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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gurti30

awesome dear

so dev knows about geet
waiting for date

Not really...
But things will reveal soon!
and the date...hmm😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

poor geet, howmuch ever she tries to disobey him, she gets convinced very sooon...loved the part😊

Hahahaaa
She gets convinced but then gives him hell about it too😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swarnakanak

Hey its great reading such a fabulous, amazing ,awesome, superb splendid sumptumous, stupendous story.. n u r eloquent flawless raconteur brewing''back to u'' even more tasty... now coming to story... loved geet's felicity and maan dissembling his emotion...the very great msk ahh n not to forgot charming dev... beauty flowing in both their genes.. wel i felt blessed reading back to back reticent and tumultumous update without a single minute wait...but seem i have wait till friday for nxt one... continue soon waiting...


Hey its great reading such a fabulous, amazing ,awesome, superb splendid sumptumous, stupendous story.. n u r eloquent flawless raconteur brewing''back to u'' even more tasty... now coming to story...
Oh my god!
Look at the number of adjectives you've used to describe my story!
Flattered I am; seriously..thank you so much!

loved geet's felicity and maan dissembling his emotion...the very great msk ahh n not to forgot charming dev... beauty flowing in both their genes.. wel i felt blessed reading back to back reticent and tumultumous update without a single minute wait...but seem i have wait till friday for nxt one... continue soon waiting...

Oh! Glad you like the characters😃
Hahahaaa
Lucky you; because my readers usually get pissed when I don't update for two weeks even after Friday promises...LOL
Glad to have you here dear!
Will await your comment after this update😳


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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay since I am awaiting some comments and a lot of pestering from a few readers (you'll know who you guys are!)
And the thread has gone above 140 so will open another thread now!

Gosh!!!!
Can't believe Ch. 21 will be in thread 2!

So see you guys in the next thread of Back to You!

Back to You #II
Edited by frostedstarlit - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Ok before frosty u kill me or beat me with the sticks (you can use tomatoes too!!!becoz I love them )😆

I will straight away write your comment

The red eyed boy

That shadow of hers

Buried among his dusky contours

Red rimmed fiery eyes

Tearing at already deep sutures.

Frosty seriously man do consider my suggestion and plzzz publish your poetic renaissance .

The red eyed boy well this excelling phrase for our mystery maan 😉

Geet is losing herself in the ocean of maan unbounded love😳 (I just cant swipe out the wide grin on my face and I hope u will help me to continue with it wont u ?😆)

"I relaxed last night after you kissed me like that"😲

Omg he knew it 😲

well isn't that obvious😆 silly me (I just hope geet does that every night )

Wooshhh and here the back to you spaceship lands in the merry past (merry till I know the mystery)

doughnuts and Frankie.(awww I love Frankie my mouth is watering specially the one with cheese yummm)😃😛

Where's Mr. Gallant tyrant?"

Nakul laughed at the names Geet called Maan.

Just wait and watch nakul baby there is lots store for u (shocks are the highlighted one )

Maan doesn't sleep becoz of creepy mysterious nightmares (sigh)

I feel bad very bad actually 🥱

But why fear when geet handa opps soon to be mrs khurana is there !!!!!

"Well then, I might as well go and freak him out!"(I dID THIS WITH MY DARLING SIS WHEN SHE WAS HERE *MISSING HER* WELL hi -fi geet )

Thishhh my heart shattered( this time fevicol wouldn't help ) , what is tormenting maan so much 😭

Why cant he sleep peacefully ?what is his past ?why he is alone?where are his parents ?does he any siblings?

Frosty u r successful to leave us with the questionnaire😛( now plzzz fill in the answers tooo)

Chup bilkul chup !!!!!!! awww I waited for this classic dialogue soo much and see my wish accomplished 😉😆

Arghhh maan whats wrong with u man the girl was just helping u out 😡

Idiot!!!

someone has truly said "man will be man "but here it is little twisted "maan will be maan "

Poor geet it wasn't her fault she was clueless

Humph !!!! I am angery maan how can u make such a sweet girl (beautiful too)cry

Very bad katti !!😡

Your nightmares are not what are tormenting you. It's you who is."👏👏

soo true maan is just letting those mystery dreamsto trouble him by cutting off himself from the rest of the world 😡
Good one geet!!! sometime sentences should be left incomplete it does wonders😳

Back to present 😉

Ummm I think the above geet was better she spoke what was in her heart unlike this geet who has shut the door of her heart soo tightly which is giving maan tough time (waise he deserves it doesn't he ??😡)

Over my dead body!(feelings are mutual maan)😳

Opps geet left that too without telling the MSK tch tch god save geet (babaji come to the rescue plzzz 😉)

Hmm I like max (he somewhat reminds me the two guards in men in black )😆

Awesome update frosty👏

Thank u for the pm😃

Love aanya 😃

p.s I knew it 😛!!! I was right u wrote that os see aanya is always right😉 (me doing bhangra)😆

Edited by aanya84 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

A Sensual Encounter

Hot and hungry;

Raw sensuality oozes out'

As our mouths fuse

Again the fate turns about.

Opps its hot somebody plzzz call 911 😆(AANYA HIDiNG HER FACE IN THE PILLOW😳 )

Wohoo cant help frosty the title has furnished my whole thought process

"Be safe Geet or it wouldn't be good for you"

Or for anyone.

Somebody is in the danger zone !!!🥱

So how've you settled in? Hope New York isn't giving you much trouble?"

Wrong question bimbo!! NY has showed all its true colours to geet (well msk's colour precisely😳 )😆

Angry birds, seriously?😃

Hey geet not fair I love angry birds dare u say anything about it !!😛

The room was done in yellows and greens, an angry birds carpet outside a door she deduced would be a bathroom, some dice like stools and a plasma TV with a PSP!

Hey frosty can I plzzz meet DK in person I just figured it out that

hell he has all my favorites (well dk which version of psp are u using do tell me dude😆 )

Hi I am'."

"Dev"

Omg this was totally unexpected it didn't strike me that DK could be DEV KHURANA omg !omg !(my mouth as wide as Atlantic ocean

Maan knew all the time that who was geet boss 😲😲😲😲

oh sweet lord this is going to be so fun

I cant imagine geets confused face (angry too )😆

This is going to be so embarrassing😆

Oh poor geet she is still in dark about the relation between dk and msk poor soul !!!!!!!🥱

Yes they kissed !!! that to 6 th time 😳

Awww geet was so flushed 😳

I can see red hue n her cheeks 😳

Omg I think babaji is on maans side😳

Hahahahahahah geet the "tubelight "😃😆😛

Just realized that the two devils are the son of the same mother 😉

Ohhh god tch tch tch I sympathize with u geet 😆

"zor ka zatka zoro se laga "ouch 🥱!!😆😆😆!

Awesome update frosty !!👏

Thank u for the pm 😃

Love aanya 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
At last you are here madam aanya!
Two more chapter comments due and lots of buttering because I am cross...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: frostedstarlit

At last you are here madam aanya!
Two more chapter comments due and lots of buttering because I am cross...

babaji frosty is angryOuch
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Posted: 11 years ago
ok frosty I think the temperature is too high
but I will not rest till I have my sweetie pie cool frosty is Back to me!!!!
but the day has unfortunately ended so sadly I have to go to dream the ways I can manofy u
Days come and go
leasing out night
to us
but one thing never
change
the chemistry between frosty , stars and moon
(oye don't forget aanya too)
p.s THE ABOVE LINES COME FROM HEART
1 when a person has to manofy an awesome poet 😆😆
Edited by aanya84 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wah wah!
I guess I am rubbing off the poetic keeda on you 😉

But seriously man; you are the most adorable thing I have seen!
Chalo now...do i have a choice?
Forgiven but come back to me after eveet update huh!

Now go read them...yiu have a lot to catch up on darling aanya 😃 😳 😉

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