maneet with difference #2new poem thread link added on pg 1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: sona-rai
Nishuuu🤗🤗🤗
30/40 mins Tukroon main miltay hain yar😭

tere bhai ki toh😉

bacche ki jan lega kya😡

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria
hi

hello deaer

what is your good name

i can't able to remember it

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Hi Nishui I m again here

I want to tellyou that poetry is not my cup of tea

padh kar hi mera head spin ho jata hai to technical comments ki to mujhse hope hi mat rakhna

but yes

you are doing a very good job here

sabse alag,sabse nirala

hat's off to you

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: rashmivaish
Hi Nishui I m again here
I want to tellyou that poetry is not my cup of tea
padh kar hi mera head spin ho jata hai to technical comments ki to mujhse hope hi mat rakhna
but yes
you are doing a very good job here
sabse alag,sabse nirala
hat's off to you

stilll

kabhi kabhi

yaha round lagaa diya karoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: DantaDeepa
wow wow
awesum
superb
mindblowing
amazing
fantastic
lovely poems dear

😕

wht is that😲

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Dei_Gratia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

bandhan...
Awesome nish
Sacchi mei yr stry pta ho to poem ka maza aata hai!!!!!
Loved these lines
dekhta hai ussme us chupe hue bachpan ko
jisse ab bhi kahi ,
jindagi jeene ki aas hai !
So nyc yr
Loved it alottt

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Dei_Gratia

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

sati
Loved this
Startin of the poem
chalo milke , kahi se , ek nayi shuruat kare ! rah gayi , jo adhuri , puri har woh ek baat kare !

Really vry vry nyc

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Dei_Gratia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

sati2
Puch hi mt...
Khatarnaak hai ye poem splly lst stanza
Yr sacchi me in real geet hoti to aaj khud k hi pyar mein pad jati!!!
"sirf duniya kya
woh khuda ,
jisne hai hame banaya ,
ab saath hame dekh kar
usse bhi
khud pe hai fackr(proud) aaya yeh teri payal ki
cham cham ,
kya yeh khanak ghungruoo main ,
hamessha se thi !
yah aaj tune
chu liya inhe , is liye yeh bhi bahak gaye hai !
chamak teri mukhde(face) ki dekh kar
dekh
suraj taare bhi chip gaye hai
itni hasi hai tu
ke tujhe ik baar dekhne ko saaye bhi ruk gaye hai"

Mere pss shabd nhi hai mere feelin ko btane k lie,coz kuch bhi likhu mere shabd iss poem k samne kuch nhi honge.,.. Too gud yr...really loved it
Aaj phir se geet n maan se pyar hogya mujhe