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dqno1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1031

Originally posted by: muskanp
T car trip u wrote so beautifully
Every bit of it
Wow
Just can't wait to read geets POV
Hope u write her feel abt t car trip too plz plz

It's so true we miss out on enjoying t most beautiful time of our life sometimes because of silly anger
U described maans reaction so much like a teenager
Just wow

Thanks so much... I have never been there although would love to go there someday.

Maan is still a teenager.. little easy to get riled up... 😆

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dqno1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1032

Originally posted by: muskanp
War indeed
😆
She really gave him a tough time
So did he 😉
I loved t way she kept showing him t rule book 😆

& t breath taking bathroom encounter 😉

I love their fighting... it is most fun to write...😆

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dqno1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1033

Originally posted by: muskanp
Hi
Hi pe marjava
Oh my god that was so so so beautiful
Just brilliant dreamy hain kitna cutely romantic
I am still lost at that hain 😳

😃Glad you liked it.

These two drive me the most crazy because there are not many dialogues here. I am always worried if it came out right or not.

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dqno1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1034

Originally posted by: muskanp
Umm interesting turn of events
I star becoming his ankho ka tara 😉

Lot yet to be discovered abt nts past
Can't wait to read on

Dev is in too deep already...

You are catching up fast😃

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newmoviefan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1035

ch15 - oh those teenage years...😳
ch16 - Story of I-star and an intelligent tiffin chor... Ha!
ch17 - earring and the ending 'Hi' was the show stealer in this update for me.
ch18 - Taming of 'The DEV' hahaha...where do u get such stuff from 😆...

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dqno1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1036

Originally posted by: newmoviefan
ch15 - oh those teenage years...😳
ch16 - Story of I-star and an intelligent tiffin chor... Ha!
ch17 - earring and the ending 'Hi' was the show stealer in this update for me.
ch18 - Taming of 'The DEV' hahaha...where do u get such stuff from 😆...

From my tedha dimaag😆

Thanks.

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Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1037

Hmm weird.

Could post in thread 2and 3 but thread 4 is locked. Never mind .Will post comment here for previous thread.

"Seriously, Geet, what an imagination you have! As if this is a movie and you are a heroine that someone is going to talk to you with their eyes. Aisa toh movies mein hota hai."

Wrong Geet, Fiction can only emulate what's present in real life and that's why facts are far more bizarre than any fiction.

It's just that in life these moments are so magical, coz they are so very rare. Whereas fiction kills all our sensitivity by overloading our senses with what should have been the rarest of the rare in the first place.

I remember how much I loved Maan and Geet's first eyelock. And then at some point it started losing it's charm coz they overkilled it by repeating it over and over and over agian.

Anyway I'm rambling, But I hear time and again, aise toh sirf movies me hota hai.

I am trying to figure out who this Sharmeen with Guru's pics is😆

Kicking noodles, Sweety and the mysterious Marie🤣

I too like the administrator with the cats😉😆

Oh man Avi, how could I have not read this fro so long. Where is kicking noodles when you need her? I deserve prasad from her, for missing this one.🤢

I can totally relate to the scene of the villagers helping Geet and Darji. That is what is great about small communities. They might gossip about you, complain about you but when you are down for the count they will close rank around you.😊

Poor Geet. But i guess I totally understand her decision of wanting to be with her Darji.

Been there, done that. It was worth it all the way.

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Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1038

This is the best description of ego I have ever read.

Avi, our next Sigmund Freud.😆

Just kidding. But the whole chapter I was nodding my head thinking to myself, "sh'es so right"😊

I hated Prof Bhaskar until he used the words, "Remember Geet, focusing on education means focusing on your future.

That's the mettle of a true teacher. He wants her to focus not on today's difficulties, but on the today that will decide her tomorrow,

P.S why is he so adorable?😳

Edited by Susegad - 11 years ago

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dqno1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1039

Originally posted by: Susegad
Hmm weird.
Could post in thread 2and 3 but thread 4 is locked. Never mind .Will post comment here for previous thread.

"Seriously, Geet, what an imagination you have! As if this is a movie and you are a heroine that someone is going to talk to you with their eyes. Aisa toh movies mein hota hai."

Wrong Geet, Fiction can only emulate what's present in real life and that's why facts are far more bizarre than any fiction.
It's just that in life these moments are so magical, coz they are so very rare. Whereas fiction kills all our sensitivity by overloading our senses with what should have been the rarest of the rare in the first place.
I remember how much I loved Maan and Geet's first eyelock. And then at some point it started losing it's charm coz they overkilled it by repeating it over and over and over agian.

Anyway I'm rambling, But I hear time and again, aise toh sirf movies me hota hai.

I am trying to figure out who this Sharmeen with Guru's pics is😆
Kicking noodles, Sweety and the mysterious Marie🤣

I too like the administrator with the cats😉😆

Oh man Avi, how could I have not read this fro so long. Where is kicking noodles when you need her? I deserve prasad from her, for missing this one.🤢
I can totally relate to the scene of the villagers helping Geet and Darji. That is what is great about small communities. They might gossip about you, complain about you but when you are down for the count they will close rank around you.😊

Poor Geet. But i guess I totally understand her decision of wanting to be with her Darji.
Been there, done that. It was worth it all the way.

Hmmm.. weird that they would close a topic. 😕

Sharmeen is Sheen.😆 She is mad for Guru... even sweet dreams ke badle she says Guru dreams😆😆

Now I am relieving some of my scenes when you mention them..

Thanks Nisha.

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Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1040

Well well I had a blast reading the fight between the two fashionistas

One a diva, our Z no less(my image of Z as the intellectual being has been replaced forever with the Jimmy Choo starlet😆

And our I-Star is no pale washout is she? She knows her fashion. It makes me really curious about her background.

And Dev a typical rooster, enjoying the hen fight.🤔

Hmm, I am confused in Ch 13. So obviously it's Geet, but looks like Dadi knows that Maan likes her. Therefore she is warning Dev off.

Wonder how she knows though.

At this point it is slightly confusing for me, between the present, the past and the slightly recenter past.

Well let me read on. No waiting that's the best part.😉

Oh now I get it. So Geet and Maan's story so far is from their college days, Dev and Tara's from the recent past when Maan is not in the counrty am I right? And this is when Geet comes to live in the outhouse? Hmm, but she is living with Tara right? Confusing.

So Maan and Geet are in class togehter or not? Coz he attends classes in the evening right and she during the day?😕

Really Babaji Travels bus?😆

Dashing motorcyle chase. 😳

Naureen's shers are perfection.😃

Edited by Susegad - 11 years ago