my teacher-(I) chap-22 pg 135 LINK fr 23 c index - Page 19

For the longest and most riveting update so far...👏👏👏👏👏👏

I loved it all.❤️

Hope you don't tire of my comment...

Dia's visit to Geet's room was a surprise. And he sent her there. Her noticing his sweater there made me wonder about her. Her past and the connection it has for Arjun explains his interest in helping her. Hope she does not turn spiteful. Still knowing Geet he is going to add one more in the things that he has hidden from her.

Uday's helplessness and illness combined with his foresight had me teary. Only a father in a sad condition like that would take the step of child marraige like he did.

It also shows that he distrusts his father to take proper care of Geet in the way he wants.

Maan the teenager was adorable. How shy he was in front of her father and how he tried to control her actions! It was fun to read.

He touched my heart with his care for Uday. Trying to get him care from abroad and listening and promising him everything.

Geet at twelve not knowing what is coming is the picture of innocence. Her naive gestures are adorable. The way she cares for him when he cries was so sweet. Baby that she was wants to get married if he plays more with her... cute cute cute.

I can't believe the cruelty of the grandfather. Not informing him of the news and then to top it all breaking her faith in as many ways as he can think of.

I wish you had listed where the passages were from. They all seemed from different places. I would like to follow up on that.

Back to the story... the velvety shoes stole my heart. This was so utterly melty. Loved it. The promise, the present, the kiss of reassurance❤️❤️❤️.

Arjun and Geet sizzle like anything☺️☺️☺️. He has waited for so long for her. That must be the worst thing about love. The waiting can kill you.

So he is going to be away for a couple of days while grandfather is around.

I am anxious to read more and more.

Thanks for updating Reet.

Always waiting for more soon...

So..from where do I start now..umm..a personal question first. To tell the truth I have always been enamoured by doctors. Explains why I am crazy abt shows like greys anatomy,private practice,scrubs and our own DMG!! So you have always intrigued me..i mean how can a doctor have a mind of a writer..a thoght process which is not objective in its approach..which is poetic..which feels things! I particularly think that when u feel what u write it comes out beautifully and that's y I always look forward to ur work. Now when I notice so much of english literature analysis here..i got to ask u..where did u learn this all :D Not in med school I bet :P you know while reading abt Maan as a teacher I really get this distant wisp of dream of having a teacher who is so passionate abt his work!!( N no I am not talking abt a sizzling hot teacher on dias just a committed one J) This caricature of Maan is truly praiseworthy. He has all the elements possible..disciplined,man of principle and a love sick puppy!! He has much more shades as compared to Geet's character! If only he showed just a bit of understanding to how his girl might feel :/ he can be understanding to dia bt not his soulmate!

So I am yet undecided whether I like Maan and Dia track :/ Come on I get to be biased here,haina. Well maan shd know the effect he has on women. He does know!! So this going out of the way for Dia (how dare he touch her'grrr..vikas ka touch to bardassht nhi hua) but yeah what he is doing for dia, I am fully convinced there!! He has been thru d same..its justified he wants to help.

Thanks for a super long update.It left me craving for more. And I was a little apprehensive while suggesting you color coding..I mean you already have paucity of time! Extra demands from readershuh :/ But then u did. And girl that really boosted the overall appearance and readability!! Thumbs up and thanks.

'The fortunate hand had sighed experiencing the amount of attention showering on it ..' Ahh god..tounge tied *blush*

rain humming outside.

Drumming of two hearts .

Echoing . in the large room .

Past plastering over present . she cant think coherent (that ambeince)

Air blew the sultry scent of wet earth . ( I cud actually feel the rain n smell..*sigh*)

These appealed the lot to me..the impactful atmosphere u create with simple words!!!!!like someone here earllier said 'aag laga deti ho' And the part involving maan geet and uday..bravo..so cute!! Loved it. Its high time Maan shows his understanding side to geet! His indifference may cause too much of damage to her esteem unknown to him!

I want to write so much more..but I am afraid its going to be too long and dull. So yeah in nut shell..I am bowled by update and waiting for things to progress more!

EDIT:I was just wondering how come Maan is leaving for Kanpur when anant is coming over. He knows very well that anant has a motive coming here! Is it right on his part to leave geet alone at such time when he does have an idea ki anant can tk her away??