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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

so are we getting an update today?? 😃 i know its cruel to ask for an update now even after getting such a looong looong part justt yday,...sorry cant help/...1st thing i do after waking up these days is checking ur thread for updates n comments n replies😳


me 2 s doing same 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...poor maan/Arjun :(...kya kare always partial toward maan ;)
one more thing i like abt ur ff is that geet also makes mistake...not always maan...or some time more that maan😃
Just love this story and actualy we could feel all happening in front of us...u are blessed writter.
waitng for ur update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
An Explosive and heart - breaking update🥺

Kehte hain, 'yeh isqh nahin aasan ... ek aag ka darya hain aur doob ke jaana hain'

Maan already had more than a fair share of hardships, and now it is time for Arjun to fight back( i really hope so, he doesn't buckle down this time...)

and Geet, what can i say 'Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned' and right now all she feels is deciet, not just infidelity but also snatching of a dream, what she feels her connection to her Dad and that to by the man she loved and trusted...despite her misgivings, no doubt she feels absolut betrayal- add a scumbag like Vikas to this already twisted tale and we have a disaster at hand...i think Dia's role is going to be a deciding factor here... ofcourse it all depends on how u make her a vamp/ miss goody two shoes.

how do you type such long chapters👏 ...pheew i'm exhausted after typing this comment..

however bad it gets, but m sure you're gonna make it all better ... in time
Edited by Sphinx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 18
OMG that shocking...
one question dear, who told her Darji about Arjun in the before updates?
and Geet i never thought i would change my opinion this soon...
she deserves the pain she will get later...
how could she?
actually she deserves such a guardian - Darji, would be hubby - Dev, friend - Vikas...
poor Maan...
hes trying to salvage everything but things are turning out to be so worse...
and Geet she will never be able to forgive herself if she goes on this idea of that creep Vikas...
Maan should have yelled at her hes her husband when she had asked who is he to her...
i just wanna kill that Vikas...
damn him and that stupid Zaria fell for this...
in fact Maan's life is gonna be difficult and Geet's destroyed...
in last comment i didnt want Geet to be hurt and wanted ehr happy but now on i just want Maan to be happy and free from all these shackles...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 18 - omg ...what a update yaar...its too painful...i hate this vikas...he did all this just to take revange on geet ...that she played a prank on him...but what are her friends for...i dont expect from zaria but su...she could have understood and should not be part of vikas' harrasment logic...oh geet...pl think rationaly...you can ask dia also before accusing him...ufff...you could have cleared everything...and baouve all mr sahay is there to do everything what AR tell him...AR will be more than happy that his 'raste ka kaanta' is going away
ple reet make geet not to complaint anything...or do something and save arjun
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Posted: 12 years ago
now very eager to know what will happen...
pl update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 16

Geet has such great friends! They understand her well and care for her.

Geet is sad and guilty and Arjun is deeply hurt. She confessed her feelings for him. What a passionate confession!

Awesome update!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 17

Beautiful update!

Totally loved Arjun-Geet's sweet moments.

She trusts him, but the circumstances and people around her are making her trust to waver and her insecurities are not helping either.

Though Dia apparently means no harm, she is still there between them. Arjun needs to come clean, I feel.

Anant makes me sick with his vileness, selfishness and arrogance. He simply doesn't care about Geet. He should rot in hell!

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Posted: 12 years ago

The soundless breaking of trust echoed throughout this part!!😊

To tell the truth I am not even remotely surprised with the update. Expected ..after all the open loops you kept on putting deliberately time and again in the story... had to blow out like this. But what surprised me is how things shaped up in the end. Sexual harrasment..is'nt it like stooping too down for a woman like geet. Lets not forget she is the daughter of Uday Raichand, she is expected to fight fair.Even when Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned .!this woman is one of principles and valor. I am kind of glad that u stopped there..so d suspense here is wud she or wont she resort to this dirty level just to teach arjun a lesson? I am putting my bet on SHE WONT. Dekhte hai AAPNE kya decide kra h REET!😊

How can Maan hit her? He disappointed me. He is the one at fault who couldn't give her that sense of security. He had no right. The situation, he has put her into..lot of damage. The whole union room scene..so moving. I feared what if she had a nervous breakdown?

You asked me to trust you arjun .

I have trusted you , blindly . you know that right ?

.i trusted you with my soul . I trusted you with my body .

I m trusting you now arjun . tell me .. anything .

give me something to believe in .

please arjun .. dont do this to me .

have lost enough in life ..just cant lose you .

arjun ..

please ...

Arjun felt tears stung in corner of eyes . looking at her , this broken , begging at him was suffocating .

He was about to spill everything when she laughed . menacingly , then tiredly , then helplessly .poorly .

The laugh ended in tears .. she was still laughing with her voice choking with tears .

This was the high point for me in the update..the helplessness,the searing pain..class depiction.👏

le beta . khush hone chala tha na .ho le ab !! The whole monologue that maan had here takes my mind for that one fleeting second to his pain. But srsly u r the one to be blamed here Maan(actually reet is😆) You procrastinated revelations way too much..hoping that u can salvage it. Your bad! Srsly Maan has to do a lot to win my respect back..I am sure he would though😊. He is the mature one from the beginning. He was expected to handle it.

And Vikas..BOY..Start counting ur days!! You are so DEAD now. Felt bad for Zaria thg. I am expecting DIA will now play knight in shining armour and clear out things..and I wud have to like her then🤢. I wud be glad if I can hate vikas n dia both *evil*😈

So now I am looking forward to how efficiently u wud be able to clear the BIG MESS!! Testing times writer for u bt I am at ease...trust u enf as a writer. So here I am all glued to IF for the next part. Surprise mE!

Tk cr doc!🤗

PS: christina aguilera..her voice❤️ heard of HURT, beautiful,fighter,vry diff) gr8 pick

Edited by sarita21992 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

in reets fics she tends to do happy ending

keep faith sweetheart !


much love
Reet!


HAHAHAHAHHAA😆
Reet hasnt ended a single fiction till date (I guess😕, atleast the ones I know of)

Bin Tere, IlWE botha re dying for ur happy ending darling😉

NO offence: I understand it had never been intentional😊

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