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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Awesum and lovely part. Loved lasya and Geet's part.

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

I really felt the pinch when Lasya assumed,geet was talking about Vicky..It seemed like,lasya has lost every hope in her and her elder son's relationship.She wasn't expecting his presence in hospital..!!

Then the happiness that she felt after knowing about maan,made me smile and brought tears to my eyes all together..!!!

I loved Geet's interaction with Lasya..She is pretty casual with her now..I admire the way you have put up this change in her..It was not quick but slow and subtle,like it used to happen in real life too,when we come closer to a stranger...!!!

Along with lasya,she is pretty much opening with Maan too..She keeps on throwing her bitter words at him to make him realize his mistake..!!! But today ,Maan had also touched a sore spot of her..!!! I hope,both would be able to come out from their pasts very soon...!!!

No need to tell,how beautiful your writing is...

You are awesome-st...!!!😊

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

I loved the background music... one of my favs..

She tries not to get close to Lasya and as much as she does, we discover how closely bound to her she is. Her roothna, her "brat"😆, her scare, she has infinite ways to show her caring and love.

He is her opposite. Will terrorize the doctors and nurses, even Geet to some degree but he won't find a way to break the wall. I have seen this stark difference between men and women before.

Lasya, I love. She did not even think it would be him for a moment. It would be Vicky who would do that. The surprise for her, the tear in her eye that he cared. I can't wait for a day when he engulfs Lasya in his arms.

The burn of the coffee on her fingers and his protective gesture again to save her from a fall speaks to everything he notices about her.

Finally she has lifted the veil of indifference and lashed out at him. He cannot help but open up what he knows about her too. This is the most he has expressed himself to her.

We need a bandaid large enough for both of them.

Superb awesome lovely update.

I can never get enough of your writing!

Thanks for updating...

❤️always!

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

beautiful update

thanx for the pm

cont soon dear

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Turbulence: Both MG in this turbulence, stirred yet not bowing down. Yet there's much awakening taking place.

I loved the bond forming between Geet-Lasya, they're bond had formed but post this incidence it has deepened. It might because Geet has come off her shell due to the fear of loosing on mother while Lasya finds in her the child she could shower all her love & affection which she has kept within her for a son who has been distant from her.

Lasya is understanding Geet as an open book, like a mother. After all a mother's heart knows ans recognizes what is going on in her child's mind & heart. Geet is now her child a very dear & loved one.

For Geet, the fear of losing a mother this time that too after experiencing & living the love & care of a mother has made her come off her shell of introvert, insecure & hesitant. The love & care Lasya showered on her selflessly as a mother has made her confident and secure within herself that has brought her hidden shade that she uses to be protect and save from any harm coming on her Mother even if it means resisting the said mother's son.

Geet's words --- I'm done with Khurana's, Brat and cockiness 🤣 Oh my I'm loving this new gradual transition in Geet. She has become more adorable. Especially calling him "Brat" (Kyun ji noodles apne qualities Maan pe daaal rahi ho... 😉)

Maan ❤️ I loved his guised concern & love. Indeed Love works in mysterious ways. He is in love with these two ladies of his life however much he denies it & resists saying they mean nothing at all to him. He made a nurse scared for her life just because she wasn't there to tend to his Mom when she just stirred. Great goodness it was limited only to the nurse... 😆😉

Lasya didn't even want to imagine it to be Maan who was concerned for her, she thought it was Vicky. My Vicky isn't a brat. He is so adorable, sweet & loving. He can't ever make anyone's life hell. 😳😆

"An apple a day keeps the doctor away." 🤣

I so want this mother-son Lasya Maan to come close soon. That too without any inhibition or past wounds.

Geet-Maan interaction was much needed. They both are hurt and wounded by past scars yet only they're acquainted and aware of that vulnerability in the other's life. They are connected to each other in more ways than pain & hurt, connected with the healing of those scars caused years back. Maan -Geet have been hurt & they continue hurting each other but then that's needed showing how they're affected and aware of each other, even the pain. But then its only them who understands the level of pain & hurt and can truly soothe.

Hoping that Geet will be able to start healing this mother-son especially the Ma(a)n here, as they've helped and have started the healing in her life.

Continue soon. 😊

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

do chehro se jeena bhi

kaise majboori hai

jitna hai koi nazdeek

utni doori hai

phoolon ke sapne lekar

kaaton pe sona hai

jeevan kya hai

chaltha phirtha ek khilona hai

do aankhon mein

ek se hasna aur ek se rona hai

door pahadi ke peeche jab sooraj dhaltha hai

parchai jaisa koi saanso mein jaltha hai

bhooli bisri yaadon ko

ashkon se dhona hai

jeevan kya hai

chaltha phirtha ek khilona hai

do aankhon mein

ek se hasna aur ek se rona hai

beautiful as usual shikha . I can never get enough of ur writing ❤️loved it continue soon .

Edited by hermoso - 12 years ago

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

lovvveddd it...am loving the story😊😊

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

LOVED THE WAY SHE CALLED HIM BRAT

LASYA WAS SURPRISED TO KNOW IT WAS MAAN WHO WAS TERRORISING THE HOSPITAL

WHEN WILL HE EXPRESS HISMSELF TO LASYA

BOTH ARE HIDING IN THEIR PAST

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Edited comment just above 😊

Oh ya I forgot to mention...now that Lasya will be discharged, let her come for follow up check ups with Vicky... 😉 (You know why? 😳)

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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-jaanleva-

@-jaanleva-

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Laasya and Geet just melt my heart, the mother-daughter type relationship between them is just so sweet and endearing.

Is Vicky aware of her having a heart attack?

It seems that Laasya's health scare has increased Maan's eagerness to prove himself as someone other than a cold hearted stone - especially towards Geet... although he hides himself behind a mask, the concern he showed when she burnt her wrist is more than enough evidence to show how he's really starting to feel about her...

I wonder if Geet will be clued up enough to realise sooner or later, or if her mind will be too clogged by her current dislike towards him to think otherwise.

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