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Posted: 12 years ago

#881

Originally posted by: Onir
Yayy me 1st 😃 😳

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#882

Originally posted by: Onir
Yayy me 1st 😃 😳

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aditi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#883

wow!!that was overwhelming especially ending...wonder what had happened with naintara!!! by the way dev called her naintara instead of istar😉

why do i feel we are going to see a matured dev now??? loved it

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Jaggy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#884

Amazing update ..loved it ..oops poor dev .

What happened to NT ...

waiting for next update

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#885

wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#886

First and foremost so sorry for late comment

Ay Ay Aye Phasa😉

Dev bura phasa

lekin bahot mazaa aaya

😆 😆 😆

Bechaare Nakul ko kitna sunaya🤔

Tikhi mirchi ke saath rehke oops 😉tikhi mirchi khaate khaate

pheeka pasta kaise accha lagega😳

Dadi sensing an alert😈

So I am too smart for you has landed himself in a big big problem😕

Pari's immaturity and constantly tagging on irking him

Though I am happy that inspite of him knowing about her feelings he is keeping his distance as well as trying not to be rude or snappy at her

Like it is said expect the unexpected

Dev missing his shrew😳

To distance himself from her, her thoughts and also to pamper his bruised ego he cut himself off from Chopra project only to regret it

The chilled out attitude gone down the drain now was the time to slog and Dadi's time to seek revenge😈

Setting him up with his shrew😉

This line really cracked me up

Ms. Kapoor who was looking at him like one looks at a fly in their coffee.

😆 😆 😆

About the dream😆 see I was right partly pink nighty laces your addition😉

Dev finally acknowledging and accepting all the qualities of Miss Kapoor. Admitting to himself that were in sync mentally and them together was surely a winning combo 😊

NT hurt and Dev helps her

His restlessness and worry for her, him smacking himself mentally for troubling her all the while, he noticing a slightly weak and frail I-star and somewhere feeling guilty for her state😒

Probably one of the rear insight of vulnerable I-star 'looks are indeed deceptive' sometimes😔

Doctor reveals one of her closely guarded truth and Dev respecting her privacy and and decides to back out

😃

Fantastic update yaara

superbly penned down

just loved it

🤗 🤗

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago