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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Tragic but true.
Unfortunately when my Mom was ill, all of us brothers sisters left work or adjusted somehow to be with her in her last days. The only regret I had was that in the bill paying and survival that life is, I could not give her as much time as I wanted to. She must have called me a hundred times to stay with her but my job was unrelenting and I could not. Lived with the regret everyday for a long time but now I am carrying on her work and that gives me some closure to that sorrow.
Very well written. Thanks for this.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
SUPERB.
😭
REALLY IT WAS HEART WRENCHING😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Your words have left me with wet eyes...!!!
This "concept" could not be materialized more perfectly than the way you did it..!!!
Awesome..!!!👏
Indeed a lesson for all...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: yappingduck

ahhh, what a beautiful OS...i have always had a fascination for tragic OS...and the talent of a writer can be easily gauged through their sd OS writing skills...coz sad stuff not only has to emotionally connect with readers but have to make the readers feel sorrow and pain, anguish for the characters..making them go teary eyed...and i must say, i couldnt but fall in love with maan, his love and then that beautiful letter...and that great message , that goes so with this OS, something which is so relevant and makes us realise what are we missing , by going behind success, at the cost of our personal life...

u just made my day with this beautiful OS...a must read for all👏

Thank you darling!
Actually tragedy is easy as well as difficult to write! A two sided sword.
Glad the story connected with you.
Greatest compliment was the fact that you could feel their pain and anguish.
Thanks again.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: dqno1

Tragic but true.

Unfortunately when my Mom was ill, all of us brothers sisters left work or adjusted somehow to be with her in her last days. The only regret I had was that in the bill paying and survival that life is, I could not give her as much time as I wanted to. She must have called me a hundred times to stay with her but my job was unrelenting and I could not. Lived with the regret everyday for a long time but now I am carrying on her work and that gives me some closure to that sorrow.
Very well written. Thanks for this.

Hey!
I wouldn't say I am sorry for your mother, because no amount of sorrow on myside can change or lessen your pain.
But I am happy that she got her loved ones to spend time with in her last days.
Obviously the regret and guilt gnawing later is the most painful.
Glad you havve found your solace and found closure to the pain, carrying forward her work.
Thank you for sharing such a personal account!
Takes a lot of courage.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: lenageorge

SUPERB.

😭
REALLY IT WAS HEART WRENCHING😭

Thank you dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: glitch1110

Your words have left me with wet eyes...!!!

This "concept" could not be materialized more perfectly than the way you did it..!!!
Awesome..!!!👏
Indeed a lesson for all...!!!

Thank you darling!
The story was meant to bring tears to your eyes, and if it did then my write up was succesful!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
phew...u made me cry vry very badly dear...i knew that this is gonna b a sad one, n this one s surely goin to make me cry...still ii cudint stop myself from reading it...very beautiful peice of work...hope God doesnt giv anyone such bad fate
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
If the leads were not maneet then i could've been appreciate this story but my my!! Girl u ra writter nd plz OS tak toh thik hai pari hope u won't write tragic FF...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
beautiful OS ! just couldn't stop my tears ! in this maddening world...running after goals...ambition...family moments...relations are lost ! we keep postponing things...and one day might come...when everything is beyond ones control...fabulous writing...love to read more from you...

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