MG (FF) : Back to You (Updated #II link: Pg 141) - Page 91

hmm... Rajma Rice and Bread Pizzaaa... i don't like Rajma too, i tried a lot but i could never like it. already I'm loving the past so far. Geet's character is just amazing and I'm also amazed at how maan is responding to her antics.

finally I'm done with 1st thread... usually i have read stories about geet being in distress n maan would be the rescuer but here its the other way sound it amuses me. I'm truly enjoying reading back to you :)

Hi frosty

im not from geet forum but was just going thru it this title stuck me

and i am amazed to read this with no clich m & B love story but different story of maneet

where one side geet who waited for her first love to come back while the other side maan was so grossed in his materiliastic growth that he did not hear wat his soul aspire for but nevertheless he finally acknowledge the real calling and came back to geet

I am glad she did not accepted in one go and betray her best friend yash who is doing so much although knowing each truth of hers

but then maan his stubborn freak wont let go his misthy well so here he is going knock each nook n corner of her heart where she buried yet alive his love forever for eternity.

with beautiful cherished or i can say haunted encounters of their initial meetings but then as you said the raw spark is something hard to ignore and they fell is spell called Love.

well loving their first nervous kiss to chocolaty kiss

PS i like title to your each update n specially blushing sky

Just read till Ch eternity will come back soon

Homecoming to lavish penthouse which maan called ours that too after saving from uncalled attack n later kiss which bore his fear to lose his love n now

maan has lot to do with stay and don't stay hmm

another memory form where they begin after 3 strange encounter

she want to make documentary interesting plus she knows he effects her senses

n ok on her research n his name uttered from those rosey lips n the lady who has affected it so n then as its always first time so MSK too did for lady who conquered her subconscious mind and later ruled over heart but i guess brain did not let him hears his heartbeats so well which lead to 8 years gap n i can carved some reasons of what reason behind maan forgetfulness thru this chapter

he has lot more than his eyes bore he is coming as mystery

and the strong push and pull towards each other the one soul is identifying his other half is seems to be such mystery

i was completely engrossed in this update and difficult to comprehend as writer you have wrote much more than mere words in this chaper "Twisted soul"

a lot things which is setting a path and offcourse will be answered in your next's

superb writing it has really captivating i have almost spent half day in reading yours n glad it is complete so i don't have to wait but now problem is how will shut off my pc from this brilliant work👏👏👏

So adi hai reveal the truth which maan desperately hiding form geet

poor guy he is gone so is maan with geet deadly glares

bothe my favourites yumm but sad part i am not well that i have taken an off coz of stomach upset but then now regrets as found your great ff to read

o man this is so wet and sexy especially how you put your thoughts abt gc as geet words really yours o so description makes my heart beats faster

aww thei cute bickering over one thing now to before but the essence remains same n yes MSK is changing

then again that too clich yet romantic maneet fall n hold is always a delight

o so food memories to a rare words maan has said be it sorry then and now suddenly ILU in cafe to her and so eating from one plate is like ...

on the top the feelings, warmth , comfort of souls they share makes it more worth

maan having nightmares n when geet is there how can she remain untouched to his miseries here she is to sooth him

so an urget to meet geet made maan join samar n geet group n then he get along with all n y not as all somewhere hold importance in hsi mishty life n he get a chance to be with her

hmm well than somehow in all the group still they find some time for themselves although unintentional but its unlike maan n he is njying it

well i have been to Mumbai n yah bandstand is fab but never been to monsoon but heard of it so can imagine it well

see still i cant control myself man i gtg i have to get up

tc gal you really write fab

Moi still in sulking mode🤓😈 Frost... Back to you

Originally posted by: COLOGY

Moi still in sulking mode🤓😈 Frost... Back to you

Kaha ho tum?

sry to interrupt between beautiful comments ...

@Ra

Lovely comments :)

i must say geet imagination are quite innovative abandoned' you really kind a redefine that word for me frosty

and then it take me long back to first chapter where she read more than anyone can thru his pic in ET and strange fact is he promised he will open not to himself or anyone but her and seems like the nature is showering them to go ahead and let it like the water from clouds belong to wide open sky

bliss indeed it is dear n present was much the same till they both crashes from dreamy state to real life

still maan care touches you so is geet concern of her n later maan n his pain is wat all matters to her

btw dk kahin dev khurana toh nahi well i guess he is not yet entered anyways will see

its already difficult to see strong man like Maan have nightmares that too earth shattering one n now again in past but the thing changed his words stay to go away hmmm

Maan love challenges n especially when its form his mishty

the red eyed boy again this time but thx to geet who think he is just being possessive n paranoid

so geet in DK den well i guess creative fields are like the way you described well maan entres in wild state n dev going close to geet well this cant be accepted so geet have to face the consequences although which we n they both emjoyed thoroughly

oh man his style while dressing up to addressing her as mrs Khurana was not enough to kill you made him let her know that she has come again to him only running away from him

ha ha ha

dev double date idea n how geet relate his form maan words n later double date excited but more i loved their past how they reconcile with chocolates n smiles

yeah she is hero n our hero is poor damsel may be this is why it seems more fun reading and unique of its own

o dear i have completed thread 1 in 2 days hmmm to be precise n soon jumping on thread 2 please do read comments its exclusively for you

tc and thanks once again for this beautiful work

OMG!

yes adi tell dadima..