The Downpour#3 (Thread 4 link @ Pg 142)

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Downpour reached on 3rd thread ..Yieee
Congrats And Thank You sooo much for making me to reach here





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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread & waiting for update...
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The Downpour... Part 21

The effect of fronting each-other in such awkward condition, it was too much for them to deal with. Rather their feelings were different and uncompleted yet, but still these fresh emotions were more difficult to hold in by their child heart. They had just started their journey on this path and even in starting they had to face the wildness of circumstance.

Geet was breathing heavily. She clutched heart firmly to control thrill. Her mind was so mess to think what she should do! How would she face him now? Her face turned in red in embarrassment. His eyes which she had just witnessed were making her feel so shy. The way he was looking her, when she remembered, her heartbeat became high, automatically a slight smile touched her lips. Eagerness developed in her heart to see him and she peeped out from slightly opened door.

Maan was so much in shock with his own reaction. He was never like this, never had reacted this weirdly. "What were you doing Maan!!! Have you gone mad??'' Mentally he was cursing himself but mind was being so adamant, was not ready to accept that he did wrong!

He was engrossed in thoughts when felt someone's eyes on him. He turned at once and saw a beautiful eye between the parts of door and at once it disappeared. He smiled on his victory where as Geet was ten times more embarrassed.

Ankhon Se Ankhen Milti Hai Aise
Bechain Hoke Toofan Mein Jaise
Mauj Koi Saahil Se Takraaye
Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera Diwana
Bhool Koi Hamse Na Hojaye

Song was playing his role profoundly. It was yet singing in full volume forcing Geet to be concealed from him. She had no spirit to come out and turn it off and Maan, somewhere he was enjoying its charisma.

He smiled on his own thought. How his own heart was not ready to accept defeat and wished to see her again. But he knew, that would be embarrassing for both, more for Geet and so he decided to relieve the situation. He searched for the source of song and turned it off. He came back and had a quick glimpse of home. It looked different than yesterday and guessed why'.

He liked her effort that he knew, she had done it deliberately. When Geet realized now she has to face him at any cost, came out. Maan was facing back to her. He smelled fresh fragrance of shampoo and came to know, she was there, may be standing behind! He turned.

He could not take his eyes off from her. He knew.. Knew very well it was not good manner, he had to keep control on his thoughts but like his mind had lost connection with heart. It was not listening anything, just kept staring her. Her hair was trying to be free from the roll she had tied. The embarrassment she was trying hard to hide was still visible on her face, turning it into scarlet red. He had uncontrolled wish to touch them, feel them below his lips. His thoughts were going inflamed, untamed. He cursed himself, why the hell he did come here! He sensed if doesn't stop it now, something blunder he definitely would do. But he was helpless.

Silence was dominating all over. They were not sure where to start and finally Maan took first step. He coughed.

"Shall we start Geet''

She nodded but was confused 'what!' to start and then he headed a file to her. She looked him puzzled.

"This is our new project file Geet that you would have to work on from tomorrow. I wanted you to read it thoroughly because; you wouldn't get much time to do so when it would be started. I had got a little bit free time so thought to utilize it discussing about project with you and so I did come here. I also didn't have my breakfast today so send maid to make something of my favorite. I hope you didn't mind, did you?''

Maan prayed mentally, to make her convince with reasons he had just kept before her. He watched her expressions carefully and she smiled. His heart started jumping. And then she asked

"But why doctor sir?''

Well, MSK was so much ready for this question also.

"Geet being owner of a MNC I always keep eyes on my staffs. I knew you're health was not so good but this project needs you. So I sent my family doctor to see you and tell as how more days your health would take to be recovered completely, so that I could make my schedules according to this''

Wow' Geet felt really proud to be working with this famed company. She was convinced.

"Thank God'' He sighed.

She settled table for both. Her nervousness had disappeared and now excitement overcame. She was so eager to make him taste Kheer.

"But don't know if he would like it or not'' She was not so sure.

She served it in a bowl and kept along with foods. Maan took seat and gestured her to sit too but Geet mind was focusing toward him only and when he started eating, her eyes was glimpsing as when he would taste Kheer and when he took it, a full of spoon in mouth, her breath stuck in throat in curiosity.

Maan tasted it. His face was blank and so was Geet's. She was expecting him to say something then cursed herself mentally,

"How would he know that who made this!! You're so mad Geet, you didn't even tell him that you have made it!!''

Both finished their lunch. Geet was so disappointed thinking why didn't she tell before but now it wouldn't look good asking about it and nor she had courage to open mouth. She gathered plates and walked to kitchen when heard,

"Btw Geet, Kheer was delicious. Thanks!!''

She looked him back. He was smiling. She smiled too and left happily, with so much happiness in her little heart.

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They were discussing on project sitting, facing each-other. Geet was so engrossed reading file where as Maan was lost in noticing her each and every gesture. How she was rolling her fingers in curls which was disturbing and kissing her ears. How her big light brown beautiful eyes blinked so softly when she was engrossed in reading. Every time, when she felt confusion, small thin lines would have been appeared on her forehead and then she smiled, when herself would find out solution. Her lips, it was the most alluring asset she had. She was thoroughly murmuring the words which were writing in papers and Maan was reading them through her lips and then he read, she was murmuring his name!!

His heart started beating fast!!! "Is she taking my name??'' And then he heard her voice along with gentle stroke on his shoulder.

"Maan sir' Maan sir!!!''

And he found she had been calling him. His gone sense came back.

"Maan sir, this point I'm not getting??'' She showed a problem but Maan was not in condition to answer her, otherwise definitely, he would do something stupid.

"Hmm Geet, I forgot, I had to make a call"'

Somehow he excused and walked far from her.

"It's not that easy to be near her as I had thought Maan. I afraid, soon Maan Singh Khurana will be counted in craziest man of this world!!!'' He laughed out loud, feeling self-pity and stared her who was so much occupied by the file. Somehow he managed to control his condition and came back.

Suddenly they heard thunder sound, perhaps it was raining outside. Geet face brightened up hearing it. She so much loved rain.

"What happened Geet"'

"Sir, seems it's raining!!!!''

He saw brightness in her eyes. "You like rain''

"No sir, I just love it!!You know, I want to see this rain, smell it, to play in it but you know here inside, of this walls I can't even hear the sound of it properly"

Maan saw a restlessness in her, a kind of like a child desires for her favorite thing. His heart felt strong yearns to complete her wish.

"Geet do you want to see this rain?''

Her eyes widen. "No sir I was just.. I meant I didn't mean''' She was so amazed

"Geet, don't take it personal okay! That way I'm going to visit site I think you should come with me too. It will help you in project"

She grinned, happily agreed.

Maan was more than happy today'.


Precap : "Sir one minute, your cloth will be drenched in rain, please wear this''

Maan was shocked to the core when found it was the same jacket which he had given to a stranger girl


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😊


Awww.. they r in love...
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Congrats Mona..





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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new thread

awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread
Cute part
Precap...interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome part...
loved it...
geet feeling embarrassing to go before him...
maan was total gone case ...he kept watching her antics all the time.while she reading the project file...
he complimented her kheer...
oh god he is such a genious he coverd everthing with opt reasons ...and...geet belived him...

nice precap...she is giving his jocket to him ...now he will come to know he gave that jocket to her...
waiting for next part
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hai yaaron...

hell tired today... ungliyaan hilaane ke bhi himmat nahi hai... but didnt want to miss meeting u... kya haal hai??? missed u all a lot...
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awesome update
loving to see geet so free with maan
and msk has lost it completely😆 and he is even happy with it😉

congrats for new thread

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