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Posted: 12 years ago
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ur update sweety..😃
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Part 28

Maaneet room:

Just as Geet had heard the knob of the door twisting she ran to the washroom not wanting to face Maan with the clothes she was wearing. but then peeped out as she heard something fall and when she saw Maan all fumbling she knew he was fully drunk just like Mukti had said she looked up angry and said, "aap ko mujhe trouble karne main itna maza kyun ata hai Baba ji, is puri duinya mein, main ek akeli ladli bachi nahi hoon aap ki ke aap jab dekho mujhe padishan karne ne liye koi na koi tareeka dhond lete, aur abhi aise kar rahe ho" saying that she looked at Maan again and seeing him twriling around all fumbling she looks up again fumming in anger and says "haye Baba ji, ye tu pure tali ho kar aye hai, aab main aise main kya karo" Geet said as she looked up and then back at Maan and the next moment she came running to him seeing him fall but stopped a few feet away from him as she heard him say "Mukti, I am Maan Prem went to Geet" Maan said while Geet gave him a confused expression thinking why is he calling her Mukti and when did Prem came to her. "Nahi don't take it wrong he just went to talk abt something, anyway I am here to say that plz don't be angry with Prem as I was the one to force him to drink so much, actually Geet ne mana kiya huwa tha mujhe pee ne se and when I got the chance to drink I decided to drink lots and in that I made Prem drink more" saying that he was turning to go when he bumped into the nearby desk when he heard Geet voice saying "Maan sambhal ke" Maan stopped and turned gulping hard and praying to her baba ji and said "Geet main ne wo..." he walked toward her fumbling and lost his balance and just as he was abt to fall Geet came forward and held him and made him stand up. "Geet" Maan whispered and a shiver ran down her spine as his lips touched the bare nape of her neck. Maan slowly moved away from her and came facing her cupping her face in his hand & stared at her lovingly as if he is seeing her after ages, as if he is seeing something that he had never seen before. He moved slowly closed to her so close that his breath fanned her lips causing her to close her eyes and the next moment Maan placed his lips on her and her hold on him tighten as she moaned "Maan" in pure pleasure, but when she felt his hold on her tighten she came back in her sense and pushed him fuming in anger while Maan made a puppy face pouting at her and tried saying "Geet wo" but Geet held her hand in front and said sternly "Don't even think about that"

"sachi maine kuch nahi kiya"

Yeah right, u are not at all at fault, here u are fully drunk and ur still saying u did nothing hai na" Geet said in full anger.

Maan- Maine use bola tha'

"Maan u are not a small baby" Geet snapped back at him

"sorry na" Maan said holding his ears, but Geet just turns away showing her back to him. "shona suno na, jaan suno tu, mishty ek bar tu sun lo na, dekho tum ne promise kiya tha na"

"main ne koi promise nahi ki, when u can't keep ur promise I don't either" Geet replied, and that was it Maan held Geet by her arm and turned her facing him cupped her face in his hand and showed her his puppy face and mumbled "sorry sweetheart" saying that he starts placing soft kisses all over his face while Geet stood with her hands up all shocked making faces with the smell of the drink, "Maan u stink, get away from me" Geet said as she tried to shove him off of her, more over with the feelings he was creating within her that she had never know was their and all she wanted to do was hold him in her embrace, but then she couldn't have done that so she thought its better to push him away from her now batter than regretting later on but Maan thought she is still angry which she was partially and continued to kiss her, leaving no other option Geet places her hand on his chest and pushes him with all her force and in that she tore off his kurta, Maan looks at his kurta and then at Geet with her hands up holding his torn kurta piece. "U tore my kurta" Maan whined to which Geet said "Haan phadi kya kar loge aap, jo mana karti ho karne ke liye wo tu aap maze le...le kar ke karte ho"

"Geeet" Maan says gritting his teeth.

"dekho shor mat karo, yeh hamara ghar nahi hai, aur nahi main aap ki biwi hoon ke aap mujh pe aise shout karo ge" hearing that Maan smirks at her and says "agar biwi hoti tu main shout kar sakta hoon"

"don't change the topic" Geet said giving him glares.

Maan- main thodi topic change kar raha, its u, waise bolo na biwi hoti tu kar sakta main

"Haan agar biwi hoti tu, par main aap ki biwi nahi hoon and that makes it more valid for me to throw u out of this room"

"Matlab" and the next moment came a pillow and a blanket thrown his way and he falls down on the floor with a thud as he couldn't balance himself with his drunk state

"take this pillow & blanket and go out of this room, mujhe apne room main sharbi nahi chiye" Geet said, while Maan gets up rubbing his back and comes to her angrily and raises his hand and Geet turn her face scared closing her eyes waiting to feel that sting sensation of the slap but nothing like that happened and she opened her eyes to see struggling with his kurta to take it off and then in a jerk pulls out his torn kurti while Geet gasps and quickly closes her eyes again saying "ye kya kar rahe ho aap Maan, yeha koi picture nahi ban rahi ke aap strip kar rahe ho" Maan didn't say anything instead he held her arm and in a jerk pulled her toward him and tries saying sternly but couldn't as the drunk was making him fumble with his words but still puts it on go saying "main sharabi hoon" Geet nods in yeas but then quickly nodes in No as his holds around her tighten, pulling her closer. "Maan let go of me, Main aap se naraz hoon"

Maan makes a baby face at her and says "par Mama tu itne main Janti hai jab Dad unhe aise mana te hai after She gets angry"

"hum Uncle aunty nahi hai Maan" Geet snaps out of his hold and turn her back to him, with each time him saying things that a couple does was making her somewhere feel that he was hinting toward their so called marriage and she knew that, she can never agree to that marriage, then why is he saying things like this. It was making her somewhere guilty to have him feel like saying those things, but then she had clearly said it to him that she doesn't accept their so called then why is he even in his drunk state saying all and making her feel like a culprit in her own eyes.

Maan came slowly toward her and just as Geet sensed his closeness she moves few step ahead of him sternly saying "mere kareeb mat ana" but Maan continued to come close as this was when he saw her dress, actually to think of it he never realized what she was wearing till now when she stood facing her back to him reveling wat kind of dress she was making and he completely lost himself in her beauty and the white skin that was glowing under the lights were making him go all wet as all he could of was his lips on her bare skin, but then the net over-nighty was blocking his view and he just wanted to ripped tat off of her and trail his lips on those skin.

"Maaan" Geet moaned as she felt his hand slowly slipping around her waist and then taking her in his embrace as his lips touched and trailed on the nape of her neck softly kissing, while his hand played on her waist trying to find the string of the night once he found it in tug opens it making her nighty loosely, then very slowly run his finger on her arm and slowly slides the nighty off of her shoulder as he placed feather like kisses baring her skin to his lustful lips that were burning to taste her.

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Edited by CrazzyBusy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Awsome update
Maan is fully drunk
Nd behaving soo cutely
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Maan babu
your wife is different from other wives
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
was this a dream ya reality

i mean did maan really do all tat
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Amazing update loved it
Maan is so cutiee hope he not do anything which they regret latter specially maan become guilty

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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Lovely update maan was so cute hope he doesnt cross the limit bcause geet has not accepted hi m
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
awesome loved it
loved the maan and geet convo
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Wow..superb update
Maan was so cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 27 - nice update...oh...maan is so scared of geet and refused to drink on prem's insistant...but at the end he was caught by geet...ab kya hoga maan ka...
want more maaneet moments

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