MG (FF) : Back to You (Updated #II link: Pg 141)

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Hey Guys!

After 'Love from across' I am back with another story, a lighter one this time!
So no maar-dhaar and action (there wasn't too much in Love from Across though)
But this is a romantic one.

What happens when you wait and wait for someone,

Looking over the path he had gone away; expecting faintly for him to come back...

What happens when you look back over your shoulder before stepping the threshold to another life, in a non-existent hope for that 'someone' to come back...

And what happens then, when you find out he indeed had come back but now you are at the other end!

Such was her plight, her hope, her despair.

How hope and despair were two sides of the same coin!

And the coin flipped one night, to change the course of the journey of her life.

Forever and ever, the moment he came back. Back to her.

Back to you

It is but of your giving,

This distance...

It is but of your taking,

This love...

It was meant to be yours

And it is still yours!

In spite of the emptiness spanning us,

It still lingers on...

In spite of the time passed,

That clime is looked upon!

Come and hold me now

Or go away forever...

If it would not be now

Then it will be never!



Another one in a week!

Geet skeptically looked at the Economic Times lazing atop her desk on a gloomy Wednesday morning. Clouds shielded the morning sun as rains had suddenly picked up, thundering and roaring their way to the parched lands below. Any other day and Geet would have whipped her head to her floor-to-ceiling glass window and admired the beauty that was Rain; Beheld the grey sky merge with the blueness of sea in far horizon as rains connected the two ever so lovingly. Any other day and she would have stuck her forehead to the cold glass window and taken in the vista for hours together, shunning all her day's work; much to her boss's annoyance; Just any other day.

But not today.

Turning her gaze back to the newspaper, her thoughts drifted past.

Seeing the man on front page stare back at her with a pair of brown intimidating eyes precipitated thoughts that were condensed somewhere deep in her mind. His handsome face hid most of his thoughts from the world but not her. Every fiber of his face spoke volumes, only if someone could read. Every pore of his body had a story to tell, if someone could listen. And she was that someone.


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OVR4CxjESMs[/YOUTUBE]


All right, so here we are!


Another story for you'll as I had promised.
This would be longer and its more conventional unlike my first work.

For now I would call it an SS but would duely change it into an FF (Most probably).
Hope to welcome all your Likes, Comments and Criticism...Do leave them by, its the most precious reward a writer can expect!

Frosted Starlit.

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INDEX:

Chapter 1-Shackled Liberation (Pg 6)

Chapter 2-Enlightened Shadow (Pg 10)

Chapter 3-Not your's, forever. (Pg 14)

Chapter 4-Eternity from another Universe (Pg 18)
Chapter 5-Memories and you...(Pg 23)

Chapter 6-And the coin flips! (Pg 27)

Chapter 7-Your's and Back to You...(Pg 32)

Chapter 8-A Blushing Sky (Pg 37)

Chapter 9-Intangible Sparks (Pg 46)

Chapter 10-An ending Eternity (Pg 53)

Chapter 11-An abnormal homecoming (Pg 58)

Chapter 12-The dimming fire (Pg 68)

Chapter 13-Twisted soul (Pg 75)

Chapter 14-The fire rekindles... (Pg 83)

Chapter 15-Taste of Youth (Pg 92)
Chapter 16-Broken him... (Pg 99)
Chapter 17-Old sins have shadows... (Pg 105)
Chapter 18-The red eyed boy (Pg 112)

Chapter 19-A Sensual Encounter (Pg. 120)


Chapter 20-The rescuing Damsel (Pg. 134)
Edited by frostedstarlit - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONGRATS FOR THE NEW STORY😊
IS LOVE FROM ACROSS OVER😕
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Originally posted by: punam2712

CONGRATS FOR THE NEW STORY😊

IS LOVE FROM ACROSS OVER😕

Hey!
Thanks darling.
Now, its over.
Have updated Part X
Its the last part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow 😃 a romantic one next...sounds interesting dear...start it asap😊
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Originally posted by: honeygrape

wow 😃 a romantic one next...sounds interesting dear...start it asap😊

Sure!
Will devote more time to this now since Love from Across has ended...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for the new SS ..

Nice prologue ..
Waiting for Part 1 .
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Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply fabulous.loved it,

Thank you darling!
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Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

lovely concept..pls cont soon..

Thank you dear...
Sure!
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Originally posted by: .bloom.

Congrats for the new SS ..

Nice prologue ..
Waiting for Part 1 .

Thank you!
Will update soon

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