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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#921

Iss part part pe no comments

only background music. ...

Wo bhi low volume me😳

Chalte chalte... uhi koi milgaya tha...

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frostedstarlit

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Posted: 11 years ago

#922

Arey baba mera hi kaam hai!

Dhapa nahi hai😆😆

Actually on second thoughts when I go back to read some of the chapters to update things, I feel shit! How could that be me? But that is maybe because I am into Rescuing Heaven mode and have also evolved and grown😛

ARey re...itna happening background score! I'm telling you, start giving background score for every chapter. Mazaa aayega😳

And no, I will not take you to one full flash back in this story; you will find out how the past and present is woven. And I hope you enjoy.

Happy reading, live comments ka mazzaa hi kuch aur hota hai!

Keep writing😃

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#923

Zada touchy touchy mat bano maan

kahi simran ka haat uth gaya tho sare love story ka popat banjayega

Ab simran ko patane k liye tumhe tho raj ban hi padega!

nahi tho pure kheto wale sequence ka maza kharab ho jayega😆

Waise I'm missing yesh wo kya h na jab thak kabab me haddi naho tho dining table pe khane ka maza nahi aata😉

Ab background score

Dheere Dheere Bol Koi Sun Na Le
Sun Na Le Koi Sun Na Le
Sej Se Kaliyan Chun Na Le
Chun Na Le Koi Chun Na Le
Humko Kisi Ka Darr Nahin
Koi Zor Jawaani Par Nahin
Dheere Dheere...😳

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#924

Past n present ahese blend nahi hue h!

Sab khuch sudden lagra h

specially in this part

I was just thinking abhi tho kapde le k bahar gayi h now what is she asking for😕

Phir on reading further laga aree yaar ye tho past h👎🏼

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#925

elo ab ye next part ka n pichle part ka connection samajme aya

the memorable rajama n pizza connection

may be this is coz of the wrong place to stop!

jo bhi ho mu ka swad tho bigad hi gaya na

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#926

so the next part

maan the scared bacha!!

koi nahi hamari geet h na

background me

Mere sang tu chal zara q dikhe dara...

now i get in terms with ur story flash back kabi bhi kahi bhi😛

u were not showing few incidents of past but the whole process in which they fell for each other😳

tube light jal ne me thoda time laga😆

yaar ayse tho mera tape recorder kharab ho jaye ga

2 gane in a single update😲

background score ka feel hi kharab hogaya

on the whole loved the two phases of the chapter!❤️

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#927

me officially dead with this chapter👏

iss part k baad i decided even if i didn't like something i will keep my mouth shut n read the next part!

agar har agla part itna acha ho tho m kya shikayat karungi❤️

issme background from the music...

the flute tune in the begging of this song perfectly suits this chapter😉

Tujhe dekh dekh sona

Tujhe dekh kar hain jagna
Maine yeh zindagani
Sang tere bitaani
Tujhmein basi hain meri jaan haai
(jiya dhadak dhadak
Jaayen) ...

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#928

SIMRAN BHAG GAI!! 😲

ab full fledged chase scene

simran ko protect karega ya maar khayega

simran will land into trouble or in maans hell😉

but yaha ek twist h!

Simran hamesha bhagti rehti h... 😆

but yaha SRK bane maan ko bhi bhagarahi h!

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#929

Kya perfect guess mara😆

Dk as in dev khurana!

Chi chi babaji ye simran tho besharam nikli

checking out dever😲

Iss se tho meri geet achi h

always with maan

Back ground score continues

Haye Haye Re Haye Yeh Ladka

Haye Haye Re Haye, He

Karta Naadaniyaan Kyun Poocho To Haye, Yo

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#930

Yaar ya tho u change the font

ya phir make it italics

ya phir mention flash back

ya draw a line

Warna ye puri story complete hote hote I'll pull out all my hair!

So coming to the part!

Maan singh khurana

The protective bhai

Geet ko hint de ta h future ka

posseive h

Thoda bahot good looking bhi h

past ka guilt h

Total MSK material h😎

Ab msk msk material nahi hoga tho koun ho ga h na...

but no yaha

maan SRK kar raha h na

getting back simran

Simran ko yesh kabhi kabhi out of the blue yaad ata h

wo kya h na msk ka jadoo hi kuch aysa h!😳

Acha tha🥱

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