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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39
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Its written when Geet left Maan and the kids to contemplate her stand for their relationship.

I loved the end part more when she comes back and Maan is so elated and ready to forget eveything else.

Overwhelmin.

read other one or this ff

you will loved it

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

[ POEM
NNO 36
ITS FOR : LOV FOR YOU BY TICH.MG]

" chod diya tha ,
usse rab se maangna hamne
par phir kyu ,
jab aaj phir
dua maangi maine ,
to phir dil ne
usko haasi ho haasil
yahi awaaz qabool hu"

Kaisa yeh ishq hai
Ajab sa risk hai.
After going thru hell of a life because of the person U loved most,yet paying for his lines.

These lines are above any praise.

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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read other one or this ff
you will loved it

Edited by sweetsampa39 - 12 years ago

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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

lovely poems that go well with the stituations , suited to character's POV

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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enjoy your days dear
but it doesn;t mean

we are not enjoying
we also have our way around😉😆😆

Ha ha hamein sab pata hai. 😉

Thode buddhu sahi hum itne bhi nadaan nahi.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: reachsky2011
I was just joking... re

no dear ,sacchi i also have to read dona ff. woh bhi nahki read kiya.comment bhi nahi kiye. dona for sure going to kill me

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

[POEM NO 37
ITS FOR : KHUMAARI 2 BY OsheenD
Gr8]

" haan ,
haan!
tu woh ,aakhiri dua hai meri
jo maine kabhi maangi hi nahi
par ho jaaye woh puri ab
yeh raah ,
ab yeh dil ,
har pal dekh raha hai !"

Khumaari is one of my favorite FFs.I jst love this haunted ,creepy feeling in fiction.And your poetry so aptly describes the love,the feeling which one so desparately wants to deny but it seeps in your veins like serpant's toxin and travel thru your whole system until it reaches your heart and engulfs it in its charm.And YOU, you jst love it,worship it.

I m gonna copy this poetry of yours in my diary.Dont worry main churaungi nahi,aapke naam se hi apne diary main record rakhungi.I love noting down beautiful poems.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39
[ POEM
NNO 36
ITS FOR : LOV FOR YOU BY TICH.MG]

" chod diya tha ,
usse rab se maangna hamne
par phir kyu ,
jab aaj phir
dua maangi maine ,
to phir dil ne
usko haasi ho haasil
yahi awaaz qabool hu"

Kaisa yeh ishq hai
Ajab sa risk hai.
After going thru hell of a life because of the person U loved most,yet paying for his lines.
yes dearbut
These lines are above any praise.

maan also suffered alot in thiss ff.she got kisds and he,just hate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Ha ha hamein sab pata hai. 😉

Thode buddhu sahi hum itne bhi nadaan nahi.

i tell you.yeh aaj lkal ke bacche.inhe sab pata hai.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
maan also suffered alot in thiss ff.she got kisds and he,just hate

Arre MAAN ka dukh ho aur main na mahsus karu,thats not possible.All those parts where Maan ketp talking with Geet's shadow,imagining that she's close to him while she is not,god they tear apart my heart.Aur main fiction padhke ro padhti hu.
Aur ye hamari superb writer rulane mein Maahis.She's fantastic.