The Seven Year 'Hitch' [2] - Chp 11/ Pg 53 - Page 40

Originally posted by: Onir

Thanks a lot Purvi for always being there... in each part and update. A tight hug for you dear 🤗 🤗

It made me happy to know that my writing could make you somewhat happy 😳😃

Originally posted by: honeygrape

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btw , you dance????😳

Originally posted by: dqno1

I have to say the beginning of the chapter blew me away completely. There is so much truth to what you have written. I don't dispute that but the way you tied it in with his thoughts and feelings was truly laudable. He finds himself like the clouds drifting and now it is time for this cloud to deliver dreams and wishes of his family. There is so much perfection in this tying in to nature, I am nodding my head but can't even begin to tell you how much I loved it. This new concept in writing really worked perfectly here to get into his thoughts and heart.

Glad you liked this new way of bringing it together, was very nervous. I have bugged Mayyo so much for this part... was even ready to scrap it all and write again but then didn't have that mush of stamina and patience to go through ti again. This praise coming from you means a lot to me... someone who writes so beautifully. 😳

Geet is the sea to him, full of love, care and compassion; where he, the cloud ends up after repleting himself. I loved that connection. In a lot of couples, I have noticed that; women tend to be the end which the man seeks at the end of all his drifting and floating during the day. The completeness happens only with Geet, and only if he has kept her happy.

Geet has her own follies too, its just that everything is through his thoughts so it shows his lacks the most. But yes he has a greater role in the problems they're facing. Women are usually seeking stability while women mostly are the ones who give that stability but they too need it in some point in life. I want to show them to be complete but with efforts from both of them... 😊

The party incident reminded me of something. Checking on each other means different things to each of the spouses. For a woman it would be at least 5-6 times where as for a man a couple of times does it. The couples described are exactly like those I have seen; physically together but not on the same wavelength. There is a wide enough gap to let boredom and routine drift in. To be honest I think a lot of marriages fail for this reason. If there is no excitement and anticipation left, the whole concept of attraction to each other gets lost. It is truly the edifice that you have to keep building everyday. I think that statement is my hot chocolate guarantor for relationships, Onir. Wonderful way of expressing it.

Hmm... I too have noticed many couples bordering in this group or are in that group. Sometimes that surprise and novelty is needed to prevent complacency from setting in. I love that statement too. HOT CHOCOLATE - word itself means so much to me, and you finding something of that sort in anything I have written pleases me so very much 😳 🤗

For someone who is just writing this first story, you have your pulse firmly set on your characters, their emotions and their struggles. I am sincerely in awe of the depth you have brought to these two. It is as if I know them and have read their hearts.

These words form you have certainly lifted my confidence a lot, as I find my writing very so so... And on addition when you say you could feel their emotions and could relate to them makes me so happy 😃😳

Not because I lub you, I do, but I have to say you are one of the most sensitive and heart touching writer I have read.

Thanks! 😳

There are several favorite lines here but one that stood out for me:

Unity in a relation comes from total acceptance without need for change.

More on second part in a few...

Originally posted by: maanugeetu

chapter 9-

Yes I will bring Maan ki Mishty to me. I will make this phase to pass away from us, never to return. Yes Mishty, though now you feel we're heading towards the 'Seven Year Itch', I will make you feel that this was just a hitch in our path and we will be beyond a 'Seven Year Hitch' together in love not between MSK and Geet but Maan and Mishty.

finally maan ko hosh to aaya.

loved the update specially maan's realization.

Originally posted by: maanugeetu

chapter 10

finally maan is taking the right decision. his father would be able to guide him better. this distance was necessary to open his eyes.

now waiting for the diwali weekend.

Originally posted by: maanugeetu

chapter 11

beautiful update.

I'm at loss of words. My throat seems parched. That form at the left is me. It's me, Me! Mishty is dancing for me. I'm in a trance, with a numbness spread all over.

awesome di, the dance ,the music. this line exactly depicts my feelings.

i am speechless.👏

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

marvelous update

specially d song sequence was wonderful

he is now realizing each n every of his mistake he had done

but is everything is fine now b/w them or there is still more??

Originally posted by: singh24

Originally posted by: Onir

Yes a bit of contemporary 😳