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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#891

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Yeh kaise ho gaya

😆 😆 😆

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monika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#892

amazing update love it love the way you write awesome

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#893

naintara got burnt and bruises...

from where...some body used to harass her...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...

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alfik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#894

as much as I like Maaneet updates...I equally adore DevTara updates...they are simply amazing...both of their love stories are sweet, cute, adorable, etc...

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Maaneet099

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Posted: 12 years ago

#895

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Ah finally i am here... two updates aur naya daga kholne ke baad

i know saying sorry would be meaningless... aur pata nahi tum mujhe apna maanti ho ya nahi... haq nahi jata rahi ho na 😕

anyways i wont say anything because i know i am at fault...

Ch17:

it was completely fresh from Geet's side. reading a story from a character's point of view always makes me wonder what the other characters are going through and you have fulfilled that void 😃 the trip in Geet's eyes was completely different. i loved her drooling sessions as well as shying sessions 😆 and that little dance she did when she thought nobody was watching 😳

the cherry on the cake was the ride back. what better present could there have been than sitting with the love of your life in your arms. contentment was reflected in me too when i was reading it 😃

lol i wonder what will Geet do when she learns it was indeed her knight in shining armor who sent her the notes. ek jhappi se kaam nahi chala sakti... ek pappi bhi chahiye 😉

Ch18:

oh no the cool guru Dev has become irritated and angry young man. Dev babu kyun Maan's post churaing re? 😕😆

haha he is really being fed too much sweet from Pari. lol too much sugar is poison indeed. i so could feel the choking and suffocation from Dev's side. i have met a few people who are so damn sweet yet so irritating. and the bad part is they aren't really at fault magar i see only what is wrong

taming of Dev indeed 😆

aaww now that i-star's brightness has gone down, Dev has lost his way back home huh 😆 his restlessness and guilt was aptly portrayed.

loved both updates.

i was a fan of SRK up until K3G. after that i kind of sat back and didnt watch that many movies of his. i havent listened to the songs in Veer-Zara expect of main yahaan hoon wala. shall listen later. abhi work pe hoon 😆

cannot wait to read more 😳

Edited by Maaneet099 - 12 years ago

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divya22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#896

nyc part...
good to ki see dat kisi ne dev khurana ki raato ki neend uda di ...
bt well evn i was shocked knowing abt her conditions...
really eager to know ki wat happened with her...