new os ... Destination last part updated pg 1

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well back to the forum after ages. well this work of mine is not a new one. i had posted this as an ss.
but due some inapropriate words in title of the ss the topic got closed. i am from tamil nadu and i didnt know the exact meaning of the word. just a day back when i came to know i was shocked and when i cheked the forumthe ss was already closed.

i apologise to all those who felt uncomfortable with the title. i tried to change it but the topic is already closed.

so i'm posting it as an os now. hope everyone likes it .



DESTINATION

Daddy mujhse bola tu galthi hai meri

Tujhpe zindagaani guilty hai meri

Saabun ki shakal mei beta tut oh nikala keval

Jaag jaag jaag '..

Urgh !!! can anyone please stop this song !!! geet screamed

shutting her ears. There were huge speakers that were about 50 feet

tall surrounding her and roaring the song. Geet started running.

She was running and leaping at the same time.' Sprinting like an

athelete. If she had participated in the Olympics she would have

surely got the gold medal. She ran for a long time but but the song

never faded . its intensity only grew . she met with a dead

end. There was no escape now. She turned around vand noticed

100 people or more with grayish hair long pointed nose and a height

of about 6 feet tall. Each and every men were alike.

No !! no !! please !! geet screamed.

Tum meri sabase badi galthi ho geet !! sabase badi galthi!! Tum jo

kar rahe ho wo teek nahi hai!!

Humare kaanadaan ki naam ko andhere mein daalne jaa rahi ho

! maan jaao geet !! meri baath maan jaao !!

Nahi !! geet screamed .

Nahi mujhe nahi karni ! please mujhe chodiye ! please mujhe nahi

maanna hai aapke baath!!

Mai yeh nahi kar sakthi ! please !!

Pls !! mujhe nahi karni !! please mujhe apni marzi se jaane dijiye please !!

Geet !! geet !! utho !! yeh neendh mei kya bad bada rahi ho !! geet !!

Ugh !! geet opened her eyes . she woke up suddenly and noticed her surroundings.

Geet (st): Blue wardrobe check, blue spreads check , blue curtains, Winnie the pooh check, my dvds check ''''..ok this is my room and what all I saw before was just a dream.

Geet kya baath hai. Kya bad bada rahi thi ? kya hua.

Kuch nahi yaar . wo bus bura sapna tha .

Phirse wahi sapna.

Geet nodded her head.

Oh my god !! yaar tum ithni darthi kyun ho ?

Oye miss I don't get scared . kasam khake bol , thu darthi nahi kya papa se ?

Haan wo '''''''' accha yeh chodo ab jaldhi thayyar ho jaao yaar, aadhe gante mei hitler pahoonch jaayega.

Oh my goodness !!! bol nahi sakthi thi !! geet sprinted out of her bed and ran inside the washroom.

Just as she entered the washroom she realised that she had forgotten her clothes .

Geet hit her fore head. She then called out " didi !! my pyaari didi !!"

Haan haan , sun rahi hoon mein , kya chahiye tujhe ?

Wo mei apni kapde bhool gayi !! please mere liye leke aao na !

Sorry , self service .

Yaar meers, thu meri bhabhi hai ki dushman ! leke aaao na !

Teek hai ek min .

Soon geet came out and was getting ready .

Just then they heard a voice.

Geet you have only two minutes to come to the dining table .

Are geet jaldi karo warna papa tere saath mujhe bhi maar dalenge.

Are yaar meri baal banana mei help karogi ya aisi khadi hoke meri muh dekhegi .

Soon geet and meera ran out of their bed room to the dining table.

Geet , you are 15 seconds late.

Sorry papa .

Sorry !! geet tumhe punctuality ki naam ki koi cheez patha hai ki nahi ! tumhe ek perfect lawyer banna hai geet ! tumhe handa law firm ko yash ke saath sambalna hoga . tum mohinder handa ki beti ho . agar court pe late pahunchegi tho log kya sochenge tumhare bare mei. Punctuality ek perfect lawyer ke liye bahuth important hai geet . yeh baath kab samjogi tum.

Geet ( st ): oh god . phirse lecture . hey baghavan . meine apni pichli janam mei kya paap kiya jo mere liye papa ke roop mein ek mogambo beji ho .

Geeet tumhari dyaan kahaan hai !! yelled her father.

Woh papa mei'''..

Mujhe kuch nahi sunna .

Aur meera meine tumhe kithni baar kaha hai tumhe hi dyaan rakhna hoga ki geet saare kaam time se kare.

Sorry papa . aage se khayaal rakoongi.

Tumhe khayal rakhna hi padega. Ab jaao

Turning to geet ab jaldi se break fast karlo tumhari training aaj se shuru hone wala hai . maan aate hi hoga.

Geet (st): Mogambo kahinke ''''

Kya hua she heard her father yelling

Geet glanced at her father , shacking her head in no and made her way to the dining table. As she sat down she noticed a plate of corn flakes and a glass of milk.

Geet murmured yuck !! mujhe ye nahai khana . mujhe parathe chahiye. Lekin papa '. Urgh.. hey babaji meine aapki kya bigada hai ki mujhe aisi papa mile.Ekk toh mere papa hai , mogambo aur wo maan singh khurana , hitler ka avatar.Apne aapko samajtha kya hai huh, jab dakho mujhe kehthe rehtha hai ki geet ye karo geet woh karo jaise ki he owns me. Lekin papa tho usse hi sab kuch maanthe hai . humesha kehthe hai ki " geet maan se kuch seekho . agar tumhe ek acchi lawyer banna hai tho isse dekho . he is a perfect example for a perfect lawyer. Haan maanthi hoon ki wo papa ki juniors mei sabase best hai lekin iska mathlab ye tho nahi ki wo mujhe training dega. Are jab mein lawyer banna hi nahi chahthi thab mein training kyun le rahi hoon.

Just then she heard the screeching of the car, the car of maan singh khurana and also her mind voice telling her " BEWARE, HERE COMES THE HITLER.".

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Jeete raho beta said mohinder as maan took his blessings and took his seat near mohinder.

Waise maan us nitin Sharma ka case ka kya hua ? wo witness mila kya ?

wo witness abhi bhi laapatha hai. Lekin fikhar ki koi baath nahi hai. Meine baaki saare evidence gather kar chukka hoon. Aur mere aadmiyan uss witness ko doond hi rahe hain . bus aise samaj lijiye ki wo witness bahuth jald hi mil jayega.

Well my boy. I'm so proud of you.

Just then geet entered the hall.

Aao geet. Turning to maan . maan aaj se tum hi iski zimmedaar ho. Tume hi isko training dena hoga. Mei yeh kaam tumhe de raha hoon kyunki mujhe patha hai ki mein tumpe barosa kar saktha hoon. tho aaj se geet ki training shuru. Aur maan, tum uski tutor ho aur wo tumhari student.

Be strict with geet. During the training she is not my daughter but your student

Geet ( st) : hey babaji . this maan singh khurana is already a hitler. Aur ab mogambo bhi bol chuke hai ki " be strict with her". Ab mera kya haal hoga.

Sir aap fikhar math kijiye . aaj se mei aapki beti ka zimmedaar hoon.

Thank you maan . ab mujhe jaana hoga. Ek bahuth important case hai aaj.saying so mohinder pushed off followed by his stream of juniors.

Maan came towards geet . hello geet.

Geet gave a fake smile and said. Hello.

Are you fine.

Ya.

So then . meet me in your fathers study in five minutes. Saying so maan went away like a storm .

Hitler kahinke. Geet muttered.

Geet !! what is this . meine thumhe kaha than a ki tumhe yeh book kal hi complete kar deni chahiye. Lekin u have not completed even half of it . what were you doing all the time ? haan !!

Ab dyaan se suno . tumhe wo saare books ek hi haftha mein complete karna hoga.saying so he pointed to a rack of books at the rooms corner.

Geet's eyes popped out seeing the amount of books . just then she turned around and the sight shocked her. There was no maan but something else. They were not things but books. Piles and piles of books all around the room.

Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ! she heard an evil laugh.

As she turned around she saw maan sitting on a throne of books dressed exactly like hitler.

Geet tumhe yeh panda hi hoga. Meine tumhare papa ko wada kiya hai.

Nahi ! mujhe nahi padna.

Geet turned and started to run as fast as possible.

Just then she bumped into a person. As she looked up she was shocked to see her father dressed like mogambo.

Geet ! kahaan baagh rahi ho. Jaao jaake pado. Warna tum humare parampara ko mitti mei mila dogi.

Nahi mujhe nahi padna.

She screamed and started to run. Just then she noticed her dear brother . her yash bhaiya being bound in chains..

Yash baiya please meri madad kijiye. Pleaded geet.

Geet ! said yash. I'm sorry mein tumhari madad nahi kar saktha. mujhe papa se bahut dar lagtha hai

Yash baiyya please.

But it was of no use .

Soon she was pulled by her father and maan and thrown in to a dungeon which was not made bricks but books- law books.

Nahi !!!

Nahi !!! screamed geet along with her alarm which showed five in the morning.

She slowly opened her eyes and realized that everything was again a dream.

It has been a month since maan had started to give her training and he was hell bent in torturing her.

She noticed five books in the size of an encyclopedia on her study table.

Hitler kahinke geet muttered. Chal geet . pad le. Warna wo hitler aur mogamabo dono saath mein milkar thujhe khaa jaayenge

Another two months passed like this. But it was of no use. Geet was not able to study law.

It only made her situation worse. She was not talking to anyone like before. She started to remain aloof .

Both yash and meera noticed this but they were unable to do anything as they were scared of their father. But not only yash and meera, another person too did notice it.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely Start ..
All are hell bend to make Geet a lawyer 😆
And Geet fears so much, that She is getting bad dreams Why Parents force so much .? Cnt they let what their children want to be .

Pls do cont sn with ur Os ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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haha😆 love the dreams geet is getting. it is hillarious bechari geet 😆one side is hitler maan and on the other hand is mogambo papa and middle mein anarkali geet .🤣.awesome update plzzz update soon waiting for geets weird and terrific dreams😉
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PART 2 ( LAST PART )



Name the sections to be filed for a murder case

Woh urm…. 34 , 302 aur…………….

Aur kya ?!!

Woh 34 . 302 , urmm.. haan 301 aur phir urmm.. haan 120 b ( please ignore If the sections are wrong . I've only typed what I know )

Good. Now explain section 420 and is clauses.

Woh .. urmm

Geet cant u answer anything properly !

I'm sorry .

Sorry ! sorry se kaam nahi chalega geet . I asked u to study this a wwek ago and still you are not thorough in it. What am I going to do with you.

Tears welled up in her eyes.

Oh common . tears ! rone ke alawa thum ladkiyon ko aur kya aatha hai.

Dekhiye…

Mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai geet . aakhir tum chahthi kya ho.

Pichle kuch mahino se mein tumhe dekh raha hoon . thum apni padayi mein concentrate nahi kar rahi ho geet !

Geet started crying more .

Agar aisi hi rahogi tho thum kabhi lawyer nahi banogi ! mujhe patha nahi ki mohinder uncle ne tumpe barosa kaise kiya kit hum ek acchi lawyer banoge. You are not fit to study law geet ! you are not !

That broke the last nerve

Yes !! I'm not fit to become a lawyer . I'm not !

geet marched towards him and grabbed his shirt

aapne kaha than a ki mein concentrate nahi kar paa rahi hoon. aap na kaha than a ki mein teek se jawab nahi de rahi hoon . patha hai kyun ?

. Maan was shocked with her outburst .

Mein lawyer hi nahi banna chahthi saying so she started crying more

Nahi banna hai mujhe lawyer ! screamed geet

Nahi banna hai mujhe .. maan was shocked to the core .

Geet…..

Nahi aap ab kuch nahi bolenge sirf mein bolungi. Sirf mein.

Law ! geet smirked a bit. Papa ne isko meri kismath banadiya hai . jabse mein paidha hui thi thabse wo mujhe kehke aaye hai ki thumhe ek lawyer banna hoga. Mujhe lawyer bane ki sapne dekhne ko kaha.

Lekin mein kuch aur hi sapna dekhthi aayi hoon.

Geet went to her cupboard and took a set of diaries and folders. She threw everything in front of him.

Yahi hai mera sapna. Ek writer banne ki sapna. Literature padne ki sapna .

Maan was shocked. There were loots of diaries and the folder opened and lots of papers were scattered on the floor.

Lekin papa. Papa tho nahi maanenge. Unhe sirf apni kaandaan ki parampara ki parvah hai. Meri nahi . kaash aaj mama merei saath hothi. Tho wo zaroor meri mada karegi. Lekin unhone bachpan mein hi mujhe chodke chale gaye.

Yeh baath sirf yash bhaiya aur meera bhabhi ko patha hai lekin wo bhi papa se bahuit darthe hai. Tho aap hi bathaayiye , kya karoon mein ? kya karoon ? saying so she broke down on the floor.

Maan turned towards the door and said. Uncle sun .liya na aapne .

Geet turned and saw her father at the door with yash and meera. Mohinder slowly entered the room and came towards maan. tears were welled up in his eyes.

Ab mujhe lagtha hai ki aap dono ko baath karni chahiye.

As maan moved out of the room he was stopped by yash ans meera.

Yash engulfed maan in a hug.

Thank you maan . thank you so much.

Maan hugged him back and said yash please . yeh thank you ki koi zaroorath nahi hai. . as maan realeased from the hug he said. Ab sab kuch teek hogaya hai . aur haan tum mujhpe naraaz nahi ho na ki meine geet pe chillaya. Agar hai tho mujhe maaf karna. Par mere paas auur koi raastha nahi tha to make her confess.

Nahi maan mein thumpe naaraz kaise ho akthi hoon.

Teek hai tho mein chaltha hoon.

Papa ! geet gasped seeing her father standing right in froint of her eyes with tears.

Kya mein ithna bura hoon ? bolo geet

Nahi papa aisa nahi hain.

Phir kaisa hain beta ? tumne yeh soch kaise liye ki main tumhe apni marzi se jaane nahi doonga ! huh ?

Papa wo main '''

Geet mein ithna bhi bura nahi hoon ki mein apni beti ki khushi kea age parampara ko dekhungoi. Wo Parampara tumhare saamne kuch nahi hain.

Are meine thumhe law padne ko kaha kyuinki mujhe laga tha ki thum bhi usi mein interested ho .

Papa !!

Lekin meine ek bahuth badi galthi kiya hain. Mujhe thumse puchna chahiye tha. Lekin thum tho aake mujhe batha sakthi thi naa.

Papa mujhe dar lag raha tha !

Are kaise dar ! apni pap se daregi thu kya ? haan mein maantha hoon ki mein bahuth strict hoon lekin idska mathlab yeh tho nahin kit hum mujse dar jaaogi.

Papa ' geet rushed and hugged her father really tight.

Ithna hi samaj paaye ho kya mujhe ? saying so he embraced geet.

I'm sorry papa .. mujhe maaf kardo.

Are pagli isme maafi maangne ki kya baath hai ? they broke the hug.

Patha hai geet. Thum bilkul apni mama pe gayi ho. Wo bhi apni dil ki baath kisi se share nahi karthi.

Papa aap bhi na.

Mohinder laid his hand on her head.

Jaao beta jaake jeele apni zindagi ko.

Thanks papa said geet with happiness oozing out.

Thumhe thanks mujhe nahi maan ko kehna chahiye.

Maan ?? geet asked questioningly

Haan beta. Uski wajah se hi mujhe yeh sab patha chala.

Within a second all the hatred geet had for maan turned into admiration.

Excuse me may I come in.

Maan looked up and was shocked to see geet in his office.

Geet , thum yahaan ?

Wo mujhe aapse kuch baath karni thi !

Ab aise khade khde mere saath baath karogi ya phir baitke karogi.

Uff aap seedhe seedhe mujhe baitne ke loiye nahi kahenge kya ?

Maan smiled a bit. Baito.

Bathaao kya baath hain.

Wo'''' thanks maan

Kis ke liye maan asked smirking.

Are aap bhi na ! aap jaanthe nahi kya main kis ke bare mein baath kar rahi hoon.

Sorry nahi.

Tho main hi batha dethi hoon ki aapne jo meri help kiya haina uske liye.

Kaunasa help ?

Maan !!

Accha accha teek hai. I was just joking.

Aap joke bhi karthe ho kya ?

Geet !!!

Ok ok !! sorry.

Waise thum kya logi ? coffee tea, kuch vagera.

Are nahi , kuch nahi chahiye.

Just then maan received a call.

After attending it he turned towards geet.

Geet ek emergency hain. Mujhe court jaana hoga isiliye chaltha hoon. ok . hum baadh mein milthe hai.

Ek second ek second.

Aise mein aapko jaane nahi doongi.

Accha, par kyun.

Are, aapne meri ithni badi help kiya hain , uske liye mujhe aapko kuch dena hi hoga na.

Geet aisa kuch nahi hain.

Aisa hi hain. Ab jaldi batha dijiye. Mein kuch bhi dungi aapko.

Kuch bhi ?

Haan haan kuch bhi ! maang ke tho dekho.

Just then geet felt that she saw a wicked glint in maans eyes but she just ignored it.

Dekhlo geet. Aur baadh mein apni promise math bhoolna.

Are geet handa apni jaan bhi degi aap ke liye.

Mein thumhari jaa leke kya karoonga. Sirf jail jaaoonga.

Maan mazak chodiya aur jaldhi bathayiye.

Teek hai. Mujhe jo cheez chahiye use thumhari next birth day par maangoonga.

Are lekin wo tho agle saal hai.

Koi baath nahi.

Waise birth day ke din aapko hoi mujhe gift dena hoga. Aur aap hai ki mujhse gift maang rahe ho.

Wo aisa hi kuch gift hai jo sirf thum mujhe de sakthi ho.

Accha . teek hai done.

Ok ab main cahltha hoon. aur haan apna promise math bhoolna miss. mogambo. warna yeh hitler naaraz ho jaayega.

Next second the impossible happened . maan just winked at her and left leaving geet spell bounded.

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EPILOGUE :

Geets monolougue :

Finally the day has arrived. The day I had been waiting for my whole life. The day I'm releasing my first novel. It feels really wonderful you know. I am here sitting on the diaz with other delegates woith the lauch of my new novel - CHRONICLES OF WOMEN.

I saw my family sitting in the front row. Especially my father who had happiness in his eyes. His eyes were conveying that he was really proud of me. Yes this is the moment I've been waiting for.

And now let uas welcome MRS. GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA to speak a few words.

I turned to my right and saw my prince charming, my husband , my maan.

That birthday was an unforgettable one. Maan had proposed me. And the gift he was asking for was my love. Eventhough I had started liking him I was a bit hesitant. But he promised me that he'll wait. And after I completed my masters in literature I was head over heals in love with him. And now after being married here I' releasing my first novel with maan's support and care.

End of monologue.

Mrs . hitler aise hi dekhthe rahoge ya phir aage bhi jaaoge.

Maan yeh chidane ka waqth hai kya /

Geet ab jaldhi jaao warna aapke papa mr. mogambo naraaz ho jaayenge.

Maan aap bhi na. saying so geet rose from her seat and moved forward.

But suddenly she became nervous. She got a bit tensewd.

She turned around and maan gave her a confident look which made akll her fears dissapera.

And then she moved forward confidently to give her speech…… reaching her destination.

---THE END---



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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!!1 loved it...wish you had really made it into a ss... it was too good...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pressed like... Will read n comment later 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update hope u will write some more ff or ss 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I READ THE LAST VERSION TOO AND FOUND IT TO BEVERY GOOD
ALSO WELCOME BACK
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Originally posted by: punam2712

I READ THE LAST VERSION TOO AND FOUND IT TO BEVERY GOOD

ALSO WELCOME BACK


thank u dear actually both are the same. i wanted to change the title but the topic had got closed so i had penned it down into an os

thanku so much once again.
Edited by sarkh26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved the story...

i especially loved geets dream where she imagines her dad as mogambo and maan as hitler and a wall pf bboks... enjoyed reading it..

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