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Posted: 12 years ago


Chapter 7- Hatred

So how are my buddies?? Maan asked the students smiling.
Good sir!! they all practically screamed together,well u can't blame them..they were only excited to get a friendly & NOT khadus teacher!! Moreover he teaches his subjects with so much fun that the subjects didn't seemed boring anymore..studying was fun with him!!
Well then ...today we will have some more fun...today is....
What sir!! now they were more excited,while our geet lost track seeing the student this much hyped up for the first time...
well, u guys will give the weekly exam ..remember ,i told u. the first day i came ...
Oh nooo...!!!
are don't panic yaar, it will be fun, trust me..
exam aur fun!! one of the student said.
are ,why are u panicking, it's just to check that if u guys have understood my bakbak..
the students laughed...ok sir
..accha now tell me who is ur first girl all teachers & even the principle going gaga about??Ofcourse he knew who she was, bt he needed to see, what kind of girl she was...down to earth or flaunting,proud & arrogant..
She is geet sir...
geet pls stand up.
geet stood up with her head down as if she has done any crime.
so geet , ready for the test??
sir, wo,i was ill for two days & today only i came to school. So i missed ur classes. I am sorry.
don't worry geet, i only took revision of the previous chapters as i just came few days ago..u have read them ,right?
she nodded positively.
Bt sir, i haven't prepared for the exam.
sasha hated the way geet ONCE AGAIN was being the center of attention...so she interrupted...
are geet, why are u being so stubborn/ Sir is taking exam & u are so ARROGANT that u are negating SIR!!
nn..na..nahi! Aisa nahi hai...she cried out softly,still weak from the fever.
To main joot bol rahi hu kya??Dekha sir,ye aisi hi hai,class me first hai isiliye wo sahi aur hum sab galat.
is sasha ki bacchi ko to aj...pinki & yash thought...
STOP IT.maan glared at sasha.She instantly shut her mouth up knowing that she crossed her own limits in order to make geet down.
Maan looked at geet..
geet ,he said softly, it's not like u have to get full marks..write what u can, this way i can understand what i need to teach u guys.
ok sir...

The exam started, bt not in the typical way...everyone was handed a sheet full of PUZZLES!!!! & they have to give the answers in one word...!!

it was really ,unexpectedly fun,the description was given & they had to find the thing...

the pages were checked immediately,the students were returning to their benches happily...
Geet HAnda..
Y..yes sir.
i never expected this from u. Maan said with a straight face.
Sasha smirked...well she was sure that she is the one with highest score,she was sure that she has defeated geet THIS TIME- this certainly raised her bar infront of her classmates...afterall, she got 90 out of 100
Geet was at verge of breaking down..ANOTHER FAILURE, mom will hate me now,she thought. It was really ironic that the girl had these thoughts,when her mom already loathed her. Bt sadly all the little girl's thoughts were for her mom only,like it was her life's one & only ambition- how to make mommy love me...
Are geet U got 100 out of 100!
Kya?
yes ,i thought would perform ok for a student who was ill & absent,bt now i understand why all teachers praise u...maan was intendedly saying all these flattering lines only to see how to she reacts, if she reacts bitchy or not- though he was praising her to test her, the marks she gained was purely from her hardwork...
bt looking at geet's expression his heart was terrified ,though he maintained to keep a calm straight face.

She was staring at her paper,as if she could not believe it..as if she was awestruck,the expression on her eyes said...as if ,it was the one moment she was waiting for with her life, she kept looking at the paper like a child gets fascinated with something & looks at that thing forever ...like she was enchanted,spell bounded...

Geet,...geet...GEET!
Huh,w..wo main,thank u sir...she gave a teary sweet innocent smile, which he saw for the first time,actually that was the first time he saw her smile.

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Mamma,mamma....she was running with all her might ...towards her mom,only to be pushed away harshly...she didn't mind.
Mamma i got 100 on 100,see...she excitedly tried to show her paper to her mommy.
she shoved it aside,to kya karu main!! nachu?? dekhti nahi, busy hu??
she said as popped in some more popcorn in her mouth & changed the channel with remote.
Bt mamma i got 100 on 100, just like u wanted.
she scoffed,huh! just like i wanted!! agar main jo chahti wo hota tu ye yaha nahi hoti....she mumbled.
mamma kuch kaha apne.
Ha u deserve a prize...go ,fetch me that box.
Geet came with the box & gave it to her mom.
Rina took out a chocolate from the box & gave it to geet.
Thank u mamma...she was brimming with happiness,
now go & do the chores pls , mamma is feeling very sick,she said in a sickly sweet voice.
Avhi karti hu mamma,she went away practically flying!
Aj mera sabse accha din hai, geet thought happily, bt didn't see how her mothers face twisted badly behind her back,as if rina was seeing some disgusting creature.

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mom,my dog wants chocolates i am taking from this box.Brij said.
NO!! U MUSTN'T Give tomy (brij's dog) anything from that box, it's not good for his health.
ok,bt let me see atleast.Kya chupati ho yaha ki mujhe chune nahi deti!
Brij took out a chocolate from that SAME box...he looked at the expiry date.
EWWW, it says the date was over at 2011, now it's 2013!!
He left it & went to play...

Precap- Blossoming of the frozen heart



Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update maan taking test shasha bi... good maan scold her geet 100 rina giving her expired date chocklate me thinking to give her expire date poison bi... she didn't deserve to be a mother



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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome udapte
all students r liking maan aur like kyu na kare woh hai hi itna aacha
nd that sasha uska kuch nahi ho sakta
i m feeling sad for geet she will never think about her
all she want is her mom loves her
but her mom is such a idiot that she is ignoring a gem
but kya kar sakte hai yeh gem sirf maan ki kismat me hai toh wohi usse pehchaan paayega
waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor geet loved the update waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
he really is a good teacher right
the way he has been able to bond with his student
i like how they respond to him
and that he made learning more fun for them
well am glad geet did so well
i cant believ her mother
she didnt but she did right that witch sorry but have to call her that the least
what man there is no point saying anything about that woman
because once i start i wont be able to stop
but guess have to say some things for sure
how could she do that
poor girl does it all for her only
to make her happy and what does that woman do nothing
and how can ya hate such sweet girl man
its just not possible unless of course you are a monster or a beast
even they would melt seeing her innocence and cuteness
awww maan was trying to test her
and what he found was that she doesnt have any arrogance in her
that she is sweet cute and innocent child
though what she is facing is just horrible
and its all her mothers fault but who is paying for this
no one but that poor child
cheers for pm
hope your headache is better
Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
just hate geets mom...actualy she is not even worth calling a women let alome mother😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part but how can a mother do this to her
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Posted: 12 years ago
wat a mother yaar

atleast its better tat she kills geet than doing all this
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update :-)
Maan is very nice teacher...:-) aise teachers kaha milte hai...
Tat rina is a bitch...
Ohh... I want to kill her...
Aise koi kaise kar sakta hai yar... *****
Seriously.. How can she... Arrgg...
Hate her...
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Posted: 12 years ago

yuck yaar!!!!! this woman is d worst creature on this earth

she is giving that dog's chocolate to geet which r already expired in yr 2000!!!!!!!!!!!

totally shocking. how can a woman behave with her own child like this????

she doesn't deserve to call a woman even

hate her to d core!!!!!!!

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