maneet with difference #2new poem thread link added on pg 1 - Page 28

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

nahi tho kab ka promotion mil jathi na

poem 44

[ poem 44]

" unke bhikare hue sapno ke
chott yu lAGI mujhe
ke dekha jab aaiyna
to aayina bhi mujhe dekh kar
mujhe pahchanne se mukar gaya"

The best part of the poetry.Kaash hum bhi shaayar hote toh kuch ussi andaaz me jawab dete.
But no worries,you know I love your work.

Generally each part of the story has ability to make me too much emotional but p-25,wrote a new story of pain and your poetry adding to the emotions like"Sone pe Suhaga"

Even if I read the poety without connecting to any story,yet the pain is visible.How easily you play with words.

Great.

Hello Mrs.Nishu ji,jst read ur name,cute hai.
I m Sampa,minus the 'h' he he 😃

Each of them were amazing poems.Muskan di ka sati's poems was amazing.i couldn't stop smiling.superbbb.nd 4 My teacher both were too gud.if to tell Maan's side it was so emotional.love all of them .gud job dear

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

[ poem 44]

" unke bhikare hue sapno ke
chott yu lAGI mujhe
ke dekha jab aaiyna
to aayina bhi mujhe dekh kar
mujhe pahchanne se mukar gaya"

The best part of the poetry.Kaash hum bhi shaayar hote toh kuch ussi andaaz me jawab dete.
But no worries,you know I love your work.

Generally each part of the story has ability to make me too much emotional but p-25,wrote a new story of pain and your poetry adding to the emotions like"Sone pe Suhaga"

Even if I read the poety without connecting to any story,yet the pain is visible.How easily you play with words.

Great.

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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thxxx alot dear

waise i like

first few lines more😆😆

Kavi wali soch hai kuch alag toh hogi hi na 😳

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Hello Mrs.Nishu ji,jst read ur name,cute hai.
I m Sampa,minus the 'h' he he 😃

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Kavi wali soch hai kuch alag toh hogi hi na 😳

Nishuuu🤗🤗🤗