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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

well wondering what made maan not come back to geet in the first place...was he so sucked into the maze of his success, that he had conveniently forgotten that someone was waiting for him to claim her as his... good that he witnessed their engagement..wondering what is he going to do now...😉

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

nice one

but i am still confused

what happened

waiting to know more

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

love rohan...😃😃 aur yeh kya kar diya engagemnt ho gaya woh bhi yash ke saath

haa and the last lline , am not yours forever😭😭 lovd that line

PS: and you call your OS not so happy wala...hello madamji, you shoud be calling it extremely sad wala OS...😳

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: dqno1

That would be nice... I think you can carry it to FF with the way the story is.. lots to explore...

I think so...

I am not too dedicated to writing regularly but will surely try to put it up for you guys!

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frostedstarlit

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: punam2712
SHE WAITED TILL THE LAST MOMENT BEFORE SURRENDERING TO THE INEVITABLE
HE REACHED BUT LEFT IT A LITTLE LATE

NOW SHE BELONGS TO SOMEONE ELSE

HOW DID HE KNOW WHERE TO FIND HER AFTER 8 YEARS

Now thats the real strife for their love;

And he came to her apartment where the engagement was going on...

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: yappingduck
well wondering what made maan not come back to geet in the first place...was he so sucked into the maze of his success, that he had conveniently forgotten that someone was waiting for him to claim her as his... good that he witnessed their engagement..wondering what is he going to do now...😉

Thats to be found out through a journey in past...

Another update will clear the haze a bit!

Thank you dear!😃

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: kiran_rati
nice one
but i am still confused

what happened

waiting to know more

Thank you!

Well, haze will clear by the next chapter...!

😉

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: honeygrape
love rohan...😃😃 aur yeh kya kar diya engagemnt ho gaya woh bhi yash ke saath
haa and the last lline , am not yours forever😭😭 lovd that line

PS: and you call your OS not so happy wala...hello madamji, you shoud be calling it extremely sad wala OS...😳

😛 Rohan has recieved quite a few compliments, eh!

Yes! Engagement done...!

*Evil* am I not?😈😆

Thank you so much...I wanted to write the antithesis of 'Your's forever'

and turns out its well accepted!

P.S. I know! I knoe! *hands up in defeat*

The OS is extremely sad wala OS...😳

😆😉

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Common why he is hiding behind the curtain...

Maan,you were needed to show your face,not hiding it behind the curtain as if you are a wedding {engagement precisely} crasher...!!!😆

Well,somewhere i am glad too that he witnessed her engagement with his own eyes..He should feel the pain that Geet might be feeling since he had left her...!!!Like every other reader here,I am also eager to know how come he did not realize what he was missing in his life till now...

anyways,I am happy you are making it a "FF" and I expect a "happy ending" here as you have made a "hattrick" with one tragic story and two tragic one shorts...😛😆..Don't mind please,i was kidding..As a writer,the start,end and the middle,you have the sole right to decide all of them...No matter what,your readers are going to like your decision always...

Lovely chapter dear...

I am done with my limited vocab of "praising adjectives" so please understand what i wanted to say without me using any words...!!!

PS-Rohan is a cutie pie..😃

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: palindrome
Common why he is hiding behind the curtain...
Maan,you were needed to show your face,not hiding it behind the curtain as if you are a wedding {engagement precisely} crasher...!!!😆

Well,somewhere i am glad too that he witnessed her engagement with his own eyes..He should feel the pain that Geet might be feeling since he had left her...!!!Like every other reader here,I am also eager to know how come he did not realize what he was missing in his life till now...

anyways,I am happy you are making it a "FF" and I expect a "happy ending" here as you have made a "hattrick" with one tragic story and two tragic one shorts...😛😆..Don't mind please,i was kidding..As a writer,the start,end and the middle,you have the sole right to decide all of them...No matter what,your readers are going to like your decision always...

Lovely chapter dear...

I am done with my limited vocab of "praising adjectives" so please understand what i wanted to say without me using any words...!!!

PS-Rohan is a cutie pie..😃

Heheeheee!

I love weaving little mysteries here and there... And Maan surely could have been an engagement crasher had he not been shocked out of wits😉

He is Maan Singh Khurana after all!

Oh yes, Most of my readers are after my life for happy endings!😆

After three back-to-back tragic ones i owe you'll a happy story. This one will not be tragic, I assure. And another OS in making (Happy wala)!!!

I am working towards making this into an FF but have no expereince in that area at all. That is why I played safe and tagged it an SS...

As a writer, my reader's reviews and criticism matter the most but at the end of the day I will give you'll what I had originally planned; otherwise the essence is lost!

That's what I believe *no offence*

And happy ending, you can expect one mostly!

I'm not so evil after all!😉