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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

rishto main chupa hua kuch ,

kai baar ,

chupa deta hai ,

mitta deta hai,

sab kuch !

ahsaas pyaar ka ,

ek ajib sa khel hai yaar ka ,

saath uska sabse pyaara lage ,

ek uski hasi ke liye ,

sab kuch gayaana bhi ,

haar na lage !

par phir ,

kai baar ,yahi pyaar

dekar kuch alag si hi duhai !

karvaa deta hai ,

yaar se hi bewafaai !

uska ,ek pal mere saath na hona ,

maaf karde ga ek pal ko yeh dil

par phir ,

usi ek pal main ,

kissi aur ke hone ne ,

mujh main hai aag lagaai

yeh aag hai uss junoon ki

jo bah raha hai mujhe tera pyaar ban kar !

par ab kya kare ,

jab issi aag ne

basne se pahle hi ,

hamaai duniya hai jalaai

haaye yeh ishq

aur ishq ki ruswaai

kyu yeh ada yaar ki

kabhi bhi mujhe na raas aayi

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Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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ariz2000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet
in reets fics she tends to do happy ending

keep faith sweetheart !

much love
Reet!

Aww...thanks a lot 4 reply😳

A big Thank you 4 all ur efforts regarding this ff🤗

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NephilimByHeart

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Posted: 12 years ago

#463

plz dont make arjun suffer only beacuse he loved geet beyond everything ... its not fair reet ...

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daredevilisback

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Posted: 12 years ago

#464

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singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#465

Very painful ...😭

Both r equally hurt and broken...🥺

The main coz of this rift is their Communication Gap...

Sply from Maan's side...he hide so many things...😡

Now d damage is done...🥺

Both r wrong at their places...

Onir is right here...👍🏼

The bigger question is now who is to blamed for it all. Is it the circumstances faced, their own egos, their own weakness, insecurities, shackles of past, or solely their fate, so much of heart break just because own judgments were wrong. Why did they allow third person to interfere that only shows the foundation wasn't strong enough to sustain it all. Two souls meant to be bonded together were left with a loneliness that only the other can remove yet with so much distance that even fate seems helpless. They were both living in a web of lies & betrayals that the other person's image was always hazy. A storm came and shattered the already shaken home build on a shaky foundation of strong egos, insecurities, lack of trust, communication gap and own weaknesses. This was bound to happen.

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love2_soma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#466

cant comment coz hate dis twist...

painful update...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...