maneet with difference #2new poem thread link added on pg 1 - Page 25

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

[POEM NO 37
ITS FOR : KHUMAARI 2 BY OsheenD
Gr8]

" haan ,
haan!
tu woh ,aakhiri dua hai meri
jo maine kabhi maangi hi nahi
par ho jaaye woh puri ab
yeh raah ,
ab yeh dil ,
har pal dekh raha hai !"



Khumaari is one of my favorite FFs.I jst love this haunted ,creepy feeling in fiction.And your poetry so aptly describes the love,the feeling which one so desparately wants to deny but it seeps in your veins like serpant's toxin and travel thru your whole system until it reaches your heart and engulfs it in its charm.And YOU, you jst love it,worship it.

I m gonna copy this poetry of yours in my diary.Dont worry main churaungi nahi,aapke naam se hi apne diary main record rakhungi.I love noting down beautiful poems.

yes dear,after reading this poem,even i feel ,i have done good job .and about copy,you are free y to do chauri dear. read them,write them any thing you want. me more than happy dear. feel really good to know some like them so much to add in their ciollection aur ready to show them to their friends. naam kissi ka bhi ho.poem togh appriciate hogi

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

i tell you.yeh aaj lkal ke bacche.inhe sab pata hai.

You call me bacche!!!!!!


Wowie me jumping in joy.Nobody calls me bacchi,ghar mein eldrer hone ki saza 😕

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Arre MAAN ka dukh ho aur main na mahsus karu,thats not possible.All those parts where Maan ketp talking with Geet's shadow,imagining that she's close to him while she is not,god they tear apart my heart.Aur main fiction padhke ro padhti hu.
Aur ye hamari superb writer rulane mein Maahis.She's fantastic.

yes dear, and at that point where she rite about the ptrait which maan made af his angels with geet took my heart waty. waiting for their meeting and geet reaction after seeing that pic

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

yes dear,after reading this poem,even i feel ,i have done good job .and about copy,you are free y to do chauri dear. read them,write them any thing you want. me more than happy dear. feel really good to know some like them so much to add in their ciollection aur ready to show them to their friends. naam kissi ka bhi ho.poem togh appriciate hogi

Arre aise kaise,Naam toh aapka hi hoga.And when you print your own book tab toh naam dena hi hoga.Hardwork and creativity deserves to be appreciated and that too with the valid name.
I dont know when will u do it but if its possible try to publish your own collection.Pata nahi yeh sab kaam kaise hota hai,par socho kitna achha lagega.Dreamy hai na!!!!!

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

yes dear, and at that point where she rite about the ptrait which maan made af his angels with geet took my heart waty. waiting for their meeting and geet reaction after seeing that pic

Me too waiting for it.

@shampa .you know i m alsoe elder one.so i m able to know how you feell.

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

@shampa .you know i m alsoe elder one.so i m able to know how you feell.

Wow same same,but I dont know ur name!!!!
I know U for quite sm time par aapki kavitaoon mein khokar kabhi naam hi nahi puchha.

Anyways ab puch leti hoon,Aapka shubhnaam?????

Luv ur poems so well u narrate reality in ur Brief lines
So decently u describe inner turmoil of a person
I think words fall short before ur writing skill
Keep it up

awesome poems dear...loved them all...

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Wow same same,but I dont know ur name!!!!
I know U for quite sm time par aapki kavitaoon mein khokar kabhi naam hi nahi puchha.

Anyways ab puch leti hoon,Aapka shubhnaam?????

me nishu and you