MG (FF) : Back to You (Updated #II link: Pg 141)

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#911

Elo I thought so

Full dramatic way me maan entry marega

just at the moment the ring slips into her finger😆

Ha sanam mujko h pyar pe ithbar m karungi tera intzar🤣

Bichari geet🥺

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spoorthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#912

What did u mean by

next part starts their journey. ..

do no ko bhagane wali ho kya😆

Wo b pata chal jayega😃

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#913

This is the very part I feel I'm reading ur work!

thanks for the wonderful part!

It is so well written k kya bataun babaji

ur truly blessed

Kuch zada ho gaya na😉

chill instalments me khush hojana😆

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#914

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
This is the very part I feel I'm reading ur work!
thanks for the wonderful part!
It is so well written k kya bataun babaji
ur truly blessed

Kuch zada ho gaya na😉
chill instalments me khush hojana😆

Arey Itniii sari tareef!😆

Thank you so much sporthy smile!

I see you have started to read Back to you in full fledged mode and are in action!

Lovely.

Now waiting for more comments on further chapters😉

Happy reading!

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#915

Again the inner fight

n those 3 words. ..

but that was a very chutku part😕

Ullu maan thinks geet will jump on his confession n elope with him!😆

Bahot bandage lagane h maan beta...

itni bhi jaldi kya h!😛

Aree background song bhulgai

Aa ab laut chale

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#916

In all that heated argument of longing n wait

something was missing. ..

Let me guess hmmm... bathi jali one tight slap!

Inte saal baad suddenly tum apna mu dikhate ho

n then apne aap ko SRK samaj te ho...

K simran will come running into your arms in the fields. ..😆

But no hamari simran thoda zada bhav khaegi...

intzar ka alam bhi tho bada lammmbaaa n dard bhara tha😉

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#917

me gone to the flashback mode😎

come to think of it this dosent seem like ur work at all

batao kha se chori ki h😛

ab m kya aru its realy getting hard for me to digest😕

i think next wale kuch parts will be in flashback mode only👍🏼

ab background song

Haye haye re haye yeh ladki
Haye haye re haye

Karti naadaniyaan kyun poocho to haye
Kabhi yeh hamse ladti hai
Kabhi akadti hai
Karo door se chhedh khaani

Yeh ladki hai
Deewani hai deewani...

to be continued😆

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spoorthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#918

ye tumha ra work nahi h!

batao kaha se teepa h

flashback mode se bahar aate hi geet simran bangai😲

ab gate k bahar kya h??

kya simran bachegi???

kya maan SRK banega????

Akhir ye eternity ka chakar kya h?????

jaan ne k leye padiye next part😆

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#919

now that was a action packed update...

bichari simran ka mu khula ka khula hi reha gaya😆

now MSK ka thoda asar hogahi😎

ab wo apni power se pataye ga Misthi ko

not happening maan so not happening 😡

hmmm let me not get into conclusions so soon...

time for background music

Dhoom again you wanna be with me on a roller coaster ride
Dhoom again I see your wildest dreams slowly come alive
Dhoom again we gonna break the rules and party all the time
Dhoom again we gonna steal the show
You know that it no crime
So steal off that you can
The magic you began
Lets shout
Break out
Come on once again
Let's hear it
DHOOM MACHALE !!!😎🤣