The soundless breaking of trust echoed throughout this part!!😊
To tell the truth I am not even remotely surprised with the update. Expected ..after all the open loops you kept on putting deliberately time and again in the story... had to blow out like this. But what surprised me is how things shaped up in the end. Sexual harrasment..is'nt it like stooping too down for a woman like geet. Lets not forget she is the daughter of Uday Raichand, she is expected to fight fair.Even when Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned .!this woman is one of principles and valor. I am kind of glad that u stopped there..so d suspense here is wud she or wont she resort to this dirty level just to teach arjun a lesson? I am putting my bet on SHE WONT. Dekhte hai AAPNE kya decide kra h REET!😊
How can Maan hit her? He disappointed me. He is the one at fault who couldn't give her that sense of security. He had no right. The situation, he has put her into..lot of damage. The whole union room scene..so moving. I feared what if she had a nervous breakdown?
You asked me to trust you arjun .
I have trusted you , blindly . you know that right ?
.i trusted you with my soul . I trusted you with my body .
I m trusting you now arjun . tell me .. anything .
give me something to believe in .
please arjun .. dont do this to me .
have lost enough in life ..just cant lose you .
arjun ..
please ...
Arjun felt tears stung in corner of eyes . looking at her , this broken , begging at him was suffocating .
He was about to spill everything when she laughed . menacingly , then tiredly , then helplessly .poorly .
The laugh ended in tears .. she was still laughing with her voice choking with tears .
This was the high point for me in the update..the helplessness,the searing pain..class depiction.👏
le beta . khush hone chala tha na .ho le ab !! The whole monologue that maan had here takes my mind for that one fleeting second to his pain. But srsly u r the one to be blamed here Maan(actually reet is😆) You procrastinated revelations way too much..hoping that u can salvage it. Your bad! Srsly Maan has to do a lot to win my respect back..I am sure he would though😊. He is the mature one from the beginning. He was expected to handle it.
And Vikas..BOY..Start counting ur days!! You are so DEAD now. Felt bad for Zaria thg. I am expecting DIA will now play knight in shining armour and clear out things..and I wud have to like her then🤢. I wud be glad if I can hate vikas n dia both *evil*😈
So now I am looking forward to how efficiently u wud be able to clear the BIG MESS!! Testing times writer for u bt I am at ease...trust u enf as a writer. So here I am all glued to IF for the next part. Surprise mE!
Tk cr doc!🤗
PS: christina aguilera..her voice❤️ heard of HURT, beautiful,fighter,vry diff) gr8 pick
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