maneet with difference #2new poem thread link added on pg 1

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#841

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

sach me geet kab samjhegi...
maan ki punishment bohut zyada ho gayi...

i mhave an intution that Geet loves Maan silently and will be sati after him

Edited by rashmivaish - 12 years ago

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Priya21

@priya_21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#842

I loved about sati poem.
Haye maan ke dil ka haal byaan krti h.

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Rajshree12

@Rajshree12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#843

Poem 49
OMG di...the poem was ssooo funny..
It was very cutelyyy written..
Loved the way u expressed Maan's pov in hillarious way...
Poem 50 & 51..
Both r awesome...& last but the best poem no 52..
Muah di..i just love the way u wrote the poem..
It was really heart touching..
We could experience w was ging in Maan's mind after his terrible mistake of not accepting those vows,not believing in them & blaming his Geet without any fault of hers...

Edited by Rajshree12 - 12 years ago

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#844

poem on pg 72

awesome yarr nishu...loved it alot

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#845

pg 96

all are Amazing..loved it

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MonaSWrites

@MonaSWrites

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#846

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem 53

its for sati
ff by muskan

tere intezar main
zindagi dhal gayi

khilli hui dhoop main ,
aayi thi jo chaav !
woh bhi
raat hote hote ,
andheere maian badal gayi

khushiyaan
toh thi ,
apni bhi jhooli main !
bas yeh kismat hi
apna khel kuch is tarah se khel gayi !

saath tere hokar bhi ,
main tanha rah gaya !
sab pahchaante hai
mujhe ,
par jo jaane mujhe
jisse is dil ne chaaha
uska hi mujhe jaanana baki rah gaya

saath chal to rahe hai hum
par phir bhi
tera mere paas aana baaki rah gaya