maneet with difference #2new poem thread link added on pg 1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: maaniqra
suraj taare bhi chip gaye hai
itni hasi hai tu
ke tujhe ik baar dekhne ko
saaye bhi ruk gaye hai
ummmahhh awesomeee

thaxxx dear

wow you comment our line this time

me going to faint

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

[ poem
34
its for guzaarish new ff by sadlife
19]

Justifying the name"Guzaarish"
The poety completely showcases Maan's feelings beautifully.Actually I love Maan so much in the story.Tho I've read only three parts but Maan is so emotinal with Brownie and Rabby.Love him and that makes me love the poetry all the more.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39
[ poem
34
its for guzaarish new ff by sadlife
19]

Justifying the name"Guzaarish"
The poety completely showcases Maan's feelings beautifully.Actually I love Maan so much in the story.Tho I've read only three parts but Maan is so emotinal with Brownie and Rabby.Love him and that makes me love the poetry all the more.

we all loved him dear

every time every where😉

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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thxxx dear

we have experince
live in hell happliy some time😆

Tabhi toh I love mothers so much but that doesnt mean I love my daddy less.Daddies are super heroes.

And yes I'll be waiting for more funny poetries.

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JeevanaP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

oops

jeevana

uska f read karna tha

main bhul gayi

i promised her

oh really ... read to face her anger...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Tabhi toh I love mothers so much but that doesnt mean I love my daddy less.Daddies are super heroes.

And yes I'll be waiting for more funny poetries.

yes dear

every one love daddy more than mummy

(say it loud or not)

but its also true

we hate husband

most of the time

without reason😆

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

[ ESCORT B.
..TANYA.K...]

Its written when Geet left Maan and the kids to contemplate her stand for their relationship.

I loved the end part more when she comes back and Maan is so elated and ready to forget eveything else.

Overwhelmin.

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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yes dear
every one love daddy more than mummy
(say it loud or not)

but its also true
we hate husband
most of the time
without reason😆

Dont know about husbands.Abhi experience nahi hai.

Abhi hum katar mein hain.