MG (OS): What if... - Page 6

All smiles and no cry...not possible

I should sit with a tissue box next time whenever i read your stories. You really always make me cry buckets. Be it 'Back To You', 'Love From Across' and its Maan's version of OS or now this one. You really know how to make readers feel every damn emotions from your writing and itself is the greatest proof of the amazing talent you have.

very heart wrenching one, moreover it was based on real incident...I had to take breaks to control the tears while reading it..

Its 3:30am here n I am reading this tragic OS n crying badly but phir bhi It is Awesome 👏
Loved it !

i seriously was crying throughout the os my cheeks r still wait.dnt know why ppl run aftr work thn spnding tym with loved ones n whn we realised thn this is too late.true love happnd only with few lucky ones n geet found that lov bt couldnt cherish with her love n maan only longined for her tym .really a heart wrenching lov story n finally maans sudden death shattered everything.life is so cruel at sometimes im just crying mor whn i read geet is pregnant he is far away whn their life most happy news come he couldnt know befor death that geet is pregnant.really sad n take a bow ur writing just makes me speechless

it wz osmmm
I literally cried while reading it ufff
superrr work
well done

How could you!!! How could you do it!!!
Maan... What do I say about him and his love???
Don't we all desire someone- who would love so intensely, so unconditionally, so devotionally.
He loved her in such a magnitude that he tried to remove aall her guilt, all her regrets and even tried to be there and help her in moving on...
Oh the lines in the letter killed my heart "dont remember me daily"

Lovers are often selfish who forever want to stay alive in the memories of their beloved but he wants her to move on...

I fell in love with his love...

Geet... What a poor, stupid girl...
She had it all and she lost it in the race called life... So busy was she to achieve the heights that she lost the heaven of Maan's love.

But is it not what is known as life??In our ambitions and our aspirations, do we not ignore the most precious people of our lives- our parents, our friends and our lifepartners...

It reminds of an old hindi song-
Pyaar keh liye chaar pal kam nahi the,
Kabhi tum nahi the, Kabhi hum nahi the...


I love the silver lining at the end... She found him again, he left his ansh, his nishaan,his essence with her...
With the wind seemingly carrying his joyful whisper
"I am going to be a father Mishty" - this nailed it...How he must have craved for this momemt in his lifetime, how she must have desired with everything in herself to convey this blissful news to him...
I did not know whether to shed tears or smile at this moment... Poor Geet, one can only imagine her dissarray of emotions...


Your writing is enchanting... This story makes you contemplate to take a step back and revaluate and introspect urself.
Hats off to you!!!
The characters make you smile and cry, then cry bitterly and ultimately leave a small sigh of relief...
I love Maan's character from GHSP and despite his flaws; he has loved like no other...
And you wonderful writers make me fall in love with him all over again... He has always loved her... through her fallacies and greatness and thats what makes him so dear... You captured the ver essence of him- his love, which few are capable of doing in such a beautiful, poignant and soul searing manner... Thank you...