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Ash1991 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update...
Geet vented out all emotions trapped in her...
Loved the update...
Maan fell fr geet...
Waiting fr next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful part.. waiting for the next...
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 15--Dil kyun ye mera shor kare...
(My dear readers,in the previous part,you have misunderstood a little,the part of MAAN's MONOLOGUE was totally from a different time,in future...it was NOT from the same day...)
Nature sometimes has weird ways...THAT DAY,i took her to that lake only to fulfill my promise & mark the end of my task...bt i didn't know that ... that will be the beginning of my heart's ruin. That day, I didn't know that i was celebrating my own destruction..
Maan smiled sadly...
I don't know why,bt THAT DAY...maybe to alarm me,Mother Nature had responded to her that way...
I wish Geet...I Wish...that i could get the signal & run away from you as soon as possible ...as far as possible...
Bt i didn't...
Instead,everyday,every hour,every minute,every second...i let my self be destroyed,without knowing...

Let my heart be captured like an innocent child...

Let fate destroy me in such a way that i forgot to smile again...

It wouldn't have happened,only if ...

I Had run away from you...

Only if i have run away before you could capture my heart ...


...
...

Geet...I ...

(Till this part,it was maan's monologue from future,i am specially telling you this cause from now on,there will be many times like this)
****
Sasha,don't you think that maan sir being a little too good with this girl Geet?
Are sirf maan sir nahi,all teachers looove her,ladli student hai sabki.. waise humne maan sir aur geet ki frnds ka picha kyun kiya tha?
Didn't you see stupid! He took her to a special place,he is treating her extra special.
Ha..wo to hai,& more than that,did you see...!! Geet screamed!!! Not only that...SHe threw Tantrums!!!
Yeah,so what's big in that ? Nt said nonchalantly.
Are you joking!!! You mean you don't know!! Geet NEVER screams, NEVER EVER she threw tantrums!!!
She won't throw tantrums before all to keep her good girl image.
NO,EVEN ALONE<i many times tried to make her mad ,scream or something,bt it was always her who said sorry!
WHAT??
Yes...that's why i was so shocked when i saw her like that.
You mean , ...hmmm...this seems interesting..! Nt said with a smirk
There is no way that a person NEVEr loses her mind,& if she is like that...then our goody two-shoes Ms. Geet is hiding something.
Now it will be fun to expose her truths,Nt thought smirking...

Lets start from the reason of maan sir's extra special attention to her.
Sasha didn't understand anything,bt followed her anyway.

****
Maan didn't understand what he was feeling. Something strange,something restless,sometimes happy,sometimes confused. But one thing for sure,his mind was replaying that scene again & again where geet had thanked maan.

Ye ladki bhi na!! Maan shook his head.
Isme thank you bolne wali kya baat thi! Maine to sirf use ek place dikhaya! Sach mein.. ye ladki thodi pagal hai!
It was new for him in many ways...the women in his life..as inconsistent & insensitive they were,always ONLY thanked him when received a gifts... expensive ones.
This girl...why did she thanked me? It bothered him so much that she had thanked him.
She didn't even know that i helped her,so what the need for her to thank me for showing a damn place?!! That too only according to promise!

& what's with THAT echo!! I mean ,not that i can blame her for calling me by my name directly! She did respectfully called me maan sir like everyone does...bt did that echo had to be so weird!!! Bloody Hell!! She called me Maan sir,bt how in hell did it turn into maan!!
****
They were back from picnic & it was weekend. And as it was because of maan Suraj could accept geet,he really wanted to thank him . Moreover,a few days before reconciliation with his daughter,it was her birthday,he wanted to celebrate it. No...he wanted to celebrate all her missed birthdays...
Geet,lets call your friends for dinner.
Sacchi papa.
Aur papa mere friends? Brij,geet's little brother asked.
Ha beta,apke bhi friends.
YEA!! it will be lots of fun! Hai na mamma ...Brij turned & asked rina.
Rina only nodded,though she didn't want anything to do with both of them.

Suraj had warned her,that if she wanted to live the way she was living till now,she HAS TO try to be a good mother to both of them,& if she can't..then she could make herself useful by keeping quiet & not creating problem for the kids.
of course she chose the second option,she chose to remain totally unrelated when it concerned the kids. She was actually more than relieved. Now the only thing she was concerned with was the bank balance which would pay all her bills while she "enjoyed" her life.

Di hum room decorate kaise kare?
Room kyun?
Are di,app bhi na,pehli baar mere frnds hamare ghar aa rahe hai na...
Tum dono kya khusurphusur kar rahe ho? Suraj asked in mock stern voice.
Both kids smiled sheepishly . kuch nahi papa.
Maine kaha tha na..ki dinner karte waqt koi kuch nahi bolega.
papa...Both Brijj & Geet wined making baby face.
Suraj smiled,accha accha,you can talk all you want,but you have to tell me what you are talking about.
Wo papa di aur main na rooms decorate karne ki baat kar rahe hai.
Accha,you can...are geet yaad aaya,why don't you invite that old frnd of yours?
Old frnd?
Ha,wo tumhare sir ke dadi. She has invited you in her house a lot of times. It would look bad if we don't invite them. & also,invite ur sir too. He has helped us a lot!

Accha.
YUCK!! DOSTO KE BIRTHDAY PArTY MeiN EK SIr KO!!!
Brij!! Suraj said in a warning tone.
Sorry papa,bt how can we enjoy if a sir glares at us all the time.
Brij,sun na,Geet said..this sir is VERY COOL!! He will infact even play with us.
I don't believe it. Kaun se sir?
Maan sir.
WHAT!! If it is him then please invite him!! It will be a lot of fun!.
Tu janta hai maan sir ko? Geet asked a little surprised.
Yeah,he took our class twice,while our teacher was absent. he is the coolest sir!!!
Ok then it's settled.This sunday ,PARTY!!!
****
Dadi was ecstatic to know about this invitation,bt maan grimaced.
Ye accha nahi lagega dadi...app jaiye.
Kyun?
Cause i am the one & only sir she has invited. & it's not that i am her home tutor so she is inviting me in her late birthday party.
Come on maan...waise bhi,you are more than a tutor to her.
Matlab? Maan's voice became stern.
Are matlab hai you are not actually her teacher..are you?? You are a mock teacher who has come to help her & in return enjoying ur break & ur dream.
So...???Maan asked puzzled.
Are baba so you are her life saver. Not only teacher.
Oh...maan mumbled.. So dadi meant that! But why the hell at first i thought that dadi meant that i was her ...?? Kya ho gaya hai mujhe!! Why i am thinking only negative things!!! He thought grimly.

No dadi,still you go , I will drop you & pick you.
Maan Don't be like this,specially when this invitation came from the girl's father whom you helped so much.
You mean Mr Suraj!!
Yes . He called me & profusely thanked me & you & told that he wanted to thank you so he invited you. Now don't break his heart.
Ok...
Don't worry. You won't be alone there,Sameera & Adi & principle are also invited.
Maan siged a relief. It was what he wanted to hear . He didn't realized exactly from when being with geet made him so uneasy,so restless- so much so,that he couldn't look at her in her eyes. He didn't want to spend time with her for this restlessness. & yet he found himself waiting for the same thing every time. He didn't understand this...didn't understand at all...
Precap- Realization [UPDATING TOMORROW] (Sorry no maaneet scene in this chapter. But this chapter was needed to show the changes & ur unasked questions like how rina is reacting to this &...etc.. But I promise you next chapter will be filled with it.From the next chapter things would speed up😃)

Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
And she is back
By she I mean you
Hmm thought that dialogue seemed bit weird
And now we know why
But even then its bit sad
What happened that was this bad
That he is saying this
Well we will know soon
And then well am sure other mysteries shall be cleared
He didn't get it then
But will do soon
But crap that witch man
She saw them
And now she won't rest till she gets geet secret out
And that will be bad
Oh man what will happen
Please tell me witches won't be in her party
As it is one witch is there that Rina
Don't need more for her birthday at least
Babaji hope her birthday goes well
With maan realisation
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update...👏...beautifully written...👍🏼...loved it...❤️❤️...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice one
maan is thinking about geet
y her thoughts r clouding him
now he got a reason to see her
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Posted: 11 years ago
datz awesome
continue soon
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update maan start to think about geet waiting 4 next
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Posted: 11 years ago
wats with maan

why did he say like this

nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
still confused abt maan's selftalk...y he sain he destroyed n lost his smile!!!!!!!!!
NT n sasha 😡 ye dono geet ko akela kyun nahi chodte...
geet's belated bday party ...
maan n dadi invited...
geet to maan k dilo dimag pe chayi hui hai lag raha hai...

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