maneet with difference #2new poem thread link added on pg 1 - Page 23

Originally posted by: maaniqra

suraj taare bhi chip gaye hai

itni hasi hai tu

ke tujhe ik baar dekhne ko

saaye bhi ruk gaye hai
ummmahhh awesomeee

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its for guzaarish new ff by sadlife
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Justifying the name"Guzaarish"
The poety completely showcases Maan's feelings beautifully.Actually I love Maan so much in the story.Tho I've read only three parts but Maan is so emotinal with Brownie and Rabby.Love him and that makes me love the poetry all the more.

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

[ poem
34
its for guzaarish new ff by sadlife
19]

Justifying the name"Guzaarish"
The poety completely showcases Maan's feelings beautifully.Actually I love Maan so much in the story.Tho I've read only three parts but Maan is so emotinal with Brownie and Rabby.Love him and that makes me love the poetry all the more.

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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thxxx dear

we have experince

live in hell happliy some time😆

Tabhi toh I love mothers so much but that doesnt mean I love my daddy less.Daddies are super heroes.

And yes I'll be waiting for more funny poetries.

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

oops

jeevana

uska f read karna tha

main bhul gayi

i promised her

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Tabhi toh I love mothers so much but that doesnt mean I love my daddy less.Daddies are super heroes.

And yes I'll be waiting for more funny poetries.

[ ESCORT B.
..TANYA.K...]

Its written when Geet left Maan and the kids to contemplate her stand for their relationship.

I loved the end part more when she comes back and Maan is so elated and ready to forget eveything else.

Overwhelmin.

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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yes dear

every one love daddy more than mummy

(say it loud or not)

but its also true

we hate husband

most of the time

without reason😆

Dont know about husbands.Abhi experience nahi hai.

Abhi hum katar mein hain.

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

oh really ... read to face her anger...

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Dont know about husbands.Abhi experience nahi hai.

Abhi hum katar mein hain.