THE LOCKET(5) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED 1 - Page 26

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

I love OTT. It is so awesome 😆

Yeah mujhe pagal kutte ne kaata 😆

😆 😆

I am trying not to place it on hold because I will def lose the link. As it is I can have an entire scene in front of me when I'm driving or cooking but by the time I get pen and paper, the dialogues are gone. I will try to keep giving the updates as and when I can. There will be an ebb and flow but I do want to write this my way so am dropping the idea of closing it soon. I will be left with dissatisfaction if I do that.

woah that sounds interesting...want to read more , woh bhi sooon...😳😃

Originally posted by: dqno1

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Hum hum hai
Baki sab kam hai


Sticking tongue out at Madhu

hear hear 🥳

Originally posted by: dqno1

Abhi toh ro rahi thi ki weight badh gaya vacation pe.. 😲

Originally posted by: dqno1

TEASER

Bambi in the clutches of a wolf. That was the first thought that entered her mind. The second thought was her own outfit at the moment. She opened the front door and then escaped to her room.

Dev stood at the doorstep with a stunned expression. Was that his devil-on-wheels who was just standing in front of him? The one who had made his life hell these past few months with her discipline, timeliness and holier than thou attitude. He knew Geet had a roommate but did not know that it was his I-star. Did she just open the door with a cute pink sleeveless cotton night dress not even up to her knees? Did her nightie actually have hearts on it? He was totally befuddled. No it could not be her. Her long curly hair wet from a shower and a welcoming smile on her face. No, he must have hurt his head like Geet had hurt her ankle. She never smiled. Of course, she didn't. As for that outfit, there was no way it was her. So what if it felt like a hundred degrees today, there was no way miss buttoned up to her chin would wear such a thing. His curiosity was getting the better of him and he wondered of a way to get her out again as he helped Geet settle on to the sofa.

A/N: Love it, hate it.. let me know.

wow!!! can't wait to read more...its awesome...plz plz plz update quickly...

teaser
excellent...
cant wait for the update dear...
cont soon...

sorry for not commenting this days since i wanted to read all the updates at one go and should say all the updates are so so captivating , engrossing and gave me enthralling experience .song selections are so good and most of my favorites and all the songs gelled along the situation u wrote . language was so soothing and poignant to read . Maan is super duper cute banda nd geet is no less . The way u decsribed her is so beautiful kahi na kahi ais alagtha hai ki sundartha ho to aise ,hum kyon na hai aise ?

that was awesome and much awaiting teaser to c how did dev reacted to c HIs I-Star in different avatar 😉 and kaun sa maud liya 😃