MG SS - VIVAH part 5 & 6 page 38 (9/5/15)

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01leothelion

@01leothelion

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

very nice one... gonna be a regular reader of this one...

very just one request, please do keep that angry (not much wala), but that strict msk somewhere in your story; as it adds to the charm of MSK.

best of luck

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Beautiful update.

Awesome

Maan coming to see Geet. Geet hell nervous. Their meeting was sweet. Family gathering.
Everyone liked Geet painting very much.

Rishta Pakka. Waiting for more
Continue soon.

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neethu

@neethuMG

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

nice one like it..

wtng for the next

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

part 1
lovely start dear...
nice...
cont soon...

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

nice...update n do pm me...

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

TEASER

He dragged maan to corner n asked "wht"maan made faces n said "kya bhai baat karni h mujhe geet se" when sujal said "abhi toh baat ki thi na tum dono ne" maan made cute face n said "kaha bhai she was too silent bas jo pucha uska jawab de rahi thi" sujal smiled at his lil. Bro n said "maan who aachanak se kaese bolne lagegi time toh de use, n bhai shabh ab nahi mil sakte aap use phir kavi" maan pouted n said "plzz bhai just once before engagement plzzz" sujal looked at maan pleading face n said "okh will think" on which maan said "think kya bhai aap mere lie itna nahi kar sakte kya plzzz pllzzz" on which sujal smiled n said "okh" maan smiled n hugged sujal n they were returning when they find armaan standing there.

will try to update cant promise 😭

Edited by geetsmile - 11 years ago