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Posted: 12 years ago
in mood of having an update ? anyone ??

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Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

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plz very much in mood
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have to read part 13 so will read both together than plz update
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Posted: 12 years ago
reet grinning wide .

okie ..!!

coming in 5 mins .
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Posted: 12 years ago
comments that have simply touched my heart

Originally posted by: dqno1

The chemistry you have created between them is crackling...I can feel the sizzle. The button part was adorable.

Adored the part of him dragging her to the kitchen. So much haq on her. Loved it.
Jealous of Dia. I don't blame her... chipku kahin ki... who leaves their diary in a prof's home.
What a revelation about their relation!
I never saw it coming.
Very nice surprise.
You know as long as your updates are I crave more.
You are a wonderful story teller.
Thanks for updating Reet...🤗



lol ..blushing hard avi ..thank you so much ..

do not forget to tell me how do you find chipku in this chapter .i will wait for u .
for my readers like you . i intend to write more n more

good u like button ..

let me if u like maan n geet at their young age . how u find them ?

Originally posted by: sarita21992

Two things that I absolutely loved in the whole update.

"Your past is always your past. Even if you forget it, it remembers you."

Marriage is not a noun; it's a verb. It isn't something you get. It's something you do. Its the way you love your partner every day.

Really impactful. Said a lot in just few words. That has been always ur strength. Amazing reading the part. I hope she comes clean about her past with maan before he gets a chance to. It would ensure less misunderstandings and make maan believe that the innocence in her eyes is not a facade. Though I have sm difficulties in understanding exactly which lines were said by maan n which by geet bcz of ur free running style..it was awesome. You can try color coding the dialogues if time permits. Otherwise even then its cool. And get a banner for ur fiction. Wud make it visually more appearing and garner u much deserved readers :)

And wait did I just read Dia was in Maan's apartment so late in the night. Dude where is the social teacher student protocol. That is so unacceptable from a guy of morals like Maan. With geet,she is hiswife. But guy needs to know where to draw the line with other students. He is allowed to burn in jealousy and so is she! Waiting to read more which is focused on present,the mushy,sensous, forget it all present..coz I know past wud have a lot of pain :'(!! Update soon!



Miss sarita ..!!
love you ..
for u i had changed the colours . just for u .!
check it .

maro arjun ko ..!!!!!!!!

as i have said there beneath the update .
people does things .why how will it affect their lives .they know it . yet they dont want to see. that is how we are . arent we ?
he doesnt maintain social teacher protocol .from the very beginning we have seen it . when he had given geet the key , he had no idea this would rekindle the fire between them . more over . to geet he was just a teacher .
he hadnt thought about the idea it wil give to geet .
that is how it all had started .

dia is a scholar student and not a very well off.. she is hardworking and focused unlike geet . maan might have seen his own shadow in her .

and there is that . the next update
read and then tell me...do never ever hold back .it would offend me if u off all persons would hold back . i wanna be good in future as a writer . so do tell me watever u think .

i adore you !


Originally posted by: sweetmelon

Hi! Reet,

Really enjoyed n loved to read especially the way of discribing the nature .
Your writng ve a poetic touch .I liked to read such kind of stories.Thank u Reet.
Hope ths one ll be a sweet romantic story.


poetic .?
really ?
thanx that i could stood upto ur expectations
i have replied u down here . u shud read that too


Originally posted by: yappingduck

arjun's character is mystic...he wants to avenge, as well as he is indebted to her dad...well looking forward for the past to unfold...the arjun-geet scenes are a treat to watch... completely sucked into the story...let the past unfold...loking forward to some intense interactions😉


hello reva . how r u ?
simply put in one sentence . claps .

lol .hope the next part is intense enough ! reet grins ..blushes and hides her face .



Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6


wonderful update...

Maan-Geet's romantic moments are always magical...Geet ko kiss kar ke hi jaise aag laga deta hai...

Anant Geet's grandfather get information about Geet-Arjun affair...

and he is coming to collage...Vikas informed him or any other person...

their conversation was heading towards their past...

one thing I find very strange is that although Geet's father was very good person and rebellion against old customs which are not good for human being but he himself married his daughter geet in that small age...was it right on that girls POV who even didn't know the meaning of marriage and commitments...it is very natural that she will forget about that marriage when she will grow up and her so called husband is not with her...

waiting to know more of past...

thanx for pm...



apt question .!! right on ...
hope the next update explains .
like that ...like ur apprch dear . whats ur name .wud like to cal u by ur name.

thanx that u hadnt raised q about dia and arjun.
u have waited . thanx again

cant wait to read ur next comment on the eventful next chapter 😳


Originally posted by: scorpiodreams

Thanks for the pm and waiting for their past to unfold. very interesting turn of events till now...you r maintaining the enigmatic feel of the story throughout.



Originally posted by: riyasp

This is the nth time I am refreshing the page to know, whether u have updated the new chapter.

Beautifully written.👏




Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

part-13

I knew that puny Vikas will smthng sick like informing Geet's Grandpa coz he cant do anything direct.
Then we have Dia (as you said she wud be vital not only a stray vamp)

Maaneet have lot of outer problems to deal with including their inner turmoil and dilemma.

Geet wanting to tell about Maan to Arjun but cant find the guts and Arjun having pain to think that she has forgotten Maan.

In between all this,I love their kissing sessions.Romantic,passionate,awesome.

Loved d update.



ohhh ...so in line...how aptly u picked up the essence .just want you to know this kind of readers makes it worth proofing . u know .detailing . will wait for u to comment on the next part
seriously .. i will search for ur comment .really need to know ur view

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

I was shocked coz I read all d parts again bt ur name has changed...

Loving d story so much...ur detailing for characters n all is exceptional...I really wanted maan to knw dat she was not at fault...she doesn't even knw dat she was married...or does she remember?

Maan is just like and enigma n geet is kind of open book...want to knw her reaction when she knws Arjun is maan n her hubby...

Vikas called anant m sure...satya is a sweetheart

Dia is just a mystery as if now bt m eagerly waiting for d past to unfold...pls updt soon...7k + words...m dying to read



here ..the update goes. thank you dear .
and rest upto ur questions that is upto my silly brain and u to wait .lol

Originally posted by: sweetmelon

Reet,

Fantastic part👍🏼
I loved each n evry moment f Maaneet,very romantic❤️❤️❤️
1st tme am readng ur story I dont know any f ur other FFs bt am sayng u to write more n more FF.



u have no idea how much i liked ur comment . yes i have written another fiction or may be more . i cant remember . lol .none of them are finished

Originally posted by: angadkipari

u made my day by updating again 😃 you know what o-n-l-y because of you i check I-F hundred times a day (sachi mein )

maan is here to take revenge but as always melts by his love 😳 loved the jealousy part,i loved j scenes😳,they making out in arjun's room ahem ahem hot!!

believe me or not but i don't have words to describe how beautifully you write really hats off you :)
but still i tried to cmment so that you'll update again😃
hey you have the other half written na please update it na😳



honey . i loved angad .
and you made my day ..lol .
i m crazy aint it . sometimes update daily sometimes i go gayeb for months
but anyway
i read ur comment and decided to update (others comments too)
but i really liked urs


Originally posted by: maanugeetu

welcome back, di, lovely to see you here in GF.

thanks a lot for posting it here.
read ur pm.
i am so glad ur are here.
awesome, lovely updates.beautifully written.
in both of ur ff's i.e. ilwe and my teacher, maan's character is wrapped ina shadow, surrounded with secrets and that is what makes it so interesting and intriguing.
waiting to read more.



thank u darling sis.
i love secrets .
and thanx to u for noticing that .

Edited by Amour_Reet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey Reet.. never ask us..
give it..

even after updating 3 parts togather, we will ask u to update..
i'm so bhukhaad fo updates..

by the way u were asking for some stories, have u read mrityunjay by sayaani???
it's nice one about devdaasis.. i liked it..
i don't know about others..
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Posted: 12 years ago
longest update ever in this thread ~




chapter 14





Propped up on her elbow she held a book so close to her nose one might fear she would lose her eyesight but she was too caught by the mystery.

The Murder of Roger Ackroyd

She hurriedly turned the page next when the irritating knock on the door made her shut the book tight

Who the hell is that ? she muttered under breath reluctantly leaving the bed. she nearly rubbed her eyes when she found the person stood in-front of her .


"Dia ! what are you doing here ."


"just saying hi" dia gave her a small smile .


"Hi ..!" geet was curt not caring if she was not polite .


"Wont you ask me to come in ?" she asked trying not to notice her rudeness.

Geet hesitated for a moment before asking her in .

"Arjun sir has asked me to give you these. "


Her brows shot at the mention .but she didn't say anything . Dia handed her a bunch of notes and a few books . actually quite a few . they are quite heavy together as it seemed.

Geet didn't notice that she was carrying them all until then . she felt a little guilty about making her wait in front of her door for so long .


"thank you " . her voice softer yet firm .

Dia smiled noting the change . they had been competitors . But it had been healthy until arjun sir had arrived .


"Whats that ?"

Geet's eyes followed her gaze and stopped at the sight that made her heart pick up the pace.

"Sweater .." she tried to act as nonchalant as possible.

"I can see that " dia said quietly . "But is that yours ?"

"Uh huh..! "

she tried to remain a convincing as possible. lying had never been her area of expertise .

dia hadn't said anything . she had been quiet for a while and after a little chit chat she had left .geet tried to communicate not wanting to be ungrateful .

locking the door behind her geet picked up the object of discussion from bed .spread on it like cherished one . A asparagus green sweater stared at her innocently .

she pressed her face in it which still smelled of him. she didnt know if dia had recognized it . because arjun might have only wore it once or twice.

***

what happened 9 years ago

Maan .. hope you are not busy !


Uday raichanda called out from the door . The large room ahead was elegantly decorated with wooden and antique works .. the large four poster bed had pristine white sheet spread on it . but what made the room more articulated that the neatly placed stack of books in the four book cases. A hand worked white table cover laid on a small table at one end of it . A boy in his early eighteen stood up from the chair from it looking slightly surprised to find chote sahib here .he had been in delhi for the last 3 months .

No chote sahib .not at all ..come on in .. he had advanced to greet him .

Uday smiled fondly and took a seat on the bed . patted a place beside him and gestured him to take it .looking around the room he knew geet 's hand in keeping this place so neat . unlike geet , maan was not known to be a very neat person .



He had often found maan sleeping on the bed with books spread around him. Then his daughter would come . she would shout. Make him wake up from his sleep , boss around and with help of her's maan would finally arrange the room much to his discomfort and constant grumblings .


But maan couldn't deny her . ever .


Uday had noticed and been happy with the bond they have. His plan was falling into right places.


"Maan ..i need to talk to you ". he spoke in a grave voice "its important .!"


"Yes chote sahib "..maan said with rapt attention . then asked "have you been well ? you seem like lost a lot of weight . and you look pale .very pale."


Uday sighed and spoke again ."That is what I want to talk about ."

Maan waited patiently .

"I have cancer !"

What ..?to say maan was shocked would be an understatement .

"stomach cancer to be precise".


"What ? maan repeated again .."my god .! have you seen a doctor . you should see a doctor . I would take you to . why aren't you taking care of yourself chote sahibji . when did you get to know that .."

"Shush'.!! Maan relax.. you are going to wake up geet . I don't want her to know .not now . not yet ."

Maan shook his head as the news struck heavy on him .

"i don't understand.." he mumbled still unable to process .


Uday knew it was shocking to him . he had known maan looked upto him as a father figure.he gave him a few moments to process.


"I have known this for a while now . have seen plenty of doctors. But they said they cant cure it . I don't have much time ."


"No !! " maan whispered choking on his voice.

"But you have money .go to america .i will help you . you should be fine there ." maan spoke with tears shining in his eyes.


"No use maan .. its metastatic "


"Ohh ..!"


"I mean it has spread to other organs."


"I know what it means. But it cant be..they might have made a mistake .we should go to states ." he replied firmly .


Uday sighed .Maan was taking it bad than he expected. he was rambling . his tears threatening to fall.

"Maan I need you to be strong . listen to me maan . I don't have much time ."


"We should go to states ." he spoke again . this time with much conviction .


Uday pulled his hands between his own ."Son .. you are a brave man ! . you should understand I have tried everything . the cancer in it's last stage . even operation isn't possible . I would not wake up after it . so I discharged myself and came to see you ."



"So you have been in delhi because of this. Why didn't you tell me before. Geet would be shattered . she wouldn't be able to take this ." Maan felt helpless thinking about geet



"That's why she is not going to know ."

maan's eyes grew wider.


"Listen maan . I am having chemotherapy and high grade radiotherapy that would prevent the disease from spreading down more .but that's not what I am worried about ."

"I am worried about you and geet ."


"I will always be there for her ." maan replied instantly.


"I know you will ..but I want her to be there for you as well.forever."


"I don't understand .!"


"Marry her maan ."

The proposal came as bolt from the blue .

The angel in pink . the porcelain cheeks. The big dreamy eyes . marriage ? mine ? geet ? only mine?

he stared blank ahead until he could hear his own name being repeated.

"Maan ..What do you think about her."

"She is just 12 ." he could only reply that .

"She is turning thirteen in this baisaakh .I know its very young age to get married for both for you .she might not understand it . as her mind hasn't grown up like the other girls of her age . I had kept her secluded here in my castle. Wish I wouldn't have done that but here is what it is.."

"I want to give her to you with all the rituals. I need to do it myself . or else my soul wouldn't be satisfied. I wanted you two to be together for a long time .now it is the time."

Maan had listened with his head hung to his chest

"Do you accept her. Maan ? would you marry her ."

"yes.I will ."

"Are you saying that because you are indebted to me .because if it is so . I don't want to burden you . you have a golden future ahead of yours."

"No ." maan had fumbled before saying in a low but firm voice "I like her ."

An honest reply came .

He watched the teenage boy blush ."I know . but I wanted to be certain ."

"I will always take care of her , guide her . would never let any harm touch her ."

He spoke with a conviction uday's heart melt . he remembered he had asked maan the same thing to do as the first time they had met .

he hadn't forgotten .

Uday hadn't been blind to see the childhood affection bubble in maan's heart . though geet wasn't mature enough to understand this but she liked him as well . considered him as her own property . clung with him like a vine .


"She likes you too.you should know that ."


Maan hadn't replied . only the blush became deeper .

"But only if you promise me . you would go to states . for once."Surprising uday again maan had spoken .

"I will son . but after this ."

At that moment geet entered the room with a painting in her hand .

"Look what I have painted .!" she squealed .Both uday and maan looked at her painting .It was somewhat a poor attempt of a boy looking down at a girl . holding her hand .

"What is that geet beta ?"

"Maan and me . !" Geet grinned in triumph .

Another time maan would have laughed , teased her with her worst drawing skills . but today he lowered his head . eyes on the ground . knowing uday was chuckling at that .

"What happened ?" suddenly geet became very aware of the sombre mood.

Uday hadn't replied but he beckoned her to sit on his lap . geet came but sat in the middle of the bed. inclined to maan , resting her back against his chest .

Uday laughed making a very embarrassed maan trying to shove her away .but geet wasn't going to budge.

"Why are you pushing me away . she complained ..papaji see he is pushing me."

"Don't worry beta .He wont be able to push you away any more . "


Maan wished the ground to swallow him when geet snuggled closer in front her father .The new found information about themselves was taking a toll on him.


"Beta ..? you like maan .."

"Very much .!!" she flashed a toothy grin .

Uday laughed further while maan desperately trying to shove her away . but she clung to him not paying any heeds to his attempts .

Annoyed geet turned to him . "what is wrong with you !!"

"Haww ..is that water on your cheek .have you been crying ?"

"What happened .?" she cupped maan's face in between her tiny palms and asked concerned at this . she had never seen him cry before .

Maan couldn't control any more. The concern of her tiny palms . her destiny . not knowing the fact her father was going to die soon taking off the umbrella had been there on their head . it was bliss for her not knowing how less time she had with her father . whom she loved with all her heart .his eyes stung again.

Uday got alarmed .he tilted her face to face himself.

"you irritate me a lot now a days . the more you are growing older the more mischievous you are becoming . so I am giving you away to him . he would tolerate and take care of your tantrums from now on ."


"okay .!" geet replied calmly . "but why is he crying ? am i that bad ?" she added thoughtfully .

.

"yes you are" ...uday squinted his eyes at her.


"dont cry . i wouldn't disturb you that much from now on . just a little...this little." she gestured with her thumb and index finger . "dont cry ." she said wiping of the dried trail .


maan shook his head in disbelief and slapped her forehead. she grinned wide..

"so you will live with him . will take care of him .okay ? " uday asked looking fondly at the pair .

"okay ..! "she answered obediently .

"so its settled then you are to marry him."

"okay .So when do I get to marry ?" she asked eagerly . doe eyes glowing in glee.

"Shut up !" maan groaned under breath at her scandalous innocence .

Uday laughed more at his daughters eagerness .

"See maan ..she cant wait to marry you .!"

Maan flushed into darker shades of red. sat there awkwardly tongue tied with a geet clinging to him and grinning at the prospect of marrying him.

Geet couldn't understand why maan was turning so red and what so funny she has said that her father was laughing so hard . so she started laughing too not getting head and tails of it .

A week after it . within the premises of the raichanda mansion .

In front of the idols of god shiv and parvati uday had given away his daughter to maan with all the holy rituals .he wished if he could actually get them married . but knew that wasn't legal now. but he trusted maan with all his life . he will finish what he started.

A few months after the ceremony arjun had accompanied uday to states where they visited many hospitals. But all of them refused to do operation as post operative complications were not worth it . they had prescribed some conservative treatment .

Uday got maan admitted to a renowned private school and convinced him to study hard both for himself and geet .

Then he had come back to India.

After a while he had passed away living geet all alone in that big mansion .


When maan had got to know that news it was very late because there had been no one to inform him .Anant hadn't been much fond of maan from the beginning . so he left no stones unturned not to keep maan in the loop .

So when the news had reached to maan already months had been passed. He was shattered .but was unable to go back to India. he didn't have sufficient money to travel back that far . he had to spend money cautiously knowing the funds wouldn't come from home anymore. But he had no complains . .

He studied more vigorously earning scholarships only to get back to geet as quick as possible . his little bride was waiting for him to come back home .

Its only her and his old mother at the village kept him going .


Whenever he would be sad or homesick he would have thought about geet . the memory of geet was the only thing kept him alive and warm in the middle of that cold country .He used to write a letter to her every week so that he can tell how much he had missed her.

But those never reached her . Anant had have burned it all . Nayeb Awasty , satya's father had stood and watched the letters of love burn to ashes in front of his eyes.but couldn't speak of it to a single soul . not even to his own son .

Nobody had the guts to cross anant . he will burn down houses in fury of his wrath . everybody loved their own families . so he kept shut . unaware of his son desperately trying to keep arjun in the loop with the little knowledge he got.


anant kept on doing whatever he wanted .After all it was a matter of raichanda family's pride.

When his son was alive , he tried to stop him but the older raichanda couldn't win against the younger , his daughter's love had made him blind .So he had picked up a boy out of no where , taken home , and let him mix up with their girl shamelessly .

As soon as uday died anant tore every shred of connection with maan . stopped sending money immediately wishing him to rot in hell.


However convincing the youngest raichanda hadn't been easy .

Burning down the letters didn't do much good.as her belief on her maan had been stronger than anant estimated.She kept on repeating for years maan would come back . for her . he had to . she knew he would.

Anant had cursed his own dead son for his stupidity .

With time he changed his technique . he told her that marriage was not complete . so Maan decided not to come back ever. he had no reason to . He had gotten what he wanted . money for studying abroad .

you have to understand that .if you keep holding on to the thread had never been tied to you in the first place . it would be your stupidity.

But for your sake I would try to reach maan . and request him to come back .

Anant had kept convincing for days that Maan hadn't paid any heed to anant , and disrespected him by ignoring his pleas.

Years of persuasion finally made it easier .

Her trust on him had quavered .


But to his utter dismay Maan had come back . he couldn't reach her though.He had waited ..sought opportunities to see her once .

Only to be slaughtered.

The wrath of anant raijada forced him to experience another brutal loss. From which he couldn't overcome .

All of which had been unknown to Geet who had given up on relationships by then . every last one of the ones close to her had abandoned her . left alone to pick up the shreds.


***


"Good morning sir.."


"Good Morning young-lady ." he had smiled handing a bunch of papers to her .

"Sir . you look happy . does that mean ?" She looked hopefully at the papers held in his hand .

his smile grew wider watching her to cross her fingers .She took the papers by her trembling hands.


"I think you are going to get the scholarship .!"

"Really sir.. ?" her voice choked in happiness.face beaming with sheer glee

"Yes. I think so . just few set of formalities and a viva interview .and of course you must have no competitor at the next exam . which of course means you have to do well "


worry appeared on her face with the added part .noticing that arjun leaned forward to touch her hand and said , "don't worry dia . I would help you through it ."

"Would I be able to do it ?"


"I believe so ."

she held the papers in such way that clearly told how she treasured it .

"thank you sir .Thanks for being there .You have been the mentor I have never prayed for. An angel of god .i could never achieve it if weren't for you " her earnest voice rich with emotions . dia was never the emotional type but that was not any day.

Arjun's eyes became distant as memory haunted him . remembering similar set of words from himself to his chotesahib . For the same scholarship . And there he was .. Passing the torch ..!

"You are welcome dia .! Study hard and prove that you deserve the chance "

Dia nodded unable to express her gratitude .She had never thought the man she was crushing over would change her destiny this way . When she had met him she had known him for excellent accent of British English , great looks and a packaged debonair .

But with time her views have changed . he had grown immense respect in her eyes . and that had made her realize she had started falling for him deeply .

Who wouldn't ? she had thought sadly .

Even a girl like her , geet raichanda . dia had seen her in class gazing intently at him oblivious to the world .


She had competed ..

Arjun singh khurana was worth fighting .

But dia was no fool. Being in love with him has made her see , he didn't harbour any kind of "that feelings" for her .

But she had seen the same longing in his eyes for some one else. She was sad , dejected .But not heartbroken .

The fire was there from the beginning . may be she was too blinded by his aura to see what lay open in front of her .

"Sir ..". She hesitated before continuing ."I want to tell you something "

"Yes " arjun gestured her to continue .

"I want you to know I mean her no harm .." She said out of no where.

"Who are you talking about ?" arjun asked as a shadow crossed his mind .

But dia continued without answering ."I have seen that sweater . the green one."

Shit ..! darn geet ! but arjun didn't let the fear appear on his face.

"she had known that I had seen . that might have alarmed her off. Not intentionally though .but I want to say . I mean no harm . my lips are sealed .she and I don't go along much . so I thought I should let you know .that I m not your enemy ! "

arjun hadn't answered . hadn't protested . hadn't feigned ignorance . the conviction she was talking with , protesting wouldn't do much good.

So she has known about it ? how long ?

Dia answered like reading his mind ."It doesn't matter what I know, how do I know . only that I know . and I mean no harm ."She had finished and picked up the paper again .

"Thank you sir !.. .for being there and keeping this from geet ."

"It's a huge favour of not telling her. She and I well lets say she would never let me have the Uday Raichanda scholarship . never ever ".

Arjun nodded in understanding . geet could be difficult when it came to her father . her emotions are overpowering on her judgments . he had seen that from her childhood.

"You are welcome dia ."

After she had gone arjun had mulled over the thought of telling geet about all this .but finally decided against it .Arjun intended to keep this from her .This might jeopardize dia's chance of getting the scholarship which she needed badly.


Arjun hadn't had the slightest clue about her insecurities. he had not thought they existed in the first place .

She had been his geet .

He had been her maan .

that's where his thoughts ended.

***

Lilac.. 'everywhere! .it was flowing in him .in his veins . he couldn't smell anything but lilac.

It was drowning him.But still not enough .


He pushed her against the wall .hoisted her up in one swift pull as her long legs snaked his waist .

grabbing a fistful of her hairs he crashed his mouth on hers . sucking on the bottom lip in his mouth he had nibbled on it .his hot hungry mouth demanding entry . with a sigh she had obliged and let the dance begin. their tongues tussled with equal fervour .he ravished her mouth until they felt dizzy without breath. Letting go of her mouth he trailed down wet kisses on her neck .biting ..teasing and tasting her skin and lapping his tongue on it to ease the pain he given her .his hand roamed everywhere. the need to touch her , feel her was too much .

The woman he had waited for years was in his arms .arched back moaning in throes of pleasure. Yet he cant get enough . the longing amplified thousand quotients at every touch . like she grew under his skin every moment a tad bit more.

The slow burn of her lips were intoxicating . burning yet soothing . stab of pure desire washing over him. the want , the need to bury himself within her was devastating . pulling down her shirt he brushed his lips on the creamy pillows of her breast and murmured against her skin as his hand was making its way under her top .


Virtue, alas, now let me take some rest.

Thou set'st a bate between my will and wit.

If vain love have my simple soul oppress'd,

Leave what thou likest not, deal not thou with it.

I swear, my heart such one shall show to thee

That shrines in flesh so true a deity,

That Virtue, thou thyself shalt be in love.

Virtue let me have some rest.
You cause a conflict between my will and my intellect:
If hopeless love has oppressed my unsophisticated soul,
Leave me alone since you dislike it, and have no dealings with me.

I swear that my heart will show you someone
Who enshrines so true a deity in her flesh
That even you, Virtue, will be in love with her

She was feeling euphoric.

could faintly hear his voice murmuring a sonnet from "astrophil and stella". he was igniting a dangerous passion in her blood. her breasts felt heavier with need . a dangerous want pooled low in her belly. melting her, softening her .

She shivered and let loose the last shred of control .Reality couldn't kept her on earth anymore. Skin blazed in every contact . Wherever he touched her .Sweet torture her a writhing mass of nerves in its wake. She writhed moaning his name like a mantra.

Like she wanted to Consume him . all of him.

the way he was slowly consuming her, soul and senses.

She held onto his shoulder while his lips traced her skin . his palms caressing the underside of her breasts .

A gush of slow throbbing coursed down her spine to the core .

She trembled in pleasure as her nails dug in his back arousing him even more. he groaned as his body shuddered with need. .

She arched her back as a muffled whimper escaped her lips. his tongue in between her breasts .lapping ans tasting every bit of her skin.

His fingers stroking the dangerous valley of her swells ..

his palm cupped one and he pushed himself more within her . she could feel his blatant arousal in her thigh . her eyes flew open suddenly hyper aware of everything .

rain humming outside.

Drumming of two hearts , Echoing . in the large room .

Past plastering over present . she cant think coherent .

Arjun singh khurana . geet raichanda. Maan

What was her destiny ?

"Arjun.. we need to stop "

Arjun lost in the valleys of her lush body had no control on himself.


"Uh huh ."

He caressed a hardened peak . a jolt of electricity passed through her core as his arousal rubbed against her intimate.

"Arjun .!!"

"Arjun stop ..!! "

She almost shouted.

Dazed arjun looked up at her '

She hadn't seen him this dark before. pupils dilated , hair messed up by her demanding fingers on them.

She could see herself in those eyes .looking down to the man she was falling for.

She tried to smile .

"We need to stop .. .. now"

He couldn't seem to comprehend her .

"We cant do this.. not now , not here " she further said.


Sense came rushing to his brain .

"Shit !" Arjun swore loud ..!

He hurriedly pulled her down and adjusted her cloths to make her decent . straightening down her hairs that had been ruffled in his assaults .

her heart swelled at his gesture.


Wouldn't you let me go ?she asked as arjun pulled her in his chest as if trying to assure himself the feel wasn't momentary

"Never Ever .. !!"

He spoke with such definiteness , such tenderness that made her eyes fill up

A sense of de ja vu had rushed through her.

He used to promise to her saying those exact words.

His eyes used to shine the same way like him .

She could still remember the way he used to look at her , when she used to cry.

The same helplessness , same pain , same want to take it away .the memories were still vivid .

But the difference is he was not him .

He was not maan ..!


The thought formed a lump in her throat .she hid her face in his chest .

Now a days a lot of that was happening to her.

A lot of de ja vu's .why was she remembering so long forgotten days so much these days ?


They stood there at opposite corners of the room . afraid to near one another. Not trusting their body or emotions .

Geet stood trying to sort out her own feelings. Her eyes fixed on his back . the shirt had been pulled out from the pant . crumpled. Did she do that ? she could feel blood rushing her ears .

Geet couldn't be at ease .

She wanted him . every cell of her body wanted him . the pull was hypnotic .

But they needed to get serious . it was high time..!

Geet watched arjun to rake his fingers through his hair

Woman ..! you drive me crazy ..!! he groaned frustrated .

Geet chuckled watching him pace around a far .

"You were always crazy ..i have no hand in its making ..!" she had quipped knowing it would make him more mad.

"I m crazy ..? I m ? "

He poked the finger in his chest .Geet refrained herself from laughing out loud .

"oh god why am I even arguing with you ."

"what have happened if somebody had walked on us . oh god ..!! its all your fault geet..! I have never been this callous before .! woman what you have turned me into ..?"

"shush ..! Stop it .You are going nuts ..!" she spoke softly .

"am I now ? arjun shot an incredulous look to her.

She sighed exasperated and then said .We need to be prepared . .

"prepared for what ?" he asked incredulously .

"Tomorrow my dadaji is coming down . it would be great if you could meet him . he would be on our side if something goes rocky here. Having him beside us its huge save you know ."

Arjun stopped breathing .

He hadn't uttered a word as geet waited patiently .carefully watching the changes on his face.

"Have you told him about us ? he has asked " masking his face of emotions .

"No.." she mumbled "but I was thinking if you could meet him you know ..he would like you very much "

He snorted ..

"What ?" geet couldn't comprehend , he had slipped into that impenetrable zone again .

"Nothing .. how do you know he would like me?"

"Because of what you are . who in their right mind would not like you ?" geet remarked as if was the stupidest question ever .

"I am what you can see.. I don't have a special pedigree hidden in my title.. I belong from a middle class family .As far as your dadaji matters he wouldn't like that very much." He retorted, wanting geet to understand what a stupid idea that was ..to make him meet anant raichanda .

world's worst nightmare ever !

"That's not true . I am sure he would not be like that ."

"Yeah whatever . moreover its not possible.i m going to Kanpur tomorrow for 2 days ."

"Ohh ..!!"

All she managed to say .dejected at his snubbing her off..

She needed to take a step forward . why was not he getting the hints .He hadn't uttered a word about their feelings when they had walked so further in this.

Don't worry geet ..! I intend to meet him one day .

He tried to sound reassuring but his voice felt pretty unconvincing to himself. He prayed geet doesn't feel it too.

But she did.She gave him a small smile and picking up her stuffs left the room .

Arjun couldn't stop her . as he had nothing to offer to her , nothing at this moment .

The incredulous moments of passion made him look over her insecurities. He didn't realize to geet he belonged from a male species . one of whom had broke her trust in the very dawn of her life.



next chap




Edited by Amour_Reet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago



really loved this update...

actually what I liked in this update is that u answered all our asked and unasked questions...

now as the past is cleared to us...how and why Uday married Maan-Geet...why Geet thinks that Maan left her...why Maan thinks that Geet betrayed him...how he never able to contact her...where he went leaving geet and why he didn't return until so many yrs...Anant burned all letters send by Maan to his wife Geet...she is thinking that Maan never tried to come back to her and here Maan thinks that Geet don't remember him although he send so many letters to her...

everything is done by this old cunning fellow Anant...now as he comes to know about Geet and Maan then what will happen now...yes he don't know that Arjun is Maan but still he won't like a mere teacher having affair with Geet...

Maan-Geet passionate moments were magical...

Geet remembering her childhood and felt dejavu when she hear same words from Arjun's mouth... she wanted to know his intentions whether he is serious with their relation or not but got disappointed with lack of enthusiasm in Arjun to meet her grandfather...but she don't know Arjun knows better about her grandfather...that is why he is dreading to meet him...

Dia sensed the growing relation between Arjun and Geet...before this update I wondered why Arjun gave so much importance to Dia but now I get the answer...he is returning what he got from his mentor or God father to another deserving person...Dia is good in studies and she needs scholarship so he is helping her get it...but Geet don't like to have this scholarship to any other person...why... I think it is because she don't want anybody in place of Maan...because maan used to get that scholarship...

waiting for next part...




Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
now read its finished !

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