living more.
S:Me too.
G:That is because we all are in love.
They looked at Maan.He was upset.
D:Maan!You are looking very upset.
MAAN:I am not that upset.After i got you all as my friends i feel happy.I got a new life through you all.
They all hugged him.

They all went to the hospital.
Suddenly Maan's eyes struck a lady.He was shocked.
His lips moved:Payal!How cum she here?
He raised his voice:Payal!
Payal turned back.
She was shocked to see him.
P:Jeeju!
She ignored him and walked away.Maan ran after her and held her hand.Payal was shocked.
MAAN:Why did you run away seeing me?
She did'nt say anything.
MAAN:Why are you here?Why do i feel that you are hiding something from me?
P:Nothing like that.I..I...i came here to see a patient.
MAAN:Patient?
P:Ya..our relative.
MAAN:As far as i know your relatives do not stay in Malaysia.
P:Why not?Can't they come here for treatment?
MAAN:Ya..of course.
P:Ok...i am going.
She moved away sweating.
She thought:For a moment i thought that the truth will come out.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
nice update
I think geet is having some disease
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Nice update
Thanks 4pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
part 5
nice...
poor Maan...
how could Geet do this to him?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
nice part
everyone find their love except geet
maan saw payal geet's sister in hospital i think maybe geet also has some diasease but she hide that from maan well it's my guess
but ab wo kya sach hai jo payal chupa rahi hai wo to agle hi update mein pta chalega
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
no dont tell me she too is ill
which is why she left him
how did this happen man
but am glad now even daksh has someone
gosh that scene between daksh and naina had mein tears
fate cant be that cruel to them right
please it cant be
hmmm cant wait to find out whats wrong with geet
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...da couples r cute...is geet a cancer patient 2...is she is da same hospital...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm

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