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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: .ramya-gurtian.

u r jus fab
read ur other ss n os
both r sad ones though :(
if u hav othr wrks den plz pm me
sent u my buddy request accept it
u hav great writing skills
continue
luved it

Thank you!
Yeah, my track record is kinda melancholic with two OSs and one SS...
But this one's not tragic.
And yes, I'll accept your request and PM you the links right away.
<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Hey Guys!

Back with an update!
I have started PMing so those of you who wish to recieve one, do send me a buddy request!
So enough of pre-update bak-bak,
Here you go...
Not your's, forever.

Through the thickets of time,

Crossing seven seas I flew.

Back to that passed out clime;

I am back to you….

"Late."

"You're very late"

She admonished him.

"I'm sowwie"

He said with his Bambi eyes, trying to win over her.

"Don't SOWWIE me!"

She stared sternly at him but then gave in chucking at his cute expression. Who wouldn't melt over such a cute piece!

"My cupcake"

She sat on her haunches, winding her arms around his little body, hugging him close and then kissing his cheeks noisily.

"Ewww..Don't kiss me"

He crinkled his little nose, rubbing his cheek.

"Hawww! Ook give me a tight hug then"

And he happily tightened his arms around Geet's neck. Grinning from ear to ear, Geet embraced him.

"Hey there! She's my gal young man"

Yash cut in playfully and Geet chuckled as the little boy narrowed his dark eyes at Yash.

"She is mine first"

Rohan pointed his little finger at Yash, staring hard at him.

"Okay. Right. I surrender. She is your's first and my...ummm...let's see, can she be second mine?"

Yash asked with puppy eyes.

"Okay! Will do."

The little one nodded crossing his arms over his little chest.

"Great. So, on that note I've got you brownies waiting outside"

Yash rubbed his hands playfully and Rohan darted out of the room to gorge on his favourite brownies leaving Geet and Yash all by themselves.

Geet laughed behind him, turning back to the mirror, fixing the earring in her ear. Resplendent in a lavender-white saree, she looked ethereal. The colour glowed over her skin even as her face didn't show much of it. Because most of it was the make-up and not her inner glow. She was pretending to look beautiful!

"Geet"

Yash pushed in from behind as their eyes met in the mirror.

"I know you don't love me. But I promise to make it work. I promise to base our marriage on our friendship for the rest of our lives."

He confessed genuinely.

Geet turned around facing him; her eyes reflecting a smile, sad though.

"I know Yash. But you deserve much more, much better."

"I am getting more. You're my buddy!"

"Yes I am. And thank you for understanding."

"You know you're my bestest friend."

"I am!"

He chuckled and left giving her his sweetest smile.

"See you 'Soon-to-be-Mrs.-Malhotra'"

He shouted over his shoulder on his way down.

And again her mind tore, tore in two parts. The hopeful, insane part waited for Maan; Waited for him to come back before she put the ring onto Yash's finger. But another sane piece of her mind, despaired at the fact that he wouldn't come.

Why would he after all these years?

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Because I love you.

And now I know it. I'll cross every hurdle to get back to you Geet. I'll go through any amount of pain to love you. I have undergone these past depressing years not knowing all along that it was you, my ray of light.

It was you for whom I have strived throughout.

It was you for whom I have lived this day.

I didn't know till that hour what I had missed.

But now, no more.

He thought mid air as the flight crossed seven seas to India.

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Gathered by guests and flowers and music and happiness, Geet stood forlorn. Accepting wishes and blessings from friends and family, smiling but not really feeling content she stood beside Yash, going through last of her hopeful moments. But she knew how impossible it was. She was being a ten year old waiting for her favourite show after it got over. She was being foolish, foolish not to enjoy her engagement; Foolish not to cherish Yash. Her best friend.

If not anything else, he will surely make a great husband, she knew. A husband needs to be a friend first and they were at greatest advantage here. Their understanding went deep down to a primal level. Hence, he knew her so well and so did she!

Life would be perfect with him, she thought as the ceremony to exchange rings began. Her mother was the happiest creature on planet to finally see her get hitched. And Geet couldn't be more happy. Her father was happy because she was happy. There was mirth everywhere and poured over from all corners, where ever she looked around; only, it didn't pour over her. Her glass remained empty. It shall forever. But she should learn to find her happiness in Yash now, she thought as her mother offered her a ring.

Taking the ring from her enthusiastic mother she gently slipped it on to Yash's ring finger. Party poppers erupted and her apartment echoed with applause and hooting by her friends.

Yash pulled out a ring from the velvet box and slipped it on her finger. Another party popper busted and there was hooting and cheers and congratulory announcements. There was celebration everywhere. It seemed as if the world was moving faster than any jet and she was frozen to her spot. Giving herself a moment to think of him before his thoughts too became forbidden.

Geet closed her eyes, sighing heavily.

This is it.

It's no more of you Maan.

I'm not yours, forever.

Yash engulfed her in a bear hug and clumsily she wrapped her arms around him. This is where she belonged now. She had to get familiar with his arms now. She had to forget the feel of someone else's arms.

Geet smiled and tried to beam at her over-excited friends who pushed her deeper into Yash's arms; oblivious to the fact that a pair of shocked brown eyes stared back at her from behind the curtains at her entrance.

Okay, so no jumping to conclusions just yet...

There are many more parts to go and this may turn into an FF!

Give me a week or so...

Do leave me your Likes, Comments and Criticism.

Nothing better than to hear from you guys.

And, I have written another OS, mind you its not a happy-happy one
Inheritance of Fates
Until next update
<3
Frosted Starlit.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
As you said, I am not jumping to conclusions ;). But I am curious why he acknowledged his love so late.
Nice :).
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Rohan sounds like a cutie!

Yash seems like an understanding and good friend.

It seemed as if the world was moving faster than any jet and she was frozen to her spot.👏👏👏

Loved it. Eager to read more.

Thanks for updating!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

As you said, I am not jumping to conclusions ;). But I am curious why he acknowledged his love so late.
Nice :).

Good!
Well, thats how it was meant to be...
Thank you darling!!
<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: dqno1

Rohan sounds like a cutie!

Yash seems like an understanding and good friend.

It seemed as if the world was moving faster than any jet and she was frozen to her spot.👏👏👏

Loved it. Eager to read more.

Thanks for updating!

Well yeah,
Things will unravel as story progresses.
It seemed as if the world was moving faster than any jet and she was frozen to her spot
🤗
Thank you!!!
Will update soon and probably convert it into an FF!
<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87



Geet is engaged to yash...😭

Maan is watching her getting engaged...

very painful...

my heart really went for Geet...she is in so much hope that he will come...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




Geet is engaged to yash...😭

Maan is watching her getting engaged...

very painful...

my heart really went for Geet...she is in so much hope that he will come...

thanx for pm...


Thank you dear!
Its painful for both at two opposite ends; and this very pain is what their love has to fight...
Your welcome.
😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: frostedstarlit

Well yeah,

Things will unravel as story progresses.
It seemed as if the world was moving faster than any jet and she was frozen to her spot
🤗
Thank you!!!
Will update soon and probably convert it into an FF!
<3

That would be nice... I think you can carry it to FF with the way the story is.. lots to explore...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
SHE WAITED TILL THE LAST MOMENT BEFORE SURRENDERING TO THE INEVITABLE
HE REACHED BUT LEFT IT A LITTLE LATE
NOW SHE BELONGS TO SOMEONE ELSE

HOW DID HE KNOW WHERE TO FIND HER AFTER 8 YEARS
Edited by punam2712 - 12 years ago

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