The Seven Year 'Hitch' [2] - Chp 11/ Pg 53 - Page 42

Originally posted by: smi20

Such a beautifully written part!!! The music was perfect. Maan's every feeling was write. Perfectly. Geet's expectation, the dance, music everything was so perfectly done. Please cont soon

Originally posted by: spvd

part 11
awesome dear...
excellent...
cont soon dear...

Comment for Part 2..

"Something within me tells me that dance is needed for her..."

This is such a recognition of her needs by Maan. This line fulfills the change in his characterization where it was all about him. Now he sees her need.

The words and the music are spot on. 👏

Brilliantly written dance moves. I could see the figure dancing in the back of my eyes as I read it.

The words impact something deep within him. The reassurance he needs that all is not lost, the faith that it was always him for her and the utter truth of how she has made him the center of her universe.

I was very struck by that realization and his knowing and accepting it. Many times we see the devotion of a woman not accepted or even marginalized by their spouses. It is rare to find a soul that accepts it whole heartedly and takes it to their own heart.

In return for all this ... she just wants me. 👏👏

I can truly see myself in this statement, or perhaps, that these words are apt for anyone in love. It is all there is in life and I find that to be truer as time goes on. All else is fleeting where as love grows and strengthens like nothing else.

Her expressing her love totally and completely to him was beautifully written. She missed him so much. It must be torture to bear when things don't go well but even more torture to be away from each other... reminds me of with or without u here...

The way he finds solace as if all was lost and it has finally been restored to him is so well written. Over all I have been annoyed at him, mostly because I am a female😆😆, but here I can see what he went through also.

While the first half was all about him and his thoughts, the second was her and her actions.

There is a marked differentiation here in their characters. He is the planner and evaluator, while she is the doer and the giver. The meeting of two like the far off horizon, is it a myth or a reality?

I want him to keep building the edifice every day.

Thanks for a beautiful update. Sorry for the delay in commenting but there was a lot to absorb and I wanted to savor it... Do you recognize the DQ-ing...lol...

Truly enjoyed reading the full update.

Please give more frequent updates, even if they are shorter... if I can request it...😃

Thanks for updating.

Originally posted by: honeygrape

where r u??

update chahiye😳

Originally posted by: Onir

Idhar hi hu... 😆

A bit held up with work 🤢

Will try for this Sunday as Thursday's a holiday here 😃

Originally posted by: honeygrape

😃 idhar hai toh kabhi kabhi hi helo bol liya karo😆😆

actually missd you, kahi pe bhi koi chance nahi mila to chat with u..

so finally came here...yaha pe toh double bonus hai na, ek i l get to talk to u and secondly i l get tto kno the status of the update😃😃😃

good idea , ryt😳😆

and update, noo hurries...i can really understand how difficult it can be...we dont get tym to read updates, but you writers need to thonk n write..phew tough job...you take your tym...we ll wait...thats all we can do to help such lovvlyy people here...