maneet with difference #2new poem thread link added on pg 1

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drrose31

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

nice works .,..

i really liked the poems ...

though i haven't read the FFs so couldn't get that feeling ...

but anyways i love poetry ...

through your poems am getting ideas abt the ffs

thanks for pm dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria
dear u forget me me sad 😭me ria ur friend

jyaada senti nahi hona, me just joking.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: gargi12
bandhan...
Awesome nish
Sacchi mei yr stry pta ho to poem ka maza aata hai!!!!!
Loved these lines
dekhta hai ussme us chupe hue bachpan ko
jisse ab bhi kahi ,
jindagi jeene ki aas hai !
So nyc yr
Loved it alottt

thaxxx alot dear

tune yeh ff read karna start kar diya😕

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Posted: 12 years ago

#294

@ sona.dona and tia

kaha ho tum sab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

round lagati rahti hoon
par jab doosron ke comments padhti hoon to apna stupid sa comment dene ki himmat hi nahin juta paati😭

but I can say i found poem no 42 quite nice
bccause it is the simplest one

arrre yaar

aise baat mat kar

aap aaye

jo dil main hai kah jaaye

hum apko dekh kar hi khush hoge

woh shabd to bas

khushi jyada karte hai

asli khushi to ap laate hai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: gargi12
sati2
Puch hi mt...
Khatarnaak hai ye poem splly lst stanza
Yr sacchi me in real geet hoti to aaj khud k hi pyar mein pad jati!!!
"sirf duniya kya
woh khuda ,
jisne hai hame banaya ,
ab saath hame dekh kar
usse bhi
khud pe hai fackr(proud) aaya yeh teri payal ki
cham cham ,
kya yeh khanak ghungruoo main ,
hamessha se thi !
yah aaj tune
chu liya inhe , is liye yeh bhi bahak gaye hai !
chamak teri mukhde(face) ki dekh kar
dekh
suraj taare bhi chip gaye hai
itni hasi hai tu
ke tujhe ik baar dekhne ko saaye bhi ruk gaye hai"

Mere pss shabd nhi hai mere feelin ko btane k lie,coz kuch bhi likhu mere shabd iss poem k samne kuch nhi honge.,.. Too gud yr...really loved it
Aaj phir se geet n maan se pyar hogya mujhe

thanxxx alot dear

you made my day

sachi

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Rashmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

arrre yaar
aise baat mat kar

aap aaye
jo dil main hai kah jaaye
hum apko dekh kar hi khush hoge
woh shabd to bas
khushi jyada karte hai
asli khushi to ap laate hai

Al right Nishu will keep in mind next time

bau stupid se comment par hasna mat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

Al right Nishu will keep in mind next time
bau stupid se comment par hasna mat

aap aa jaana

baat ka lena

mujh e has lena

poem pa comment mat kana

like se kaam chala lena

par aap yaha aa jana

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sona rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#299

main agayai

Nishuuu 🤗🤗

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Rashmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

arrre yaar
aise baat mat kar

aap aaye
jo dil main hai kah jaaye
hum apko dekh kar hi khush hoge
woh shabd to bas
khushi jyada karte hai
asli khushi to ap laate hai

done Nishu

Thanks for excepting me as I m

I have updated my next part of Dulhan wahi...

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