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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
congrats on new thread!!

awesome update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
I have said this before but I feel the need to say it again after reading the chapter. You have an amazing way of blending what actually happened in the show, to the storyline of SOL. Very innovative, the way you make it seem like it belongs here, so naturally that you leave me (and I'm sure the other readers too!) spellbound. Hats off Aash! 👏

And I love one more thing whenever you use a song from the show and mould it to this story's requirement. Even if I don't have YT and I can't watch the video you insert, I can still close my eyes and watch it play behind my eyelids. And what I see, I really love!

All the emotions felt, the restlessness to reach Maan, the fear of facing him, the tranquility of having divine blessing, the love flowing through her eyes, all of it was described wonderfully. I especially liked the italicised words. Those are the words which truly describe the pivotal point and the change taking place in their lives.

At the point when she hugs him from the back, I could actually see the hug after Wo Hain Zara Khafa Khafa when she apologises to him.

Talking their hearts all out in front of each other was what they really needed and Geet has done exactly that. She has let out her guilt, accepted her fault and verbalised her feelings for him, making it easier for him to relieve himself from the clutches of his own guilt. Maan is a man of few words but at such a time, he too should have shared what really was going through his mind. I don't blame him for hesitating, though. It is believed that it's very hard to forgive someone. True, but one thing that nobody considers is that, it's even harder to forget any hurtful words or actions thrown your way. Some little part of the unintentionally inflicted pain still stays in our mind, making us question ourselves and draw into a shell.

The first conscious kiss, right? 😳 Happy times at the doorstep!

I know their life has just started to get normal and they do have some time before the recent storm - which leads to the present day - shatters everything, but I still felt fearful of how long or short that 'some time' is going to be...

By the way, I liked Maan's CD better. For two reasons. One, it was Maan's. 😳 And two, I prefer his feelings expressed through one single song over those multitude Annie used in hers.

And so the 48 hours are up and rightly so! Geet Maan ki baahon mein, never mind the hurdles that crossed their path!

Thanks for updating Aash! Eager to read more! 🤗
Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesome update
maaneet made up with each other
i love the song 'teri deewani'
waiting for more updates
can't wait for geet to find out about her boss 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
after all this it will be interesting to see Geet's reaction to her boss..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow, so finally they kissed and made up😆... maan bhi zyada bhaav kha raha hai..kameena kahin ka...my poor geet ko kitne nakre sehne pad rahe hain... kameeni when are we going to know what went wrong that geet left him... i am getting more curious with each passign update😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyyy steppie

Dono ka patch up finally
Awesome updt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Superb update 👍🏼
Maaneet kiss 😳
Geet's boss... 😉
Edited by -padma- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
res will un res at night...so happy with the kissie
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Hayee loving it waise maan ka version was good but bit boring and annie's version was very hot and happening par geet has proven herself to be jhalli by first shouting on maan for that cd and then complementing it but i thought maan would kiss (on the lips) her in the office only but its okay bedroom main hi sahi par kiya toh
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I like both the CDs. difficult to say which is better.

Great update, thanks.

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