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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update

anant has planned to seperate maaneet.
he wanted geet to know about scholarship before maan would tell her about that.
vikas he used the situation against maan/arjun😡
geet didn't hear what arjun wanted to say and she accused him for cheating
when she comes to know the truth she will be the one to regret it
but arjun should have cleared the things instead of waiting for the right time
does anant know that arjun is maan or he just knows that he is geet's teacher
geet wants to complaint about arjun
she is not understanding what she is doing in anger
arjun will be shattered 😭
that was emotional and painful update
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 18

What an update! Painful and shocking!

I don't know who to blame. Maybe Arjun. Can't really say that Geet is wrong in her assumptions after what she came to know – both regarding the scholarship and their Kanpur trip. Though Arjun is not completely at fault, he could have spoken the truth. Geet would have been mad at him, but things would not have gone so bad.

Vikas is a b******! He already has a fiance and going around with Zaria and ruining lives of Geet and Arjun. I so want to kill him!

I had expected Geet's friends, especially Sunanda to act more wisely and reject Vikas's idea of pressing sexual harassment charges against Arjun, but guess even they were blinded by their friend's pain.

Hope that at least this Dia related misunderstanding is clarified soon, otherwise that Anant might take advantage of the situation and create further problems.

Waiting for the next part. Do continue real soon.


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Posted: 12 years ago
since you have given the offer, I would not only like to throw chappals but also stilettos, pums, tomatoes, rotten eggs, etc etc etc...😆
whatever it is I have faith in you...you will get them together no matter what that too for 'Always & Forever'...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
i feel geet is the one who suffer most
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Posted: 12 years ago



all are playing their own pawns...

Anant wanted heir in Geet so he has trapped her in his own plans...

Vikas wanted revenge so he made up whole story not realizing what will happen to Geet...

Maan wanted revenge so he came back as Arjun...hiding his true identity, played with her emotions...

in all this Geet is in receiving end...

Arjun's actions are bound to get misunderstood...he going out of way to help Dia was so wrong...he went to Kanpur with her not needed... he hided everything from Geet was wrong...

very very painful update...

when I was reading update my heart beats were increasing continuously dreading what comes next...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

in reets fics she tends to do happy ending

keep faith sweetheart !


much love
Reet!


I don't mind even if u give no happy ending...happy ending here means they living happily ever n I personally think now geet don't deserve that With arjun after accusing him of sexual harassment...she can have it wid dev...I know I may sound cruel n yeah reet I had told u r coming back after reading dat sad part but today I wud say U R BACK! dis update touched me I m not able to say anything but I m not able to, digest d fact dat geet is ready to complain for sexual harassment against arjun whom she claim to love not matter now scorn she is but dis is not d way today she proved she is not uday's daughter before she is anant grand daughter...I think will read few times more n den I comment... main kya kahu meri bolti band hai dimag kaam nai kar raha itna accha update tha
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my Reet... the update was so gripping, intense & breaking. Though I had expected & dreaded this happening yet when it came as this it still made me feel sad for these two souls.

The update started as something to cherish, spoke of happiness. Like a song of hope for love to blossom but then ended with a heart wrenching sob. There was start of hope & dream but what was left was shattered hearts & revenge, leaving a nightmare that one dreads to even recollect.

She was singing 'Haule haule pyaar' hoping that gradually he too will confess his love for her as for now her love is sufficient but then it just took a fraction of a minute to leave every dream & hope of hers broken to merciless pieces.

The bigger question is now who is to blamed for it all. Is it the circumstances faced, their own egos, their own weakness, insecurities, shackles of past, or solely their fate, so much of heart break just because own judgments were wrong. Why did they allow third person to interfere that only shows the foundation wasn't strong enough to sustain it all. Two souls meant to be bonded together were left with a loneliness that only the other can remove yet with so much distance that even fate seems helpless. They were both living in a web of lies & betrayals that the other person's image was always hazy. A storm came and shattered the already shaken home build on a shaky foundation of strong egos, insecurities, lack of trust, communication gap and own weaknesses. This was bound to happen.

He wanted to wait for an opportune moment to reveal it all to her, I feel it was just his defense to keep her with him a little while longer as he feared the consequences when it would come out. But then now I can only assume different consequences if he would have confessed on his own and not let someone else come and fill her already sensitive & betrayed self. Now it was so late that he was trapped in his own web of deceit.

The library scene was very good, the few moments of love filled coziness & comfort was there yet the building anticipation of what drastic change will take place hereon had me on edge not allowing me to have a smile seeing their love moments.

He feeling the vibes of something changing forever between them was like an aura an epilepsy patient gets before an attack of seizure... he was anticipating it yet he pushed it away. So much so that when he woke up from the attack he was left in a daze with nothing that he can change , yet will have to relive it numerous times as a sore & unhealing scar.

His wanting to hold her forever within him not letting her go holding a hand to her spoke of his dread and also the promise he wanted from her was speaking of his vulnerability. I hope she keep that promise of eventually coming back to him...

There's more... wait for me to come off.. 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
The scholarship and the whole revelation of the betrayal towards her was well brought out. Very sensitively dealt with it. It meant so much to her. What I observed was that both Arjun & the principal did have the same opinion on why must be Geet not so keen for the scholarship. Yet the intensity of hurt she felt differed with both, for Mr. Sahay she didn't feel anything as he didn't mean anything to her & also he didn't know anything of her attachment with her father & her need to get this scholarship. Whereas when the same view was put forward by Arjun... it took a different meaning for her. As she was already misled and also because he meant the world to her. The whole revelation was like the ripped band aid. She had with so much difficulty let go of it all & placed blind trust in him and it was all open wound for her all over again with the third person revelation.

Yet she kept Mum, didn't doubt him impulsively, she held onto the thin thread of trust & belief on him as she gave her whole self to him uninhibited. The whole pain was well portrayed.
..."This was the only man she had trusted. Blindly. Dreamed to have a future with, marry him, have a family, have kids, grow old. Only God knows the dreams were endless... " 👏

A girl believing so deep of it all, just speaks of how much of self & more she has invested in a relation. No girl can go so ahead and then take the pain & hurt. Inspite of all the pointed fingers at him she yet trusted him wanted him to be for her wholly & soulfully. Her plead was so touching...Please say no, I will believe every word you say. I promise Arjun. Oh my this was so painful because I knew all her hope & trust will be brutally be broken.

Maan though throughout the update i so wanted to blame him & curse him yet few moments were such that I just couldn't hate him. I felt for his pain too. Especially that line "Lo beta khush hone chale the na ... lo ho ab... " Though ti was a taunt to self & very lighter yet it spoke of his pain. He had wanted to leave it all behind and wanted to give them both a chance together but then it wasn't meant to be so. There was so much of his self being cut there. A mockery he was doing of self. Also how he perceived that Vikas without even entering his "Home" broke it in pieces. He had already in his mind build a home with her, he named it as home and not a relation. 👏 And then came the part where I really couldn't make myself to hate him, when he had that tear in his eyes reciprocal to the satisfaction of raw boated ego on Vikas's face.

The slap and its consequences will be very harsh I suppose.

The whole scene of Geet breaking down in Su's arms in referral of 'Baby' was very painful & kudos to you to portray it so well. The numbness & vulnerability was so contrast to her real self, that a person who wouldn't taken anyone's nonsense towards her was ready to do anything that would be dictated to her.

I had thought Su would react sensibly but then Vikas has made Arjun to be in such light that none of them are actually seeing but are blindfolded by the frame Vikas has put in front of them.

Vikas the less spoken the better. Sometimes the fire of youth takes you to such pedestal that you fail to notice what are you actions speaking of. You blame Arjun of two timing when you know it isn't so and also know that you can't point fingers when you are worst in that context.

I think things will be more complicated with involvement of it all. And also Dev is coming soon. Dia too is there in this whole equation. Will she defend Arjun and clear it out to Geet or she will take it for her advantage. ????

I somewhere feel the strong & real Geet won't resort to taking her revenge by complaining such lowly of Arjun. Whatever done such accusation is wrong. And if Geet does it then who will ever support a girl when it is real & not fake as such.

Waiting eagerly for more... 😊 And sorry for such long comments & tangent blabbering...





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Posted: 12 years ago
...dear😃
...4 pming me...😃
ur update sweety..😃
u done a dear...👏
keep the job up dear..👏..
keep ing dear...😃





dear.ILWTE...😳PLZZZ
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg what a heart wrenching update.
plz don't make geet to complain against arjun.
when these misunderstandings gonna be ended.😭😭😭
cont soon...


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