MG SS- STILL WAITING part 13 pg115(25-6-13) - Page 56

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Hi wat sad story t made be cryed so much I hope Mann know want he done to geet
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Part 11


After composing herself she said in low meek Voice "woh I was hungry, n starving to have ice-cream n mangoes, I saw today everybody having I tried to control myself but my starving increased more soo I went only to eat, I didn't mixed anything in food" n started crying

Present

That day I was feeling disgust on my act geet, due to my sin my baby n u was starving for food, due to me u was starving for a mere ice-cream, n in anger I dragged u, but geet I was not angry on u for eating things, it is was ur home geet, u had ri8 but due to me u was alone, sorry geet for everything sorry.

I was restless that day when u said those lines

"Woh I was hungry, n starving to have ice-cream n mangoes, I saw today everybody having it, I tried to control myself but my starving increased more soo I went only to eat, I didn't mixed anything in food"

Her word rang in his ears, he was feeling suffocated but then her smiling face came near his eye sight, he remb. How was looking soo cute while eating ice-cream n ...

Past

"Sorry, I won't go again, pakka wala promise, I know I broke rule made by u from me, m really sorry, u don't get angry becoz of me, m gng to sleep, then I won't disturb u n all, sorry again maan ji" she said, while wiping her tears but still holding her baby bump. Till then arjun knocked on door, maan opened it n was about to say something when arjun ran toward geet n asked worriedly " geet, bacha are u all ri8" his gaze fall on her hand which was holding her tummy " what happened geet, r u feeling any pain, did I call doc."

"Bhai, arjun bhai, calm down, n m f9 just lil pain, that will be ok till morning, n what are u dng here, go to aniee di she is not well, n if awake will search u, u goo "

"No 1st tell me what u want to eat, I will bring for my sister"

"No go, dii will get scared, n m not hungry, I just went , now go bhai" she said smiling, maan was amused to see her, just a moment before she was crying then innocently saying sorry, n now smiling saying she is not hungry, arjun went as she was forcing him, then she was cribbing to her baba ji as this was also her mood swing which is making her moody, but the real fact was that she was hungry n still wanted to have ice-cream n mangoes

She went to sleep, but was restless n sleep was far away from her eyes, she was pacing from ri8 to left as maan was still working, he was getting disturbed by her movements as her payal was making sound, he moved his head n saw her pacing on bed n murmuring something, he went outside n came with a plates n kept near side table of bed, then smell of food was making her more restless, she woke up with jerk n complained her baba ji "see I m hungry here, n he is eating ice-cream, aesa koi karta h kya, I know he hate me, but y they are doing this all baba ji, I know he loves sam ji, but y he hates me I never got to know this, what mistake I did, I m ready for his every word but baba ji, if we keep a animal too we start loving it, but m human, who doesn't exist for them, did I asked them anything in these months, y they think me soo low baba ji, I never said anything to them, never interfered in their life, their decisions, I have seen their happiness for aniee dii baby, then y not for my baby, he/she also will be part of this family, if they hate me I can understand that, m not capable to be the part, but this baby is their son's baby na then can shower their love on it, I m not asking for me baba ji, i learned to live alone in this home, this family which has no place for geet, I miss u mumma, I miss u I wanted to cry in ur embrace wanted to sleep n never want to get up, but now I cant think that too, the life which is inside is my dream my life n I know that too want maan ji gonna to ask me one day on the place of that condition but baba ji, I have some tint of hope that he will like me, understand my every feelings, but I know that day won't come too in my life,"

she wiped her tears n looked at ice-cream kept at table n made face but her carvings are making her loose her sense n she can't control now, n looked here n there but didn't found maan, so thought to have some bits n keep it on its place, n with theif steps, she grabbed the plate n started having it n when she started she was lost in her world of realising the taste of it, n forgot that she thought to have only some bites n now having all, smiling making sounds but unaware of the pair of eyes looking at her, she had all n then looked at plate with baby face like want more but then her eye looked at maan who was standing near bed with hands crossed at chest, she got scared n conscious that she ate all, now he will get again angry n blast at her, she looked the plate which was empty now.

"Sorry" she murmured slowly, with dipping her head

Maan without saying went near his wardrobe took his night dress n went in washroom to have bath.

Geet was amused with his acts but thought "hmm jarur he didn't want to spoil his mood more" she kept plate n slept n now she was sleepy

After some tym maan came out n slipped in other end of bed.

Present

When u saw me that day I saw again scared eye of ur, I was feeling pain to see u like this geet, but I put a stern face infront of u but felt relieved to see the contended smile on ur lips, the small gint of happiness, which was missing from the day u r here, our baby gave u lots of happiness na geet, but I was not good husband nor father, I was making my baby starve, I still remb.

The day when u was talking endlessly to aniee n saying ur excitement as u was gng for check-up n this tym it was ur sonography as u was 4 month pregnant, but the sadness I saw when, u asked sadly from aniee " dii will maan ji come, today doctor will show the small baby na , the way they showed urs" aniee answered her with same sadness "geet he is busy na, u know na"

She said smiling "yeh dii, I know I was just asking, arjun bhai must be waiting may I go, n u take care of urself"

"Okk bhabhi ji now go" aniee said smiling to light her mood

Past

Arjun n geet went hospital but appointment had some tym soo they were sitting at waiting lounge, geet was looking at every couple with longingly eyes, searching for her love, to be with her as all came with their husband nd some with mothers or mother-in-law, but she don't have any. She cocconed her feelings inside her heart, n was sitting silently when a lady voice broke her terse.

"Hello" said a beautiful lady who was too carrying same like geet

Geet to said in meek voice "hello"

"1st tym" asked the lady while pointing toward her baby bump

Geet nodded, when she continued "mine too, oopss I forgot to say my name, hello m Jennifer grover n u"

"Geet" said meekly

"Hmm geet..?" asked curious jenny

"Hmm geet khurana"

"Hmm so with ur hubby" she asked smiling

Geet looked at arjun then said sadly "no with brother-in -law"

"Ooh" jenny said, but geet said further to avoid her look "he is busy, having meetings" smiling

In between karan came n looked her wifey who is engrossed in talking with some stranger gal

"Hey sweetheart, there is some more tym"

"Hmm ok karan, have a seat" jenny said, while geet again gone lost in her thoughts, to be alone n missing someone as she too wanted maan by her side as all girls, but never said her feelings to anyone, a silent tear escaped from her eyes, which she wiped as arjun was coming.

"Geet, after 3 more" he said

She just nodded her head, while his gaze fall on karan n jenny n he rushed toward them n said excitingly "hey guys, hows u"

Both looked at him with same excitement, where karan hurriedly hugged him n then followed by jenny, as karan don't know that geet is his sister-in-law soo asked curiously " wow man , u too going to become father, congrats bhabhi" before anyone one can say he had said that, then jenny said "u idiot she is not his wife"

"N how u on this earth know this" karan asked

"Jenny is ri8 karan, she is not my wife, she is wife of ur crime partner of school, collage"

"U mean she is maan's wife" asked shocked jenny.

Arjun just nodded his head, but in all geet was looking at all with alien wala face. Then arjun said "geet they are mine n maan's school n collage frnd"

She just smiled n they all engrossed in chit chat as they were meeting after 2 years, n they were also curious to know how geet got married to maan as from collage he was with sameera.

But in all geet was STILL WAITING for her love, her hubby to come n company her in hospital, will her waiting will b over, will maan come for the sake of his child. For the sake of the relation they share of name, she is STILL WAITING

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Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago
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And u updatd dear.
It was nice and emotional. pls update next part soon.
Stil waiting..
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simply superb
sad and emotipnal part
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Originally posted by: Maithly

And u updatd dear.
It was nice and emotional. pls update next part soon.
Stil waiting..



oye abhi toh padha n still waiting v likh dia mumma
yeh sab aapki beti ki jaan le lege 😭
ab 1 ya 2 din bad
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Geet is so naeve and innocent! And maan Pfff dont have words for him

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