two updates together for me
it was a treat dear
sorry for late comment dear
and u r really wonderful dear as a person
the way u r giving us updates
oh thank u so much dear
taking out time for ur writing
as if keeping up an unsaid promise to ur readers
thank u so much dear Maggie
and now abt the update
brilliant dear
u know the way u portray the emotions of ur character can stir any one and can create storm of emotions in ur readers
maan's pain his inner turmoil, his helplessness
all were written so brilliantly
the two women in his life who he thought are of no importance to him
or in actuality his life for him
superb dear
then maan and geet fiasco in hospital
and he calling her his wife
and the reason for it
was so thoughtful of him
and the way u inculcate nature in ur work is really amazing
geet could not meet his gaze due to heavy rain
it was so beautiful
u know the person who invented atoms or molecules
I feel like u can describe all the atoms , molecules , proton or all the minutest feeling of a person in such detail so that we can actually feel it
and u describe it so well even better than when we go through such emotions personally
but I don't know whether I am able to describe what I feel after reading ur brilliant work
all I want to say is
u r an amzing writer and u have tremendous potential dear
loved ur updates dear
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