Shackles of Love#32#MG Chapter 73-75

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Dargah scene u took vd a difference and narration was superb

Dev is such a nice person...

In my last comment I forgot to say dat I too liked Annie's version better

Maan is so pissed dat geet suggested to b better for next time

I loved der cute fight...

M shocked dat she stopped him n said gud night...

Edited by maanmeet1 - 12 years ago

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

finally they r together...

geet find annie CD morw interesting 😆

bechara maan

lovely update

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

wow! mean that the word can come up with after reading the update.
The dargah scene was so beautifully written. Them the confession, and all. Loved it. Maan and Geet, and they don't argue atleast once day is not possible. Lol, Geet's cribbing. Well to be honest also liked Annie's CD more. It was hilarious.

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash
no net

wailsss

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Deepa

@spvd

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

part 73
awesome dear...
finally they talked...
this Darga scene always makes things easier and also so pious...
oh i was missing this POKING business so much...
but loved it dear...
cont soon...

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thekolgal

@thekolgal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

U rock...what an update...especially loved the way how Geet was giving Maan a "constructive criticism" 😉...amazing...update soon 😊

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

aaannn

i missed this Update in morning b'cse of my MARA HUA NET...grrr

awesone dhansu update yar Aashu,muahhh

kah EMO'S work kertay to MAZAYDAR cmmnt kerti...

but Afsoos...

ajj Sokhay cmmnt se kaam chalana pad raha hai...

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

lovely update

each scene was thought out and written

geet's restlessness to meet him and running into the dargah searching or him

the peace on seeing him praying

the silence between them after the storm

her going to office in guilt and then her confession which finally gave him solace

annie's cd was more fun and lively but how could she expect him to sleep after such a hot kiss is beyond me - maan needs to complete her education in this department