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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Shefali16
blackberry is quite handy you know... ;)

very nyc update

maan had an accident...nd he realised he needs geet...

i guess he is quite late in realising it...

I know!

I get writing kicks late at night and switching on computer is troublesome at 1 am...

BB comes in handy!

Thanks yaar.

Lets see how late his realization is!

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

finally maan realized he needs geet more than anything ...awesome update ...maan ne itne saal laga diye ye samjhne me wo apna carier banane me itna busy tha k usko geet kabhi yaad hi nahi aai,plz update soon

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: preeti.1
finally maan realized he needs geet more than anything ...awesome update ...maan ne itne saal laga diye ye samjhne me wo apna carier banane me itna busy tha k usko geet kabhi yaad hi nahi aai,plz update soon

Thats how sometimes life is... Career and Status boost ride over you and then nothing matters except when you're threatened for life!

Will update soon.

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Mansi Tripathi

@mansi.tripathi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

nice update

Loved it

Maan realises reason for him living is Geet

Maan had a fatal accident

Maan going back to Geet
continue soon

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: mansi.tripathi
nice update
Loved it
Maan realises reason for him living is Geet
Maan had a fatal accident
Maan going back to Geet
continue soon

Thank you dear!!!
Yeah, Maan has realized at last...
Let's see if he gets there on time!

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CrabbyEntity

@CrabbyEntity

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

very nice start dear... luvd reading both the parts and liked the plot very much...even after waiting for so long geet z still ready to accept him at the last moment provided if he cums to her but i wonder wud it b that easy for her n now that i knw that maan z on his way back to her wud he b forgiven that easily or he wd hv to woo her all over again... the suspense just added more interest to the story line...

thank u for the update!!!😳

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Finally I am here...😛

First of all sorry for being late dear and congratulations for your second story on GF...🤗

I liked the concept alot...I loved the "Hope" in Geet's heart,even just before few hours of her engagement .she is waiting for him to come to her..!!! She truly loves him alot..Maan was indeed an idiot to chase behind materialistic success ignoring such "true love"..Finally his accident brought him back to his senses and now he knew what he was missing in his life...You know,it reminded me of your OS,"What If".. Now waiting for Maan to land his "private jet"at Geet's engagement venue...😆

I honestly have no words to praise your writing skills dear..You are too good with expression..Honestly telling,i read your stories just to read those "four lines" at the starting..I am "poem lover"..😛 But It does not mean I don't enjoy the chapters..I love them too and every time they left me wondering and trying hard to find out "adjectives" to praise you...!!!

You are brilliant,dear...!!!!

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: CrabbyEntity
very nice start dear... luvd reading both the parts and liked the plot very much...even after waiting for so long geet z still ready to accept him at the last moment provided if he cums to her but i wonder wud it b that easy for her n now that i knw that maan z on his way back to her wud he b forgiven that easily or he wd hv to woo her all over again... the suspense just added more interest to the story line...
thank u for the update!!!😳

Thank you darling!

Yeah, Maan's finally realized but will it all be so easy?

Well, the next update will answer that😉

Your welcome and updating in some time...

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: palindrome
Finally I am here...😛
First of all sorry for being late dear and congratulations for your second story on GF...🤗

I liked the concept alot...I loved the "Hope" in Geet's heart,even just before few hours of her engagement .she is waiting for him to come to her..!!! She truly loves him alot..Maan was indeed an idiot to chase behind materialistic success ignoring such "true love"..Finally his accident brought him back to his senses and now he knew what he was missing in his life...You know,it reminded me of your OS,"What If".. Now waiting for Maan to land his "private jet"at Geet's engagement venue...😆

I honestly have no words to praise your writing skills dear..You are too good with expression..Honestly telling,i read your stories just to read those "four lines" at the starting..I am "poem lover"..😛 But It does not mean I don't enjoy the chapters..I love them too and every time they left me wondering and trying hard to find out "adjectives" to praise you...!!!

You are brilliant,dear...!!!!

Hiiiee!

So good to see you here; you know I have this big grin plastered even as I write...

Thank you for reading!!!

Ohh. you read What if?

I didn't know though, hope you liked that story..

About this one, well the answer is coming up soon; updating soo...

Frankly, I too love poems and try and rhyme a line or two suiting the update.

At times the brain works, at times it doesn't! LOL

So glad you enjoy the chapters!!

You know what your comments mean to me🤗

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ramya sree

@.ramya-gurtian.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

u r jus fab
read ur other ss n os
both r sad ones though :(
if u hav othr wrks den plz pm me
sent u my buddy request accept it
u hav great writing skills
continue
luved it